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  A Wicked Temptation (1/5)  

94 votes
Author: red rose  Published: 10/23/2007  story views: 17358
 


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Billy looked to the stars, to the full moon hanging above. She sighed, what a come down after a truly wonderful night. She had been to the annual Halloween Festival at the old Glastonbury hall. Goblins drank blood red punch with lofty spirits. Ghouls ate crispy finger foods with Witches. Wizards floated on the dance floor with beautiful deathly visions. A cauldron of colour mixed with the macabre. Fun and laughter immersed with the bizarre. Unnatural foods and toxic drinks mingled with raucous conversation and mystical games.

But the unheavenly night had drawn to a close. Billy was making her solitary way home, through the dark leafy lanes of the English countryside, when her car had suddenly ground to a halt. She was searching the night with her eyes now. Looking for answers of why tonight of all nights and of all places did her car have to give up the ghost. She chuckled at her own silly pun. “Never mind,” she spoke softly to herself, as she walked gracefully back to the car.

As her luminous face, eyes smudged with ash, lips stained in red, scoured the grim lane ahead for her saving grace. “The Recovery Vehicle.” Her dark hair began to hang in limp ringlets down her back. Demons brushed by indifferent to her presence. Echoes of a solitary owl’s calling, summoned the mist to circulate and dance silently around her. Listless bats hung from the withering autumn branches of the thousand year old oak trees.

A wild doe sniffed hungrily at her foot for a moment. Billy bent down to take a closer look. But in vain, as it scurried quickly back into the maze of woodland. She rose back upwards where figures had flickered by. A church stood in the distance wavering, beckoning, in the still night air. The god and goddesses who waited in the light looked past Billy, waiting for the lost souls to make their way to the ethereal gates they guarded.

Billy believed she was meant for the darkness. She wasn’t afraid or worried at all. Just annoyed this had happened now, she was tired from all that ghostly partying.

She looked deep into the woodland surrounding her. Eyes shimmered through the trees with intricate being. Spirits of those long dead walked drearily by. Feathery hands seemed to be reaching out to her. Phantom choruses serenaded her from the dark liquid blue sky above.

The spectre walked silently up behind her, blending with the shadows. A firm, seemingly warm, masculine hand placed itself down on her shoulder. Billy hissed a sharp intake of breath, and then turned around. She wandered slightly, in confusion, looking for the being that had just touched her. Then she glided into the bosom of the forest, a bewitching unknown force beckoning her.

She came across a small brook, with just enough murmur to lull her still further and deeper. Billy seemed to be entranced by the invisible force, driving her ever onwards. The still of the night became intoxicating; the fear became enthralling, as she ventured deep into the heart of the blackness. She was oblivious to the peculiar character of its inhabitants scuttling by. A grey wolf followed solemnly, its golden/yellow eyes never straying far from Billy’s path. His blunt claws creeping ever slowly, silently, through the mass of undergrowth.

Then a strange sight beheld her eyes. She stopped and peered through the thick beech
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thinksexy
Posted: 2009/4/2 14:14  Updated: 2009/4/2 14:14
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 Hey Beautiful!
I'm re reading cuz your work is soooo freakin amazing! Love ya and miss you girl...More than you know...
peachgurl221
Posted: 2008/2/17 16:42  Updated: 2008/2/17 16:42
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 WOW
I have to agree with think the way you describe and detail your storys are amazing!! LOVED IT.
red rose
Posted: 2007/12/12 13:33  Updated: 2007/12/12 13:33
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 Shiena...
Shiena....I guess it depends on a persons perception as to what Erotica really is....I feel anyone can write hot stories or porno type stories...but after a while of writing the same ole thing using the same old words it gets boring...maybe you should read some of my other more down to earth stories... I just wanted a change of direction from the norm and wanted to stretch my imagination with this one. But like you say each to their own. Thank you for taking the time to read it anyway.
Rogerhobart
Posted: 2007/12/12 12:13  Updated: 2007/12/12 12:13
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 Excellent
I had to take a moment ..........
shiena
Posted: 2007/12/5 13:23  Updated: 2007/12/5 13:23
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/13
From: London
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 A Wicked Temptation
That is a truly bewitching story, written with great sensitivity, and skill. But is it erotic? That is always a matter for each reader, of course, but I would be surprised if many were sexually aroused by it. This applies to many of the highly rated stories, in my opinion. The site suggests that it provides stories for the sexual intellectual. It seems that the preponderance of taste in those who vote is towards the intellectual rather than the sexual. Nothing wrong with that of course. But those who wish to produce reasonably written, but arousing stories, may well have to look elsewhere for recognition.
little one
Posted: 2007/11/11 20:02  Updated: 2007/11/11 20:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/29
From: Texas
Posts: 156
 Congrats
I really enjoyed this story. Interesting concept that makes you think. I really liked it. Thanks for a great read!
Dapper Dan
Posted: 2007/11/8 8:31  Updated: 2007/11/8 8:31
Flirt
Joined: 2007/6/14
From: midwest, USA
Posts: 40
 Congrats...
on winning second place in the Halloween contest. DD.
angelique
Posted: 2007/10/30 20:27  Updated: 2007/10/30 20:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/10
From: in my bliss
Posts: 161
 Damn! Take me THERE, lover!
"She reaches a place of paradise, never felt before, sending her into a quivering trance. Her aura is like a rainbow, changing colours as she changes dimensions." I want to know love like this, be shaken to my core like this. MMM! soo sexy! Congrats! :)
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/30 17:21  Updated: 2007/10/30 17:21
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 Red Rose,
Congratulations, I knew this story was something special. :)
silentheart
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:32  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:32
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Liberal, Kansas
Posts: 79
 Red rose
as a writer I loted this story. very well thought out and told. your attention to detail amazing, as a wiccan I loved the refrences to wicca. as a contstant i'm very happy uou got 2nd prize , this deserves 1st.
red rose
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:10  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:10
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 Thankyou...from the bottom of my heart...x
WOW... I'm completely overwhelmed.. at the response this story got.. I was nervous as hell when I submitted it, as it was a change in style and direction of my writing, but I wanted to stretch my self, and move towards this way of writing....I've been blown away by peoples messages and votes.... SO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR VOTING AND POSTING SUCH KIND COMMENTS ON THIS STORY.....and I'm glad you all liked it.... Health, Wealth & Happiness to you all.. .Rose x
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/30 11:33  Updated: 2007/10/30 11:33
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From: In your mind right now
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 Well done!!
I knew this story was a winner when i read it!! Much deserved Red Rose....congratulations hun...x
Miss Bee
Posted: 2007/10/30 9:35  Updated: 2007/10/30 9:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/22
From: Buzzing about...here, there and everywhere
Posts: 875
 A well-deserved silver medal!
Rose, Really enjoyed the fluidity of your writing. Beautifully described, truly erotic. Well done!! Bee x
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/29 12:36  Updated: 2007/10/29 12:36
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: In your mind right now
Posts: 1363
 Excellent...
Absolutely loved it!! It doesnt get much better than this!! Good luck in the contest, because this is most definately deserving of a win!!
Montana Norman
Posted: 2007/10/27 13:57  Updated: 2007/10/27 14:28
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/11
From: Dallas Texas
Posts: 858
 Oh yesssssssss.......
That was good! I was confused as why she was there at that spot and not fearing for her safety, but then you pulled it all together... BEAUTIFULLY!!! Just a quick note; I used to know a girl who loved to masturbate in graveyards... I thought that was where you were going... I was pleasantly surprised otherwise! The car wreck and mangled body. Excellent!!! And the best yet. She's given the choice and in my opinion, she chose wisely. Let's run with the scenario that there is the ability to find passion and love in the after world. Something to really think about. I can wrap my head around that concept. Anyway, I loved it! Great Job... Hope you win... Montana
lustywabbit
Posted: 2007/10/25 19:48  Updated: 2007/10/25 19:48
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From: Lost..my mind is an expansive place
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 My My.....
Dear Red... what a fine story you spin for us! You fan our fires with words of desire! And I for one sing you praise of thanks! Kisses Chicky
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/10/25 7:47  Updated: 2007/10/25 7:47
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Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3124
 so wonderfully done
far troo much for my limited vocabulary to properly praise
erewon
Posted: 2007/10/25 3:39  Updated: 2007/10/25 3:39
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/7/18
From: New Zealand
Posts: 56
 mental images
thanks for a fantastic story Red, felt like I was walking with you, great build up, passion and feeling, you have a way with words. xx Erewon
cindy
Posted: 2007/10/24 9:40  Updated: 2007/10/24 9:40
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/30
From: down the county...
Posts: 1542
 Wow
This story was amaising! I loved how you sweetly chose to write it. I was not expecting the crash at all. Loved it, loved it...loved it!
TeresaDean
Posted: 2007/10/24 9:29  Updated: 2007/10/24 9:29
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 To Rose!
I love the sweet sense of innocence with the words you chose to describe sexual pleasures. Not only was the story intriguing and seductive it certainly made my mind wander into a world one can only dream of experiencing. LOVED IT! I want to read more of your tantalizing teasing way you have with words!
freddyair
Posted: 2007/10/24 7:57  Updated: 2007/10/24 7:57
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Joined: 2007/2/26
From: Near Boston
Posts: 3049
 Ah, Red Rose...
...such a fine awakening for me this morning. Your words were eerie, sexy, and erotic. Nice story and great images. I hope I don't intentionally plow into a tree on the way to work. ;) =f=
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/23 22:35  Updated: 2007/10/23 22:45
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 Red Rose,
I love way you write details. And the words you came up with to describe the lusty goings on came across so soft and gentle, like a soft rain on a hot day. You spoke of learning from reading my work, I think this time it has worked the other way around. :)