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Contest Submissions: Valentine's Day:
  Five Years From Now (3/4)  

316 votes
Author: hopelessromantic128  Published: 2/5/2007  story views: 19549
 


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their kiss. When he saw that she wasn’t resisting, his hand snaked around her waist and pulled her into him. Her fingers grasped at the front of his shirt. They ravenously explored each other, rediscovered each other.

A moan escaped her throat as he dipped down to kiss her neck and collarbone. She dug her hands into his hair and lifted his head to meet her gaze. A look of understanding passed between them. He silently took her hand and brought her over to the king size bed, where he kissed her again before turning her and reaching for her zipper. Inch by inch the creamy smoothness of her back was revealed as he undressed her. She moved her hair to the side as he slid the straps down her shoulders, and her dress pooled at her feet. Stepping out of it, she turned to face him wearing only her black satin bra and panties. She watched as his eyes approvingly traveled the length of her figure, taking in her full breasts, small waist and the gentle curve of her hips. He smiled crookedly as he fingered the waistband of her boyshorts. “Did you wear these for me?” She shrugged innocently.

“Why? Do you like them?” He groaned and pushed her back on the bed, climbing on top of her and kissing her passionately. He only pulled back enough to allow her room to work the buttons on his shirt and push it from his shoulders. He shrugged it off and threw it on top of her dress while she ran her hands over the firm expanse of his chest and over his rigid biceps, his arms rippling in restraint on either side of her body as he held himself above her, allowing her to explore his body. When her fingers brushed his nipple he pulled her hand away. Danielle used the opportunity to throw him off balance and flip him over with a laugh, which quickly died in her throat as she settled above his erection.

His hands rested lightly on her hips as she slowly reached up and took out the clip that held her messy hair in place, letting it fall loosely around her shoulders and back. It covered his hands as he moved to unhook her bra, revealing her firm breasts. She tensed as he ran his thumb over her nipple, which peaked under his touch. Allowing herself to be rolled over, she lay helpless and writhing in ecstasy as he teased her.

First he lazily drew circles along her burning flesh, igniting a fire wherever he made contact. His mouth then took over, biting, kissing, and licking the skin that his fingers had just caressed. Her back arched as he bent down to take a nipple lightly between his teeth. Her breaths became ragged and heavy. Her eyes met his as his fingers dipped down lower and hovered at the waistband her panties, and what he saw there startled him. Pure, sensual energy shone in her blue eyes, and he had to force himself not to rip off her panties and thrust into her right then and there. Instead, he slowly slid them down her legs, followed by a trail of kisses. As he pulled them off, he planted a kiss on the arch of her foot and pulled his body up so that he was lying beside her.

She watched through heavily lidded eyes as his hand traveled up the length of her inner thigh, hesitating slightly before brushing her opening, already slick with desire. As he slid a finger into her, his thumb began circling

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stillsopure
Posted: 2008/9/1 22:00  Updated: 2008/9/1 22:01
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 Marvelous
Absolutely great work of romance. Truly emotional. I love how you wrote the climax. I even got a little teary myself.
Eric
Posted: 2008/7/10 14:36  Updated: 2008/7/10 14:36
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: cyberspace
Posts: 2219
 Just Precious
This piece really shows off the author's mastery with a pen. The plot is arrestingly proximate to the heart. The subtlety of every move has "grab," yet is always careful not to affect the excited reading tempo in a wonderful way. Mix into that some singular metaphors like: she pulled the blanket around their bodies, creating a warm cocoon. How can anyone not be caught up in this kind of work!! Just loved it!
ChloeLim
Posted: 2008/1/26 6:23  Updated: 2008/1/26 6:23
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Arizona, US
Posts: 4
 Every girl's dream
That was so lovely. I loved how strong this girl's convictions are, even in the face of love. Thank you, more please?...C*
AutumnLee
Posted: 2007/7/1 1:52  Updated: 2007/7/1 1:52
Virgin
Joined: 2007/6/27
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 Enchanting!
Such loving intensity...beautiful!
UniquelyDifferent
Posted: 2007/5/20 17:14  Updated: 2007/5/20 17:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/5/20
From: Wales, United Kingdom
Posts: 4
 Another Gr8 1
Really enjoy your style of writing. Hopefully there will be lots more to come. How about 10 yrs later so we can find out what else happens :)
SSbbwPornStar
Posted: 2007/3/8 16:14  Updated: 2007/3/8 16:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/3/6
From: Orange county,New york
Posts: 6
 Nice work
Wow that was really hot!
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:43  Updated: 2007/2/14 4:59
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Sorry for the double comment.
Not sure how I managed to post twice. Apologies.
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:42  Updated: 2007/2/13 18:42
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Didn't really do it for me
Were they just hot for each other? The "I love you" seemed...so hollow. And was this really a Valentine's story? No mention of it anywhere except in the last paragraph? Seems a bit of a cheat. Your descriptions of the sex were hot, for sure, but without a deep connect ion, the payoff just isn't there. I'm interested to see what else you come up with :)
Fiona
Posted: 2007/2/12 2:39  Updated: 2007/2/12 2:39
Flirt
Joined: 2006/5/27
From:
Posts: 27
 And she loved him because?????
I don't get this..... No real connection between them. This story was like Chinese food; you think you're full but you find out 3 hours later you are hungry again. .... And the mention of Valentine's Day felt like an afterth ought.
SexyShrute69
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:58  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:58
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/8
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 Hot Damn
Hottest story I've read in hours..This is a definite winner
ilovesarah
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:45  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:45
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/8
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 *nice*
That story is so sweet... nice writing. keep it up. yes. ;-)
velvetcrush
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:45  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:45
Virgin
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 wow
this story almost made me cum. my friend recommended me to this site. this was my first story and i loved it. it was so intense and passionate, it alm ost made me wish i was there.
clitcommander
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:00  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:00
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 Orgasmic!
The clit commander thinks this is a great story
franknbeans
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:51  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:51
Virgin
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 confused
I'm new on the site, and I don't get how this contest thing works. how do I vote for the story?
Lustyleah74
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:31  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:31
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/7
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 Absolutely amazing!
That was so romantic and amazing. His speech as he backed her against a win dow was fabulous!!! I REALLY hope this wins!
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/2/7 17:35  Updated: 2007/2/7 17:35
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Joined: 2006/12/17
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Posts: 2871
 5 years?
Sure is a long time to wait on a love this sweet. But it sounds like it wa s worth it...
TigerLily456
Posted: 2007/2/6 23:22  Updated: 2007/2/6 23:22
Virgin
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 Amazing
This was extremely well written, and perfect for Valentines day without hit ting you over the head with cliches. I really enjoyed this, you are a fabul ous writer and I hope you win! A sequal would be nice, too =)
2luscious
Posted: 2007/2/5 15:05  Updated: 2007/2/5 15:05
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/14
From: Always checking my headings ...
Posts: 2235
 Intense
Sweet and intense ........ enjoyed this very much and I esp liked the tensi on between the characters and that you maintained it very well.