It was the summer and the girls and I were excited that we graduated from high school. We all moved to LA to go to cosmetology school and hopefully open up the salon of our dreams. Since I was the responsible one I rented an apartment under my name for the four of us.
My mother named me Rose. I thought she named me that because I was beautiful, I was so wrong. She says like roses have many thorns and I was one in her side. I was a spitting image of my father, brown hair and a heart shaped head, she hated it, see he left her for his assistant. I had to get away from her, that's the main reason the twins Kelly, and Katelynn, as well as Bre'ann and myself moved to LA.
After the girls and I finished moving our items in the apartment we went out to lunch.
"Ladies I can't believe we are in LA, I know I am ready to tan already," I said with my mouth stuffed with fries.
"Rose, Katelynn, Kelly," Bre'ann said looking down at her food, "I have something to tell you guys." She made a long pause. By this time I was all ears.
"Well, what is it." Katelynn whispered
"I have no better way to say this except I'm gay." Bre'ann said.
I was speechless, that came out of nowhere, plus the same girl that was sleeping around with the hottest quarterback in the school just said she was gay. "I don't understand, you stayed over Chad's house every weekend," I said
"Yeah, that was a cover up, I was over Chad's house to be with his sister Cheyenne." The twins and my jaw dropped, we knew Cheyenne and let me just say she got around. She tried to turn out any girl that she was attracted to, and she was successful at it. "I know this is a lot to take in but I
Your story was hot as hell, i loved it. hell, i wish it was me in that story
cuz the bartender sounded hot. keep writing and i cant wait for the next part.
The idea was hot, the erotica sexy. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
However, I would suggest that you get someone to seriously proof read your story
before submission next time, there are some grammatical errors and some phrasing
which is questionable.