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| stillsopure |
Posted: 2008/9/1 22:00 Updated: 2008/9/1 22:01 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/7/13 From: Posts: 342 |
 Marvelous Absolutely great work of romance. Truly emotional. I love how you wrote the climax.
I even got a little teary myself.
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| Eric |
Posted: 2008/7/10 14:36 Updated: 2008/7/10 14:36 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
 Just Precious This piece really shows off the author's mastery with a pen. The plot is arrestingly
proximate to the heart. The subtlety of every move has "grab," yet is always
careful not to affect the excited reading tempo in a wonderful way. Mix into
that some singular metaphors like: she pulled the blanket around their bodies,
creating a warm cocoon. How can anyone not be caught up in this kind of work!!
Just loved it!
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| ChloeLim |
Posted: 2008/1/26 6:23 Updated: 2008/1/26 6:23 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/10/25 From: Arizona, US Posts: 4 |
 Every girl's dream That was so lovely. I loved how strong this girl's convictions are, even in the
face of love. Thank you, more please?...C*
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| AutumnLee |
Posted: 2007/7/1 1:52 Updated: 2007/7/1 1:52 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/6/27 From: Posts: 6 |
 Enchanting! Such loving intensity...beautiful!
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| UniquelyDifferent |
Posted: 2007/5/20 17:14 Updated: 2007/5/20 17:14 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/20 From: Wales, United Kingdom Posts: 4 |
 Another Gr8 1 Really enjoy your style of writing. Hopefully there will be lots more to come.
How about 10 yrs later so we can find out what else happens :)
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| SSbbwPornStar |
Posted: 2007/3/8 16:14 Updated: 2007/3/8 16:14 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/6 From: Orange county,New york Posts: 6 |
 Nice work Wow that was really hot!
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| Jondough |
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:43 Updated: 2007/2/14 4:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/8 From: Los Angeles Posts: 15 |
 Sorry for the double comment. Not sure how I managed to post twice. Apologies.
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| Jondough |
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:42 Updated: 2007/2/13 18:42 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/8 From: Los Angeles Posts: 15 |
 Didn't really do it for me Were they just hot for each other? The "I love you" seemed...so hollow.
And was this really a Valentine's story? No mention of it anywhere except
in the last paragraph? Seems a bit of a cheat.
Your descriptions of the sex were hot, for sure, but without a deep connect
ion, the payoff just isn't there. I'm interested to see what else you come
up with :)
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| Fiona |
Posted: 2007/2/12 2:39 Updated: 2007/2/12 2:39 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/5/27 From: Posts: 27 |
 And she loved him because????? I don't get this..... No real connection between them. This story was like
Chinese food; you think you're full but you find out 3 hours later you are
hungry again. .... And the mention of Valentine's Day felt like an afterth
ought.
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| SexyShrute69 |
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:58 Updated: 2007/2/8 22:58 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/8 From: Posts: 2 |
 Hot Damn Hottest story I've read in hours..This is a definite winner
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| ilovesarah |
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:45 Updated: 2007/2/8 22:45 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/8 From: Posts: 1 |
 *nice* That story is so sweet... nice writing. keep it up. yes. ;-)
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| velvetcrush |
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:45 Updated: 2007/2/7 20:45 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/7 From: Posts: 1 |
 wow this story almost made me cum. my friend recommended me to this site. this
was my first story and i loved it. it was so intense and passionate, it alm
ost made me wish i was there.
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| clitcommander |
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:00 Updated: 2007/2/7 20:00 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/7 From: Posts: 1 |
 Orgasmic! The clit commander thinks this is a great story
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| franknbeans |
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:51 Updated: 2007/2/7 18:51 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/7 From: Posts: 1 |
 confused I'm new on the site, and I don't get how this contest thing works. how do I
vote for the story?
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| Lustyleah74 |
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:31 Updated: 2007/2/7 18:31 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/7 From: Posts: 1 |
 Absolutely amazing! That was so romantic and amazing. His speech as he backed her against a win
dow was fabulous!!! I REALLY hope this wins!
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| thinksexy |
Posted: 2007/2/7 17:35 Updated: 2007/2/7 17:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/12/17 From: Posts: 2871 |
 5 years? Sure is a long time to wait on a love this sweet. But it sounds like it wa
s worth it...
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| TigerLily456 |
Posted: 2007/2/6 23:22 Updated: 2007/2/6 23:22 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/6 From: Posts: 1 |
 Amazing This was extremely well written, and perfect for Valentines day without hit
ting you over the head with cliches. I really enjoyed this, you are a fabul
ous writer and I hope you win! A sequal would be nice, too =)
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| 2luscious |
Posted: 2007/2/5 15:05 Updated: 2007/2/5 15:05 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/14 From: Always checking my headings ... Posts: 2235 |
 Intense Sweet and intense ........ enjoyed this very much and I esp liked the tensi
on between the characters and that you maintained it very well.
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