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Kristina drove to the library as soon as she got off work. She pulled into a parking space and noticed Yvonne standing by the curb. Kristina was amazed at how lovely she looked. Yvonne’s heels clicked softly on the pavement as she walked towards her. As she climbed in on the passenger side, Yvonne’s tiny erect nipples strained against the silky ice-blue fabric of her V-neck, wrap-around dress. "No computer tonight, Kristina!" Yvonne said with a smile. "Tonight is for us alone.” Yvonne was trying as hard as she could not to stare at Kristina’s pale breasts, made visible by the plunging neckline on her embroidered peasant blouse. The sexy view was enhanced by a large single pearl suspended from a silver chain, which dangled tantalizingly in between Kristina’s narrow cleavage. Not knowing where they were going, but trusting Yvonne completely, Kristina drove off, enthusiastically heading out of town after being provided with some easy-to-follow directions. Within a short period of time, Yvonne pointed to an old, but well-kept, colonial style house. In the fading light, Kristina saw the small wooden sign saying "bed and breakfast," which betrayed its purpose. "I’ve stayed here before and the rooms are fabulous!" Yvonne said as she touched Kristina’s thigh. Her touch sent tiny shivers of ecstasy through them both, and Kristina knew there was no going back. She could never deny her true feelings again. Kristina wanted this girl and wanted her badly. The moment she parked the car, Kristina embraced Yvonne and kissed her long and deep before they got out. There was no shock or resistance in Yvonne. As their tongues merged together, each could feel their own rush of passion and vaginal secretions beginning to flow through their bodies. Kristina wanted the kiss to last forever, but Yvonne soon whispered, "Come with me and I'll show you wonderful things.” The girls walked inside and greeted the clerk cheerfully. Yvonne stated that she had made a reservation for two. While the clerk was finding their room key, Yvonne would tease Kristina by running her fingers along the top of her gathered-waist skirt, and trace a path to her belly button. This started Kristina giggling. The confused clerk wondered what was the matter, as the girls laughed and giggled whenever he turned his back. Yvonne quickly signed the register slip and took the key from the clerk. The two smiled at the clerk and trotted upstairs. Kristina stared intently at the key as it slowly turned in the lock to their room. As if in slow motion, Yvonne opened the door. To Kristina, it was a symbolic opening as well. She felt as though it represented an opening of her passions and desires, an opening of a new beginning in her life. Kristina walked in the room while Yvonne brought in the bags. Kristina could not help but remember childhood dreams as she looked at the antique canopied bed covered by a thick handmade quilt. The fragrance of the room bore the faintest smells of lilacs. "Yes!" Kristina thought, "This is meant to be!" Closing the door brought Kristina out of her trance, as she spun around to see Yvonne's mischievous grin. The two would-be lovers came towards each other and embraced as no two had embraced before. The years of Kristina’s pent-up passions were released in a single moment of trust and understanding. Continuing to embrace, Yvonne’s eyes welled up with tears of joy.
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| LakotaWarrior |
Posted: 2008/11/23 7:57 Updated: 2008/11/23 7:57 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2008/10/14 From: U.S.A. Posts: 137 |
 Thanx Thanks for the comments. I will try to write more. In fact I have a couple more
stories currently under review. :->
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| robin362 |
Posted: 2008/11/13 9:53 Updated: 2008/11/13 9:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/7 From: CT Posts: 3 |
 Very Nice Very nice! I could totaly relate to Kristina's lonelyness. Keep up the good work!
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2008/11/10 16:47 Updated: 2008/11/10 16:47 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1139 |
 comments ... lakota ... .................. i saw your 'post' in a forum re: your first story.
yea! for you for putting one out there ! ... most of the lusties, even the one
who comment and post, don' t ever write stories. . ... now: i always tell my
writing student to write the things they know about ... don' t try to write about
the south if you grew up in brooklyn. i would never presume to write a lesbian
story ( even thought i enjoy reading them ) ... i don' t think i could recreate
where they are coming from. ...don' t "talk about the action" ... "do the action"
... suggest you read it out loud and see how it is a little too "book report
- ish" ... ... find an ( early ) elmore leonard novel and see how he "does" the
action. ... for LL purposes i think you waited too late in the story to get to
the " action " ... i bet you lost a lot of readers on page four ... ... if you
are working on a novel, character development is important ... for the kid from
vermont who is horney, he don' t want character development. . don' t let my
comments put you off ... writing, getting them out there, is the first part of
process. ... ... expect to see more. ................. the gunner ... levi
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2008/11/9 2:12 Updated: 2008/11/9 2:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Enchanting Well written and fairytale like
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| libby123.m |
Posted: 2008/11/8 6:07 Updated: 2008/11/8 6:07 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/11/20 From: USA Posts: 112 |
 Wonderful Story... Beautifully Written...
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