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interrupted by the girl next to her, laughing and enjoying what was obviously a delightful chat room session. The girl with the long and shimmering chestnut brown hair was playful and self-assured. Kristina quickly decided that she liked this girl, realizing she could not help glancing over at her, at every opportunity. Since the girl was obviously very beautiful, with just the right amount of make-up, black slacks, and a dark-burgundy satin blouse, unbuttoned enough to show some modest cleavage and a hint of black-lace bra, Kristina wondered why she was in the library, and not out on a date. Suddenly, Kristina felt a touch on her shoulder. It was the girl with a mischievous grin, made more alluring by a small mole just above her lip. "Hey, you want to see something funny?" the girl asked, as she winked at Kristina. Kristina leaned over towards the girl’s computer and noticed she was in an adult chat room. “I've been chatting with a girl called ‘sexykitten4U,’ and we just started cybering,” the girl informed Kristina, as she flung her hair over her shoulder, exposing her neck and cleavage. “She has no idea that I'm a girl too! Ironic, isn't it?” the girl asked. “She says I've been teasing her in ways no man has ever teased her before!” she continued with a giggle. “No kidding, right? I mean, who else would know how to really please a woman, but another woman?” she said in a whisper. “I just don't have the heart to tell her.” The girl’s soft touch on Kristina’s shoulder became more of a caress, as the two laughed together. “By the way, my name is Yvonne,” the girl stated in a warm and friendly way. “I’m Kristina,” came the enthusiastic reply. Yvonne had a zest for life, and usually made friends easily. She knew what she wanted and was not ashamed to show the world. She craved pleasure the way others crave candy. Yvonne knew that life was short. She felt that if ecstasy could only come from another woman's touch, regardless of what some people thought, then so be it. Yvonne’s deep-brown eyes carefully scanned her new friend’s strawberry blonde hair, which curled naturally and cascaded in rippled waves to the middle of her back. In seconds, she studied Kristina’s captivating green eyes, thin tangerine-colored lips, and her welcoming smile. Though Kristina was wearing a pullover sweatshirt, Yvonne could tell that she was well endowed and had an attractive figure. Returning their attention to Yvonne’s computer, the two girls spent the rest of the evening playing with the unknowing cyber friend. They enjoyed each other’s company as if they had been friends for years. They laughed and giggled from the unintentional deception, and occasionally blushed from the sharing of intimate erotic thoughts as they came to mind. Closing time came all too soon. Yvonne and Kristina gathered up their belongings and headed for the door. With Kristina walking in front of her, Yvonne smiled as she took notice of Kristina’s nicely rounded ass in her tight-fitting, faded jeans. At the bottom of the steps, Yvonne looked at her watch, and asked in a hopeful tone, "You know hon, the night's still young. Feel like going out for a quick drink or two?" Kristina knew she had no plans for the next day and readily agreed. After arriving at the small bar & grill
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| LakotaWarrior |
Posted: 2008/11/23 7:57 Updated: 2008/11/23 7:57 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2008/10/14 From: U.S.A. Posts: 137 |
 Thanx Thanks for the comments. I will try to write more. In fact I have a couple more
stories currently under review. :->
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| robin362 |
Posted: 2008/11/13 9:53 Updated: 2008/11/13 9:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/7 From: CT Posts: 3 |
 Very Nice Very nice! I could totaly relate to Kristina's lonelyness. Keep up the good work!
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2008/11/10 16:47 Updated: 2008/11/10 16:47 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1139 |
 comments ... lakota ... .................. i saw your 'post' in a forum re: your first story.
yea! for you for putting one out there ! ... most of the lusties, even the one
who comment and post, don' t ever write stories. . ... now: i always tell my
writing student to write the things they know about ... don' t try to write about
the south if you grew up in brooklyn. i would never presume to write a lesbian
story ( even thought i enjoy reading them ) ... i don' t think i could recreate
where they are coming from. ...don' t "talk about the action" ... "do the action"
... suggest you read it out loud and see how it is a little too "book report
- ish" ... ... find an ( early ) elmore leonard novel and see how he "does" the
action. ... for LL purposes i think you waited too late in the story to get to
the " action " ... i bet you lost a lot of readers on page four ... ... if you
are working on a novel, character development is important ... for the kid from
vermont who is horney, he don' t want character development. . don' t let my
comments put you off ... writing, getting them out there, is the first part of
process. ... ... expect to see more. ................. the gunner ... levi
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2008/11/9 2:12 Updated: 2008/11/9 2:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Enchanting Well written and fairytale like
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| libby123.m |
Posted: 2008/11/8 6:07 Updated: 2008/11/8 6:07 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/11/20 From: USA Posts: 112 |
 Wonderful Story... Beautifully Written...
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