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| kcsgstring |
Posted: 2008/5/3 16:37 Updated: 2008/5/3 16:37 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/8/25 From: Posts: 81 |
 I'm sooooooo... ...wet right now...it was incredibly seductive and makes me wish someone was
here with me right now to lick my dripping pussy
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| Morgan-Rose |
Posted: 2008/4/30 11:28 Updated: 2008/4/30 11:28 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/1/28 From: England Posts: 38 |
 Hot Now that was a good story..the seduction was great and the buildup was fantastic
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| edlyneham |
Posted: 2008/1/17 10:30 Updated: 2008/1/17 10:30 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/1/12 From: Perth, Scotland Posts: 66 |
 I'd like to give this four... ... and then eat the girl who came all over her chair and floor. God I feel horny!!
Thanks!
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2007/11/27 7:35 Updated: 2007/11/27 7:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: florida Posts: 2370 |
 this is so hot damn, I came all over my chair, pussy juice dripping on the floor, I enjoyed
thisvery much
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| starryseducer |
Posted: 2007/11/18 23:31 Updated: 2007/11/18 23:31 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/24 From: Posts: 4 |
 hot!! very hot story! Awesome read. Might want to fix the repetition error though
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| [Aphrodite] |
Posted: 2007/11/6 5:21 Updated: 2007/11/6 5:21 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/11/6 From: Posts: 2 |
 Yes This turned me on so well, could have ended a little better. but my god (:
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| belle_angelique |
Posted: 2007/10/28 18:11 Updated: 2007/10/28 18:11 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/10/27 From: New Jersey Posts: 5 |
 holy shit! nice nice nice!!! the repeat was baaaddd.... but the ending made up for it keep
them coming (pun intended)
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| tango48 |
Posted: 2007/5/15 3:20 Updated: 2007/5/15 3:20 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/11/30 From: islamabad / pakistan Posts: 4 |
 not a bad way to do ... not a bad way to do an assignment, pages 3-7 are probly a pasting error, but
the story is nice. made me want more!
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| ladyinneed |
Posted: 2007/4/1 11:03 Updated: 2007/4/1 11:03 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/19 From: London UK Posts: 14 |
 hot hot hot Loved this so much. Well done.
Sizzling, I am now very very wet and horny.
xx
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| nelzter |
Posted: 2007/3/27 19:03 Updated: 2007/3/27 19:03 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/26 From: atlanta, georgia Posts: 2 |
 shhhh dam.. i wish a grl cud eat my pussy like that... this is a hot ass story, i
cudnt help myself from playing with my clit
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| strawberryqueen06 |
Posted: 2007/3/14 17:41 Updated: 2007/3/14 17:41 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/1/10 From: los angeles Posts: 8 |
 hot story very seductive and erotic story on pages 3 and for the first page repeats,
your story took me to an great orgasm
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/3/9 23:27 Updated: 2007/3/9 23:27 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 67 |
 Great story I loved how wet this made me. The end should be extended as mentioned. I fe
lt a little let down by the finish. Other than that, this was a great way t
o spend some time. And oh, how I'm aching. *winks*
Lisa x
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| viola |
Posted: 2007/2/28 14:51 Updated: 2007/2/28 14:51 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/9/3 From: Posts: 78 |
 This Story ... This was amazing, but where'd the ending go?
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| sexy_grl_55 |
Posted: 2007/2/11 14:19 Updated: 2007/2/11 14:19 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/11 From: Posts: 10 |
 oh my my pussy is so wet over here from reading that.....
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| jtweety |
Posted: 2007/2/10 20:49 Updated: 2007/2/10 20:49 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/9/27 From: Gilroy, CA Posts: 195 |
 Needs to be edited I loved the story but don't think it was quite ready for submission. You s
hould take out the repeated pages and extend the ending for sure! Keep up
the awesome writing.
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| Feel me.Touch me.Love me |
Posted: 2007/1/13 11:50 Updated: 2007/1/13 11:50 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/12 From: In your closet, Texas Posts: 5 |
 O.o yes i agree the seduction of the two girls is hawt..
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| gaspass |
Posted: 2007/1/6 22:11 Updated: 2007/1/6 22:11 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/1/1 From: Posts: 125 |
 Re: wow Wow....but edges are rough. Too much slam/bam. Needs a little more mind exploration to be excellent
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| luvkellie |
Posted: 2007/1/1 12:00 Updated: 2007/1/1 12:00 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/1 From: east coast Posts: 2 |
 Re: God I loved it! even though its repetitious, its hot and fairly well written. confusing in one place, but it didn,t stop us from cumming twice while reading it. great for reading and playing with our clits. lesbian and bi stories are getting better as more females than males are writing it now. and we love them. thanks for the erotica. for girls, the written word is better than any other type of "porn"
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| charlotte |
Posted: 2006/12/6 13:17 Updated: 2006/12/6 13:17 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/24 From: Posts: 1 |
 Re: God I loved it! hey wanna chat
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| virgin_princess |
Posted: 2006/11/30 14:33 Updated: 2006/11/30 14:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/10/26 From: the city that never sleeps Posts: 3375 |
 God I loved it! That story was hotttt and I even wish it was longer. My pussy is soooo wet u should write part 2 with these ladies.
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| trishtits55 |
Posted: 2006/10/21 2:25 Updated: 2006/10/21 2:25 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/4/14 From: Posts: 7 |
 great story loved the story!!
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| looshtoy |
Posted: 2006/9/21 19:02 Updated: 2006/9/21 19:02 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/9/2 From: your dreams Posts: 183 |
 lovely mmmm so nice so good i loved it
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| venusgirl |
Posted: 2006/9/19 6:02 Updated: 2006/9/19 6:02 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/11 From: Australia Posts: 7 |
 Gorgeous mmm yum
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| dwratler |
Posted: 2006/8/5 16:47 Updated: 2006/8/5 16:48 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/7/13 From: West Texas Posts: 88 |
 Fascinantion Aside from the reeeepeat, this piece thoroughly satiated my hunger for all things lesbian, at least for a bit.
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| Oakleaf |
Posted: 2006/7/14 0:08 Updated: 2006/7/14 0:08 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/11 From: Posts: 1 |
 Excellent Totaly Blew My Mind But repeat was Bad But You made up for it in the end Is their a Part 3
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| Baracuda412 |
Posted: 2006/6/26 2:26 Updated: 2006/6/26 2:26 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: syracuse, new york Posts: 27 |
 awesome I loved it give me more baby
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| Black_Polish_Fiction |
Posted: 2006/5/17 10:02 Updated: 2006/5/17 10:02 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/5/16 From: Scotland Posts: 40 |
 RepeTITion That story was awesome, totally vivid, some of the wording could have been a little more attractive and they could have skirted around the main event a little more before they made it obvious - what was this girls deal? was she experienced or just playing games? - I was abit pissed off when part of the story repeated itself, it's a bit of a mood killer :p
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| blkitty |
Posted: 2006/5/1 23:27 Updated: 2006/5/1 23:27 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/1 From: Posts: 4 |
 I want sum nice story it made my pussy throb
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/4/7 8:44 Updated: 2006/4/7 8:44 |
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 jock dykes wow definatly got me wet more of the same please
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/4/4 13:40 Updated: 2006/4/4 13:40 |
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 Re: wow very very good i am so hot. luv to watch you watch them.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/4/3 17:59 Updated: 2006/4/3 17:59 |
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 wow fuck that was good. u couldnt stop me fingering myself durin that. i would have loved being there, my pussy is just wet thinking about that dildo. part frm the repation, that was good. keep it up!
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/3/23 17:40 Updated: 2006/3/23 17:40 |
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 Re: DAMN hi babe
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| baby_blue_eyes |
Posted: 2006/3/6 16:04 Updated: 2006/3/6 16:04 |
Virgin   Joined: 2005/11/23 From: Posts: 20 |
 good it was a good story but repeated from the second page...other than that it was hot
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/2/27 21:56 Updated: 2006/2/27 21:56 |
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 DAMN oh man- im sooo wet and horny! i already pulled out my vibe...i wish i coulda been there! oh baby!
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| tenchi |
Posted: 2006/2/20 18:44 Updated: 2006/2/20 18:45 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/2/11 From: london Posts: 7 |
 it was great Im all for a litle exploration in collage but this takes the biscuit, the stroy line is very good, (two girls teaching another, just grand), although the grammer could do with a little improvement and a little bit of a relap was present, all in all a smashing piece of work. STOP ON :-)
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| Kaltez |
Posted: 2006/2/7 2:27 Updated: 2006/2/7 2:27 |
Virgin   Joined: 2005/11/18 From: Las Vegas, Nevada Posts: 6 |
 Typo Great seduction of those other two girls, except that the story repeats of bit from the 2nd page.
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