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moved up Kristina’s waist. So filled with passion, she wanted to go wild on Kristina, but Yvonne instinctively knew she needed to take it slow. Yvonne smiled as she briefly recalled the gentle tenderness shown her, the first time she had a night of naked passion with another female when she was in college. Remembering how Tricia was slow and patient with her, Yvonne was determined to emulate her first wonderful experience. Yvonne’s warm hands gently guided Kristina onto the bed. With Kristina comfortably positioned on her back, Yvonne climbed between Kristina’s legs to the sound of her soft coos. As she guided her tongue across the soft flesh of her lover’s abdomen, Yvonne could feel Kristina’s nails scratching at her back. She could feel Kristina’s hips pushing up into her breasts, as her moans became louder. Moving slowly, Yvonne’s tongue found a nipple and sucked tenderly on the erect bud, as she glided her hand down to Kristina’s wetness. Yvonne was already very close to orgasm knowing that Kristina was fully enjoying her passionate touch. She licked hungrily at Kristina’s nipples, first one, then the other, as she slowly massaged Kristina’s clit. Kristina's hips were bucking into Yvonne's stomach, and she could feel the wet hairs of Kristina’s curly mound on each thrust. Kristina’s hips thrust faster and faster as Yvonne's fingers and tongue worked their magic upon her most sensitive regions. A loud, long moan signaled the climax to Kristina’s pleasure, as her hips pressed hard against Yvonne. The orgasm was powerful, and yet Yvonne did not stop. Her fingers continued to tease her lover’s flower, turning the flowing juices into a creamy froth of lust. She did not stop until she felt several more thrusts of Kristina's hips, and had her own powerful orgasm. Exhausted, the two lay together, embraced in the afterglow, renewing their strength for what was to be a night of unending passions. "Oh my God, that was wonderful!" Kristina said, as she hugged Yvonne tightly. They poured themselves several more glasses of champagne, and sat facing each other. Each was entranced by the love of the other, neither wanting the moment to end. The touches were less sexual, rather expressing the love of reassurance and the thrill of exploration. They talked of life and past lusts, of friends and lovers to be, each sip of champagne bringing them a longing to continue. Each caress directed their thoughts further towards the passions of the other. The bottle of champagne finished, Yvonne rose with a grin saying, "Come with me," and took Kristina by the hand. Yvonne led her to the large bathroom, and a stronger scent of lilacs greeted her, while they bathed in the glow of many candles. The mirrors on the walls gave the illusion of hundreds of candles, yet there was only enough to perfume the room and cast a romantic glow upon their naked forms. The large Jacuzzi made the warm water swirl and lap against the sides of the tub, suggesting similar sounds of contentment and lust. "Time for some fun!" Yvonne chuckled as she closed the bathroom door. Taking Kristina by the hand once more, Yvonne helped her into the enticing warm water. “Oh the bliss,” Kristina thought. She quickly embraced the ecstasy of the heat as it massaged every pore, driving away inhibitions and mundane thoughts, and leaving only serenity and a craving for her lover’s touch. Kristina felt Yvonne
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| LakotaWarrior |
Posted: 2008/11/23 7:57 Updated: 2008/11/23 7:57 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2008/10/14 From: U.S.A. Posts: 137 |
 Thanx Thanks for the comments. I will try to write more. In fact I have a couple more
stories currently under review. :->
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| robin362 |
Posted: 2008/11/13 9:53 Updated: 2008/11/13 9:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/7 From: CT Posts: 3 |
 Very Nice Very nice! I could totaly relate to Kristina's lonelyness. Keep up the good work!
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2008/11/10 16:47 Updated: 2008/11/10 16:47 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1139 |
 comments ... lakota ... .................. i saw your 'post' in a forum re: your first story.
yea! for you for putting one out there ! ... most of the lusties, even the one
who comment and post, don' t ever write stories. . ... now: i always tell my
writing student to write the things they know about ... don' t try to write about
the south if you grew up in brooklyn. i would never presume to write a lesbian
story ( even thought i enjoy reading them ) ... i don' t think i could recreate
where they are coming from. ...don' t "talk about the action" ... "do the action"
... suggest you read it out loud and see how it is a little too "book report
- ish" ... ... find an ( early ) elmore leonard novel and see how he "does" the
action. ... for LL purposes i think you waited too late in the story to get to
the " action " ... i bet you lost a lot of readers on page four ... ... if you
are working on a novel, character development is important ... for the kid from
vermont who is horney, he don' t want character development. . don' t let my
comments put you off ... writing, getting them out there, is the first part of
process. ... ... expect to see more. ................. the gunner ... levi
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2008/11/9 2:12 Updated: 2008/11/9 2:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Enchanting Well written and fairytale like
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| libby123.m |
Posted: 2008/11/8 6:07 Updated: 2008/11/8 6:07 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/11/20 From: USA Posts: 112 |
 Wonderful Story... Beautifully Written...
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