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Contest Submissions: Valentine's Day:
  Five Years From Now (4/4)  

316 votes
Author: hopelessromantic128  Published: 2/5/2007  story views: 19511
 


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her throbbing bud. Waves of heat spread through her body and she squirmed next to him, inviting him to push another finger inside of her warmth. A wordless plea tumbled from her lips, but was silenced by his mouth covering hers as he pulled his fingers from her and began rubbing her clit roughly. He swallowed her cries as she writhed beneath him, the gentle heat overwhelming her body before exploding in a dizzying burst of passion.

As she was coming down from her intense orgasm, Tom quickly shed his pants and positioned himself above her. He kissed her deeply as he slowly and lovingly entered her, his throbbing flesh enveloped by her liquid warmth. Her already sensitive skin burned as his body covered hers, joining them as one.

She wrapped her arms around him and he began thrusting inside of her, faster and faster. The delicious friction was almost too much for them, but he was determined to see that she was completely satisfied. His hands roamed her body while he kissed her fiercely. As the tension inside of her grew, he whispered into her ear: “I never stopped loving you.” The words alone brought a sob from her throat as she came, and came again. Her muscles contracting around his hard length for the second time brought him to the edge of insanity, and he was unable to hold it any longer. He called her name as his body tensed and he experienced his own powerful orgasm. Five years of repressed sexual tension, desire, and heartache all erupted in one pivotal earth shattering moment, completely draining him.

His shaking arms held him above her long enough for him to pull out and collapse next to her on the bed. His eyes still closed, he waited for his breathing and pulse to return to normal. He clumsily reached for her. As she snuggled up next to him, she pulled the blanket around their bodies, creating a warm cocoon. Exhaustion swept over both of them. As they drifted towards blissful oblivion, she whispered, “I love you too.” He pulled her close, planted a kiss on the top of her head, and they both fell asleep.

It was a ray of sunshine that finally woke Danielle up the next morning. As she stretched languidly, she was suddenly aware that the spot next to her was empty. With a smile, she picked up the lavender orchid that lay on the pillow next to her, and opened the note that lay beneath it. In his messy handwriting, a single phrase was printed: “Will you be my valentine?”

She couldn’t help it. She threw her head back and laughed, before nestling back under the covers to wait.

 
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stillsopure
Posted: 2008/9/1 22:00  Updated: 2008/9/1 22:01
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/7/13
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 Marvelous
Absolutely great work of romance. Truly emotional. I love how you wrote the climax. I even got a little teary myself.
Eric
Posted: 2008/7/10 14:36  Updated: 2008/7/10 14:36
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: cyberspace
Posts: 2219
 Just Precious
This piece really shows off the author's mastery with a pen. The plot is arrestingly proximate to the heart. The subtlety of every move has "grab," yet is always careful not to affect the excited reading tempo in a wonderful way. Mix into that some singular metaphors like: she pulled the blanket around their bodies, creating a warm cocoon. How can anyone not be caught up in this kind of work!! Just loved it!
ChloeLim
Posted: 2008/1/26 6:23  Updated: 2008/1/26 6:23
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Arizona, US
Posts: 4
 Every girl's dream
That was so lovely. I loved how strong this girl's convictions are, even in the face of love. Thank you, more please?...C*
AutumnLee
Posted: 2007/7/1 1:52  Updated: 2007/7/1 1:52
Virgin
Joined: 2007/6/27
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Posts: 6
 Enchanting!
Such loving intensity...beautiful!
UniquelyDifferent
Posted: 2007/5/20 17:14  Updated: 2007/5/20 17:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/5/20
From: Wales, United Kingdom
Posts: 4
 Another Gr8 1
Really enjoy your style of writing. Hopefully there will be lots more to come. How about 10 yrs later so we can find out what else happens :)
SSbbwPornStar
Posted: 2007/3/8 16:14  Updated: 2007/3/8 16:14
Virgin
Joined: 2007/3/6
From: Orange county,New york
Posts: 6
 Nice work
Wow that was really hot!
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:43  Updated: 2007/2/14 4:59
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Sorry for the double comment.
Not sure how I managed to post twice. Apologies.
Jondough
Posted: 2007/2/13 18:42  Updated: 2007/2/13 18:42
Virgin
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Los Angeles
Posts: 15
 Didn't really do it for me
Were they just hot for each other? The "I love you" seemed...so hollow. And was this really a Valentine's story? No mention of it anywhere except in the last paragraph? Seems a bit of a cheat. Your descriptions of the sex were hot, for sure, but without a deep connect ion, the payoff just isn't there. I'm interested to see what else you come up with :)
Fiona
Posted: 2007/2/12 2:39  Updated: 2007/2/12 2:39
Flirt
Joined: 2006/5/27
From:
Posts: 27
 And she loved him because?????
I don't get this..... No real connection between them. This story was like Chinese food; you think you're full but you find out 3 hours later you are hungry again. .... And the mention of Valentine's Day felt like an afterth ought.
SexyShrute69
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:58  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:58
Virgin
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 Hot Damn
Hottest story I've read in hours..This is a definite winner
ilovesarah
Posted: 2007/2/8 22:45  Updated: 2007/2/8 22:45
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/8
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Posts: 1
 *nice*
That story is so sweet... nice writing. keep it up. yes. ;-)
velvetcrush
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:45  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:45
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/7
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Posts: 1
 wow
this story almost made me cum. my friend recommended me to this site. this was my first story and i loved it. it was so intense and passionate, it alm ost made me wish i was there.
clitcommander
Posted: 2007/2/7 20:00  Updated: 2007/2/7 20:00
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Joined: 2007/2/7
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 Orgasmic!
The clit commander thinks this is a great story
franknbeans
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:51  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:51
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/7
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 confused
I'm new on the site, and I don't get how this contest thing works. how do I vote for the story?
Lustyleah74
Posted: 2007/2/7 18:31  Updated: 2007/2/7 18:31
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/7
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 Absolutely amazing!
That was so romantic and amazing. His speech as he backed her against a win dow was fabulous!!! I REALLY hope this wins!
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/2/7 17:35  Updated: 2007/2/7 17:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
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Posts: 2871
 5 years?
Sure is a long time to wait on a love this sweet. But it sounds like it wa s worth it...
TigerLily456
Posted: 2007/2/6 23:22  Updated: 2007/2/6 23:22
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/6
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Posts: 1
 Amazing
This was extremely well written, and perfect for Valentines day without hit ting you over the head with cliches. I really enjoyed this, you are a fabul ous writer and I hope you win! A sequal would be nice, too =)
2luscious
Posted: 2007/2/5 15:05  Updated: 2007/2/5 15:05
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/14
From: Always checking my headings ...
Posts: 2235
 Intense
Sweet and intense ........ enjoyed this very much and I esp liked the tensi on between the characters and that you maintained it very well.