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Contest Submissions: Valentine's Day:
  Five Years From Now (1/4)  

316 votes
Author: hopelessromantic128  Published: 2/5/2007  story views: 19617
 


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It had been one of the greatest relationships of her life, however short lived. For the last few months of her senior year Danielle was blissfully happy, and in love with one of the greatest guys she had ever known. She took his virginity, and, in turn, he helped her loosen up and enjoy life more. But they grew apart over the summer and decided to part ways amiably. After driving her home for the last time in awkward silence, he pulled into the driveway and turned to her, “You know, in five years when you’re out of college and I’m rich, I’ll give you a call.” She forced a smile and climbed out of his car and waved him, and her amazing relationship, goodbye.

She moved on, finished college, and enrolled in medical school. Throwing herself into her work made it easier to forget him…but not quite. Which is why the message came as a complete surprise to her. It was after an especially hard day at school when she heard his voice on her answering machine, causing her to freeze in her tracks.

“Hey Danielle, it’s Tom. Just calling to let you know that it’s been five years. Call me back.” As he listed his number, she slowly walked towards the phone, called him back, and made plans for Saturday night.

She was sitting on her bed and strapping on her heels when her doorbell rang. She quickly glanced at the mirror. She had chosen a flowy black dress that dipped low, hugged her figure, and fell just above her knee. Strappy black stilettos added an additional three inches to her short frame, and makeup accentuated her large blue eyes and high cheekbones. Tucking a stray blond curl that had fallen from the clip behind her ear, she took a deep breath and opened the door.

Standing on her welcome mat and holding a bouquet of purple roses was Tom.

“I hope purple is still your favorite color,” He said with a goofy grin. “If not, I have my florist on standby with a dozen pink, yellow, and red ones.” With a laugh she took the flowers.

“Actually, it still is my favorite. And these are beautiful, thank you!” She put them in a vase, grabbed her coat, and locking the door behind her, followed Tom to where he had his limo waiting.

As they drove to the restaurant where he had reserved a quiet table, he brought her up to speed on his financial success, which stemmed from a very successful chain of hotels. The latest one had just been constructed in downtown Boston, only twenty minutes away from her school. When they reached the restaurant he opened her door for her, pulled out her chair, and poured her wine. Danielle was floored by how little he had changed, and how much she was still attracted to him. The chemistry that had existed between them five years ago sparked once again. Every time their fingers would brush or he caught her gaze and held it, her heart would begin pounding. He pretended not to notice, and the conversation flowed easily, though she did shift uncomfortably in her seat when the topic turned to her love life.

“I haven’t really dated anybody since we broke up,” she admitted with a blush. “I just haven’t had the time, what with double majoring in bio and psych, and applying to Med school, and…why are you looking at me like that?”

He stared at her innocently. “Looking at you like what?”  She reached out to gently slap him but he quickly grabbed her

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stillsopure
Posted: 2008/9/1 22:00  Updated: 2008/9/1 22:01
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 Marvelous
Absolutely great work of romance. Truly emotional. I love how you wrote the climax. I even got a little teary myself.
Eric
Posted: 2008/7/10 14:36  Updated: 2008/7/10 14:36
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Joined: 2006/7/24
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Posts: 2219
 Just Precious
This piece really shows off the author's mastery with a pen. The plot is arrestingly proximate to the heart. The subtlety of every move has "grab," yet is always careful not to affect the excited reading tempo in a wonderful way. Mix into that some singular metaphors like: she pulled the blanket around their bodies, creating a warm cocoon. How can anyone not be caught up in this kind of work!! Just loved it!
ChloeLim
Posted: 2008/1/26 6:23  Updated: 2008/1/26 6:23
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Arizona, US
Posts: 4
 Every girl's dream
That was so lovely. I loved how strong this girl's convictions are, even in the face of love. Thank you, more please?...C*
AutumnLee
Posted: 2007/7/1 1:52  Updated: 2007/7/1 1:52
Virgin
Joined: 2007/6/27
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 Enchanting!
Such loving intensity...beautiful!
UniquelyDifferent
Posted: 2007/5/20 17:14  Updated: 2007/5/20 17:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/5/20
From: Wales, United Kingdom
Posts: 4
 Another Gr8 1
Really enjoy your style of writing. Hopefully there will be lots more to come. How about 10 yrs later so we can find out what else happens :)
SSbbwPornStar
Posted: 2007/3/8 16:14  Updated: 2007/3/8 16:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/3/6
From: Orange county,New york
Posts: 6
 Nice work
Wow that was really hot!
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:43  Updated: 2007/2/14 4:59
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Sorry for the double comment.
Not sure how I managed to post twice. Apologies.
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:42  Updated: 2007/2/13 18:42
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Didn't really do it for me
Were they just hot for each other? The "I love you" seemed...so hollow. And was this really a Valentine's story? No mention of it anywhere except in the last paragraph? Seems a bit of a cheat. Your descriptions of the sex were hot, for sure, but without a deep connect ion, the payoff just isn't there. I'm interested to see what else you come up with :)
Fiona
Posted: 2007/2/12 2:39  Updated: 2007/2/12 2:39
Flirt
Joined: 2006/5/27
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 And she loved him because?????
I don't get this..... No real connection between them. This story was like Chinese food; you think you're full but you find out 3 hours later you are hungry again. .... And the mention of Valentine's Day felt like an afterth ought.
SexyShrute69
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:58  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:58
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 Hot Damn
Hottest story I've read in hours..This is a definite winner
ilovesarah
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:45  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:45
Virgin
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 *nice*
That story is so sweet... nice writing. keep it up. yes. ;-)
velvetcrush
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:45  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:45
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 wow
this story almost made me cum. my friend recommended me to this site. this was my first story and i loved it. it was so intense and passionate, it alm ost made me wish i was there.
clitcommander
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:00  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:00
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 Orgasmic!
The clit commander thinks this is a great story
franknbeans
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:51  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:51
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 confused
I'm new on the site, and I don't get how this contest thing works. how do I vote for the story?
Lustyleah74
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:31  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:31
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 Absolutely amazing!
That was so romantic and amazing. His speech as he backed her against a win dow was fabulous!!! I REALLY hope this wins!
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/2/7 17:35  Updated: 2007/2/7 17:35
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 5 years?
Sure is a long time to wait on a love this sweet. But it sounds like it wa s worth it...
TigerLily456
Posted: 2007/2/6 23:22  Updated: 2007/2/6 23:22
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 Amazing
This was extremely well written, and perfect for Valentines day without hit ting you over the head with cliches. I really enjoyed this, you are a fabul ous writer and I hope you win! A sequal would be nice, too =)
2luscious
Posted: 2007/2/5 15:05  Updated: 2007/2/5 15:05
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Posts: 2235
 Intense
Sweet and intense ........ enjoyed this very much and I esp liked the tensi on between the characters and that you maintained it very well.