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Contest Submissions: Valentine's Day:
  Five Years From Now (2/4)  

316 votes
Author: hopelessromantic128  Published: 2/5/2007  story views: 19600
 


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hand. “Let’s get out of here; we can have drinks and dessert at my place. The view is unbelievable” Unable to control her racing pulse she nodded and followed him out of the restaurant.

“You weren’t lying,” she said incredulously as she stood in front of the picturesque windows that overlooked the harbor on one side and the city on the other. Lights flickered softly in the water, and the moon cast an ethereal glow over the now dormant metropolis. She finished the glass of wine he poured her. When she turned around to ask for more she found him staring at her. She cocked her head to the side asked him what he was looking at.

He took the glass from her hand and placed it on the table. Then he gently reached up to caress her cheek. “God, you are so beautiful.” Turning away from his touch, she stared up at him.

“Why are you doing this to me?”

“Doing what? Baby, what’s wrong?” He asked her, wrapping his arms around her waist.

“This!” she said, pushing his hands away, then gesturing to the suite, “and this! Tom, I think you’re a really great guy, but what we had is gone. It didn’t work out and I was upset about that, but I’ve moved on. I’m at a very critical point in my life, where I just don’t have time to worry about this. I have so much work to do; I haven’t even had time to indulge in myself, let alone in men. I mean,” she said, throwing her hands up, “this is the first time in god knows how long that I’m wearing something other than jeans, scrubs, or sweatpants. But I like my busy schedule. Wake up, go to class, go to clinical, study, go to bed. Structure works for me. I know where I am in my life, and then here you are, out of nowhere, expecting me to change. Why? Why couldn’t you just let things be?”

He took a step towards her.” You want to know why?” She nodded and moved back, the smoldering look in his eyes making her heart race. “The real reason why I couldn’t just let it go? Because for five years you have been following me, taunting me, driving me over the edge.” He kept walking towards her until her back was against the cold window, her eyes wide and her lips slightly parted in surprise. “Every day images of you run through my head until I can’t concentrate. When I close my eyes at night, you haunt my dreams, making it impossible to sleep. Every time I make love,” His fingers grazed her cheek lightly as he wound her curls around his hand, “it’s you that I see beneath me. Your hair spread out on the pillow, you calling my name as I make you explode with pleasure. You’re the reason that I’ve worked so hard. These hotels? This empire? I only did it because of you!” He pulled his hand from her hair and shrugged. “But tell me you don’t want me. Tell me you haven’t thought about me every day, wished things could have been different between us. Tell me you don’t feel anything, and I will stop. I’ll bring you home, and you won’t have to hear from me again. Just tell me,” he paused, “that you don’t love me.”

Dropping her gaze, she feebly shook her head. “I can’t.”

“Good,” he said, before taking the last step towards her and hungrily capturing her mouth with his. She surrendered to the warmth of his embrace and leaned in, deepening

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stillsopure
Posted: 2008/9/1 22:00  Updated: 2008/9/1 22:01
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 Marvelous
Absolutely great work of romance. Truly emotional. I love how you wrote the climax. I even got a little teary myself.
Eric
Posted: 2008/7/10 14:36  Updated: 2008/7/10 14:36
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 Just Precious
This piece really shows off the author's mastery with a pen. The plot is arrestingly proximate to the heart. The subtlety of every move has "grab," yet is always careful not to affect the excited reading tempo in a wonderful way. Mix into that some singular metaphors like: she pulled the blanket around their bodies, creating a warm cocoon. How can anyone not be caught up in this kind of work!! Just loved it!
ChloeLim
Posted: 2008/1/26 6:23  Updated: 2008/1/26 6:23
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Arizona, US
Posts: 4
 Every girl's dream
That was so lovely. I loved how strong this girl's convictions are, even in the face of love. Thank you, more please?...C*
AutumnLee
Posted: 2007/7/1 1:52  Updated: 2007/7/1 1:52
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 Enchanting!
Such loving intensity...beautiful!
UniquelyDifferent
Posted: 2007/5/20 17:14  Updated: 2007/5/20 17:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/5/20
From: Wales, United Kingdom
Posts: 4
 Another Gr8 1
Really enjoy your style of writing. Hopefully there will be lots more to come. How about 10 yrs later so we can find out what else happens :)
SSbbwPornStar
Posted: 2007/3/8 16:14  Updated: 2007/3/8 16:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/3/6
From: Orange county,New york
Posts: 6
 Nice work
Wow that was really hot!
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:43  Updated: 2007/2/14 4:59
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Sorry for the double comment.
Not sure how I managed to post twice. Apologies.
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:42  Updated: 2007/2/13 18:42
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Didn't really do it for me
Were they just hot for each other? The "I love you" seemed...so hollow. And was this really a Valentine's story? No mention of it anywhere except in the last paragraph? Seems a bit of a cheat. Your descriptions of the sex were hot, for sure, but without a deep connect ion, the payoff just isn't there. I'm interested to see what else you come up with :)
Fiona
Posted: 2007/2/12 2:39  Updated: 2007/2/12 2:39
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 And she loved him because?????
I don't get this..... No real connection between them. This story was like Chinese food; you think you're full but you find out 3 hours later you are hungry again. .... And the mention of Valentine's Day felt like an afterth ought.
SexyShrute69
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:58  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:58
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 Hot Damn
Hottest story I've read in hours..This is a definite winner
ilovesarah
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:45  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:45
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 *nice*
That story is so sweet... nice writing. keep it up. yes. ;-)
velvetcrush
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:45  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:45
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 wow
this story almost made me cum. my friend recommended me to this site. this was my first story and i loved it. it was so intense and passionate, it alm ost made me wish i was there.
clitcommander
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:00  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:00
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 Orgasmic!
The clit commander thinks this is a great story
franknbeans
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:51  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:51
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 confused
I'm new on the site, and I don't get how this contest thing works. how do I vote for the story?
Lustyleah74
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:31  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:31
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 Absolutely amazing!
That was so romantic and amazing. His speech as he backed her against a win dow was fabulous!!! I REALLY hope this wins!
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/2/7 17:35  Updated: 2007/2/7 17:35
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 5 years?
Sure is a long time to wait on a love this sweet. But it sounds like it wa s worth it...
TigerLily456
Posted: 2007/2/6 23:22  Updated: 2007/2/6 23:22
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 Amazing
This was extremely well written, and perfect for Valentines day without hit ting you over the head with cliches. I really enjoyed this, you are a fabul ous writer and I hope you win! A sequal would be nice, too =)
2luscious
Posted: 2007/2/5 15:05  Updated: 2007/2/5 15:05
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 Intense
Sweet and intense ........ enjoyed this very much and I esp liked the tensi on between the characters and that you maintained it very well.