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| JJ Forever |
Posted: 2009/7/15 23:21 Updated: 2009/7/15 23:21 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/7/12 From: Oregon Posts: 11 |
 Well Done I don't think anything I say will be different than what others have said in
one form or another, but I have to say this: I am truly sorry for your loss,
and your story was one of the best I have ever read here in LL. You bring a quality
here that some may not like, and some love. There are a lot of stories about
fucking, but yours was about lovemaking. It was clean, pure, and right. It will
always be one of my favorites. You deserve the "Story Of The Year" as well as
the 600+ votes. Thank You.
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| puddykat09 |
Posted: 2009/6/28 23:09 Updated: 2009/6/28 23:09 |
Flirt   Joined: 2009/6/26 From: state of bliss Posts: 24 |
 Snowfall Lisa,all i have to say is that you did one hell of an amazing job with this story
& i hope that the characters are still together even now... It was phenomenal
& it's now one of my new favorites... Hope to see more of your work here soon...
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| Riley |
Posted: 2009/2/12 18:14 Updated: 2009/2/12 18:14 |
Flirt   Joined: 2009/1/20 From: My girlfriend's bed lol. Posts: 29 |
 Greatness Wow is the only word crossing my mind. That was very well written and so sexy.
Everything in one in my opinion. Great job!!! Keep writing. ~Riley
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| softlips1989 |
Posted: 2008/12/7 12:12 Updated: 2008/12/7 12:12 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/8/15 From: new york Posts: 4 |
 Re: Thank you i hav to tell u that this story was incredible. its hurts to hear about sara
and im truely sorry about what happened. i believe the both of u were a beautiful
thing and i hope that ur doing well
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| softlips1989 |
Posted: 2008/12/7 12:10 Updated: 2008/12/7 12:10 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/8/15 From: new york Posts: 4 |
 Re: Congratulations Lisa you are the sweetest thing ever. i just read what u commented to lisa myst that
was unbelievable. the way u speak is beautiful
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| Tiger4945 |
Posted: 2008/10/18 17:28 Updated: 2008/10/18 17:28 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/9/2 From: Posts: 5 |
 Hottttttt !!!! There should be a button marked for 5 points !!!! They woudn't need to shovel
the snow. It would just melt around them !!
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| amalovanotarita |
Posted: 2008/10/14 18:22 Updated: 2008/10/14 18:22 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/7/30 From: Posts: 17 |
 Fantastic! I love your writing. It's pacy and racy yet full of intimate detail. So believable
and free from clichés too. Best thing I've read here. Congratulations.
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| lillith2008 |
Posted: 2008/10/13 20:50 Updated: 2008/10/13 20:50 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/10/11 From: Posts: 1 |
 Beautiful! I am amazed at the depth of emotion displayed in this story. Although not a lesbian,
I was touched by the relationship of the two women, and the erotic sensuality
of their love-making. Thank you!
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| annakarenina |
Posted: 2008/9/20 14:10 Updated: 2008/9/20 14:10 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/8/14 From: Out in the moonlight Posts: 3 |
 So Good! so good....oh so, so good
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| tastesgood |
Posted: 2008/8/24 10:56 Updated: 2008/8/24 10:56 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/8/15 From: Posts: 4 |
 hot... nice story was fingerin from beginning to end
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| madmaxx |
Posted: 2008/8/16 4:51 Updated: 2008/8/16 4:51 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/4/22 From: United States Posts: 14 |
 Pure poetry Congratulations, you successfully managed to capture every detail into words,
allowing us the ability to fully appreciate the experience.
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| curious87 |
Posted: 2008/7/25 1:07 Updated: 2008/7/25 1:07 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/7/25 From: Posts: 1 |
 ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! One of the most amazing stories I have ever read. You stole my fantasy right
out from under me. Keep writing!
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2008/7/19 9:23 Updated: 2008/7/19 9:23 |
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 Congratulations Lisa It's been quite some time since I read this amazing story of yours, Lisa. But
no matter how much time goes by the beautiful nature of what two women have found
in one another, the lust, passion and desire is still present, displayed beautifully
through your memories and choice of words. You shared something very special
with your lover, something many of us can only dream of. Hold on to those memories,
as this 'story of the year' upholds a tribute to a precious woman and time in
your life. Take care and may you find the strength to come back here someday
and continue writing because you truly are a remarkable author.
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| §~georgie~§ |
Posted: 2008/6/24 23:26 Updated: 2008/6/24 23:26 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/6/24 From: Posts: 9 |
 WOW! Wow...wow wow wow. Lisa you have an amazing talent. you brought this story to
life! And well I have read this story for the third time, and it still gets my
heart pounding and get that urge between my legs. Im very sorry for your loss
though. Sara did show you beautiful things and this story as said many times
before is an amazing tribute to her and your love. keep writing luv..cause i
i can't get enough.
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| fuckmeharderplz |
Posted: 2008/6/14 16:59 Updated: 2008/6/14 16:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/6/14 From: Posts: 2 |
 OMG This story makes me wet as hell i wish i could have been there
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| lovemenot12 |
Posted: 2008/6/10 23:27 Updated: 2008/6/10 23:27 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/6/10 From: Posts: 2 |
 love absolutely loved it.
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| gagirl91861 |
Posted: 2008/5/8 13:15 Updated: 2008/5/8 13:15 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/10 From: Posts: 2 |
 wonderful!!! I just got through reading and thought it was great, very good job. its very
steamy and well wrote.
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| Jonathan_Philips |
Posted: 2008/4/28 9:10 Updated: 2008/4/28 9:10 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/2/3 From: London UK Posts: 3012 |
 A very worthy winner I don't know why it has taken me so long to read this story, but I am glad that
I now have. I'm not surprised to read that this is a true story as its honesty
shines through. I accidentally caught what you said about the real Sara and I
am so terribly sorry. Your story acts as a wonderful tribute. Congratulations!
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| Saint-slave |
Posted: 2008/4/11 20:26 Updated: 2008/4/11 20:26 |
Flirt   Joined: 2008/3/29 From: UK Posts: 39 |
 wow this is one of my faves! i loved it, looking forward to reading more like this
xx
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| boobilicous2008 |
Posted: 2008/4/6 21:47 Updated: 2008/4/6 21:47 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/4/6 From: Jamaica Posts: 1 |
 blazing hot this story really good. makes me want to cum without touching myself
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| Emilysexc |
Posted: 2008/4/6 9:09 Updated: 2008/4/6 9:09 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/4/3 From: Australia Posts: 15 |
 Amazing The detail in this story was breathtaking...truly a wonderful pleasure to read:)...please
keep writing more...everyone needs to read this
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| Mz_Seductress |
Posted: 2008/3/23 23:40 Updated: 2008/3/23 23:40 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/8/15 From: Posts: 42 |
 !!!EXCELLENT!!! This definitely deserves story of the year. I loved the way you fully described
every movement, feeling etc. i dont think ther is enough words to describe how
beautifully written this story was looking forward to more
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| Xx8ball1 |
Posted: 2008/3/22 14:20 Updated: 2008/3/22 14:20 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/3/19 From: Posts: 1 |
 great story great sory wonderfully written
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2008/3/19 2:09 Updated: 2008/3/19 2:09 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
 shame on me i just read this, stopping to relieve myself a few times, every one is right,
you are the best we have in LL. such realism, you bring the reader into your
words and keep them. thank you sso very much
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| Eric |
Posted: 2008/3/18 13:21 Updated: 2008/3/18 13:21 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
 A Prayer of Thanks Anyone who reads this can enjoy its hotness. It is scorching. But I think it
is far more than that. I think it is a prayer to humanity, that it might see
the way two women can fall deeply in love and enjoy each other intimately in
as loving a way as any heterosexual couple can. When Sara enters, she clearly
has to have had very deep and sweet emotions for her friend Lisa. Otherwise she
would have taken advantage of her and just "took care of business." But she did
not do that. She very considerately, and lovingly, led Lisa through a most beautiful
art--the art of making love to another woman. To have let Sara do what she did
so trustingly, Lisa must have already cared for her too. There must have been
a kind of love at first sight. She already knew from that first moment that she
wanted you for a lifetime. Moreover, only someone who really knows a woman's
secrets could have written about love making in such intimate and true detail
so utterly lovingly. Lisa, it is a tribute to your love for Sara that you remembered
your first time in such detail. You write as if you are so vividly aware of that
moment in time as if you were looking at it right this very second. Only a woman
who was in love and would want her lover to be there for a lifetime would have
remembered every sacred detail as you do. In short, I didn't, as a reader who
loves women as the genuinely beautiful creatures they are, find it just hot,
or just a good read, but as one being grateful to you for showing the world the
profundity of the love you both shared in such utterly erotic and fully giving
ways. You and Sara were, and I am sure even now, genuinely fused into one, like
two hands in prayer. My heart aches for you though we have never met, and I am
sure that many women, and many men, will read this and see what is possible between
two loving women! For all those people this story affects in that way, I offer
you my sincere thanks for sharing this beautiful story. Don't worry Lisa, you
friend's memory will not only live on inside you, but in this story, and in every
person who reads it and is affected by it. By sharing it, you have guaranteed
her a kind of everlasting life. Bless you Lisa for daring to love.
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| amity |
Posted: 2008/3/13 21:14 Updated: 2008/3/13 21:14 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/1/27 From: Trinidad Posts: 6 |
 marvelous!!! i love it,my girl love it, you did a great job!!! can't wait to read more
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| red rose |
Posted: 2008/2/29 8:06 Updated: 2008/2/29 8:06 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/6/27 From: Posts: 1670 |
 A Wonderful Tribute... Amazingly enough, this was one of the first storys I read when I came here the
first couple of times as a guest...I couldn't vote then as a guest, but as I'm
a member now I have put that right...It's a beautiful tender love story...A Wonderful
and lasting tribute to your lady, she lives on in your well deserved story of
the year. x
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| gapdragon |
Posted: 2008/2/19 18:40 Updated: 2008/2/19 18:40 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/2/19 From: Posts: 1 |
 very, very sexy... i am feeling gorgeously aroused, i enjoyed this story very, very much. thank
you x
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| buddha1701d |
Posted: 2008/2/4 22:27 Updated: 2008/2/4 22:27 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/29 From: Texas Posts: 556 |
 Mixed emotions I am both happy for your winning the story of the year Lisa, but I am also saddened
for your loss. This is an excellent tribute to your relationship with Sara. Love
will find you again when and where you least expect. This is especially true
when you aren't even looking for it.
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| firey_lover |
Posted: 2008/1/17 23:37 Updated: 2008/1/17 23:37 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/10/24 From: California Posts: 75 |
 i don't know what to say. i think that through all those comments they've said everything
i could possibly say. all i'll add is that although i'm bi, i've never known
what 2 girls can do together, and that taught me a lot. thank you for giving
me ideas if i ever do decide to come out enough to get a girlfriend
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| stu_ful |
Posted: 2008/1/16 21:16 Updated: 2008/1/16 21:16 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/6/3 From: Posts: 656 |
 Very nice Congratulations on story of the year. A hot story for a hot time. I'm sure many
more will enjoy reading it as much as those who have.
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| hllblly |
Posted: 2008/1/16 16:56 Updated: 2008/1/16 16:56 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/24 From: North Carolina Posts: 13 |
 Lisa Myst does not miss I reread this tale quite some time after the first peruse. Love is even better
the second time. Seems like that has been said before.
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| prettypussy83 |
Posted: 2008/1/14 15:38 Updated: 2008/1/14 15:38 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/9/26 From: Posts: 7 |
 ??? Are you sure this is a fictional story???? It sounds to me like a real experience,
one that I would love to try!!
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| bushman69 |
Posted: 2008/1/14 2:04 Updated: 2008/1/14 2:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/11/26 From: Ohio north of the river Posts: 242 |
 Snowfall Hot story but more than that, it could be the basis for a story of anyone being
introduced to anything. Glad it was properly honored.
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| DragonFire |
Posted: 2008/1/6 18:22 Updated: 2008/1/6 18:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Sadly, Ohio Posts: 232 |
 wow Fantastic story, I commend your writing ability.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2008/1/5 9:58 Updated: 2008/1/5 9:58 |
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 Congratulations Lisa Hi Lisa, I joined LL last night, and the first story I had the pleasure of reading
was “Snowfall”, the Story of the Year. CONGRATULATIONS!!! I was thoroughly impressed,
simply a brilliant piece of writing, Lisa. This was an incredibly well written,
warm, flirtatious, sensual and extremely erotic piece of work. Anyone can have
just sex, but this was so much more, the lovemaking was so eloquently on display
here. With a subtle look, soft spoken word, or gentle touch, the deep heartfelt
love for each other is brilliantly displayed. The passionate lovemaking between
you and Sara was superbly authored, tastefully written. Deep emotions, rich details,
sensual, erotic and unbelievably hot. Almost beyond mere words. Your love was
abundantly clear throughout, on glorious display here, through the splendid words
that are written. A glowing tribute to a love that is pure and very deeply felt.
I was later saddened to learn of the passing of your lover and best friend. My
sincere condolences and I truly hope you will continue to write in her memory,
as you hold on to the joy and happiness she brought into your life. You should
get many comments on this exquisite story, and every one will be richly deserved.
My sincere accolades for a job well done. I look forward to reading many more
of your stories in the future, take care. -DL
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| BeMyGuest |
Posted: 2008/1/5 8:08 Updated: 2008/1/5 8:08 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/1/20 From: Australia Posts: 59 |
 loved it i read this story a while ago and i can't believe i didn't express my gratitude
at such a fantastic story. It was incredibly well written, so much so it was
like i was there too...(in my dreams!!..:) )
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| pops134 |
Posted: 2008/1/3 23:07 Updated: 2008/1/3 23:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/10/9 From: somewhere between the stars and you !! Posts: 388 |
 Our librarian shows us that she sure know the best ones Lisa what a well written and damn hottt !!! story.....and i can see why it's
our stry of the year GREAT job and dont stop writing
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| luckykissx5 |
Posted: 2008/1/3 16:45 Updated: 2008/1/3 16:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/3/3 From: Some Girls are Just Born Lucky Posts: 1691 |
 Congrats. This was an amazing storie. Well written and downright hot. Thank you.
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| sleep_less99 |
Posted: 2008/1/3 14:08 Updated: 2008/1/3 14:08 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/5/8 From: Posts: 83 |
 A wonderful tribute to Sara congratulations on 'story of the year'. I'm sure she would have been very pleased
for you...
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| thinksexy |
Posted: 2008/1/2 22:31 Updated: 2008/1/2 22:31 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/12/17 From: Posts: 2871 |
 Lisa, I'm so sorry for your loss, she sounds like a very beautiful woman. Your writing
is amazing, the details you chose to include so perfect as they brought you right
into the story. I believe this is a mesmerizing tribute for your friend. Congrats
on "Story of the Year"... xoxo Think
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| itsallfun |
Posted: 2008/1/2 19:50 Updated: 2008/1/2 19:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/5/20 From: Posts: 678 |
 I want snow... I hate cold weather but I want a major snow storm right now...... Completley
amazing and fantastic story from the very fist word... Fun
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| pen2extacy |
Posted: 2007/9/25 18:58 Updated: 2007/9/25 18:58 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/7/4 From: California Posts: 32 |
 AMAZING! Oh my god what a great story! You did an amazing job writing this. It was so
hot, so romantic and like someone said, not dirty. It made lesbian sex in it's
purest form what it actually is, beautiful. Great job!
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/9/8 19:03 Updated: 2007/9/8 19:03 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 66 |
 Thank you I'm sorry I haven't been here for a while. The woman in this story was my best
friend as well as my long-time lover. She passed away of uterine cancer on August
15th. I've had a hard time coming back to read this, but your comments made me
smile and know she brought a lot of joy and happiness. I know that may sound
weird to put on this site, but she was a very sexual, sensual woman. She enjoyed
my writing a lot. Her real name was Sara. She said she wouldn't mind. So this
story is in memory of Sara. And thank you - all of you - again. Lisa
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| girllostwoman |
Posted: 2007/8/29 1:14 Updated: 2007/8/29 1:14 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/8/14 From: kansas Posts: 100 |
 oh yeah i wish i had a neighbor like that very hot my panties are soaking wet i wish
it snow
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| LittleMissVixen |
Posted: 2007/7/31 21:24 Updated: 2007/7/31 21:24 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/9/24 From: New Hampshire Posts: 13 |
 WOW! That had me so hot....I was "finished" before I even got to the end! hehehe ;)
....Thanks and keeping writing, you're great!
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| Lubinar |
Posted: 2007/7/16 8:07 Updated: 2007/7/16 8:07 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/7/4 From: nevada Posts: 3 |
 Re: Thanks is one of the best drafted stories i ever come across. cheers
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| sexylesbian |
Posted: 2007/7/11 15:52 Updated: 2007/7/11 15:52 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/6/26 From: Maryland Posts: 15 |
 who's gonna clean up this wetness... oh.....dear.....God.....i don't know what to say. Lisa....your work is..fabulous!
I wouldn't stop for a second until i read this whole thing. My vibrator plunged
so deep inside me while reading this i thought my vagine would expand to an unimaginable
sixe! Keep up the amazing work....i'm looking forward to more.
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2007/7/10 9:31 Updated: 2007/7/10 9:34 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :) Posts: 5321 |
 HOT, SEXY & SO VERY PASSIONATE !! Lisa, You are fantastic! The only thing missing in this story, was my thick tongue
wedged between your grinding clits! I can taste you both now...... So Delish???
Mmmmmmm... Thanks for the? ... Nevermind :) Write On you tasty devil !! Jim PS
> Is this out on DVD yet? "I'll BUY IT!" I can't afford to rent it Over & Over!
BEAUTIFUL !
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| sailor |
Posted: 2007/7/4 19:41 Updated: 2007/7/4 19:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/12/11 From: East coast USA Posts: 507 |
 Ummmmm...Lisa... .... there is a ring of reality here...me thinks.
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| wise_owl |
Posted: 2007/6/27 8:28 Updated: 2007/6/27 8:28 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/5/29 From: Right here last time I looked. Posts: 41 |
 Amazing Erotic, tender, romantic and very hot. Definitely one of the best stories in
the Library!
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| Morgan-Rose |
Posted: 2007/5/25 13:51 Updated: 2007/5/25 13:51 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/1/28 From: England Posts: 39 |
 Fantastic! I loved reading it.. xx
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| MyThongIsWet |
Posted: 2007/5/21 22:51 Updated: 2007/5/21 22:51 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/5 From: Posts: 3 |
 sexy! Very well written, and made me very hot! Keep it up!
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| wickedsummer |
Posted: 2007/5/19 14:36 Updated: 2007/5/19 14:36 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/5/10 From: WV Posts: 26 |
 Amazing! Wow, that was very lusty. I loved it. When do we get part two?
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| Dmus |
Posted: 2007/4/30 2:58 Updated: 2007/4/30 2:58 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/4/29 From: Kingston, Jamaica Posts: 5 |
 wow that was truly a night to remember, great story, i enjoyed every word
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| geobob |
Posted: 2007/4/27 0:21 Updated: 2007/4/27 0:21 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: San Marcos, Tx Posts: 253 |
 snowstorm wow,lady, makes me feel like a bumbling idiot when trying arouse a women
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| bardius |
Posted: 2007/4/26 7:56 Updated: 2007/4/26 7:56 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/24 From: Posts: 3 |
 hi nice as, 2 bad ur husband doesnt know wat ur doin while hes doin sum1 elese lol..
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| caprihorn1 |
Posted: 2007/4/24 13:49 Updated: 2007/4/24 13:49 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/10/31 From: Midwest Posts: 35 |
 snowfall Incredibly erotic. You truly could feel the tension, passion and lust. Salute.
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| honeydip |
Posted: 2007/4/23 22:16 Updated: 2007/4/23 22:16 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/4/23 From: Posts: 1 |
 Blazin Hot This was just the type of story I like! I'm A trib girl so I love stories with
speaks specficially about the intimate kiss!
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| That_guy |
Posted: 2007/4/23 15:20 Updated: 2007/4/23 15:20 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Manchester, England Posts: 169 |
 Something new to me Absolutely superb. Straight to the point, steamy and sexy. I have to say I've
never heard of two women rubbing together in that way before... guess the fact
I'm a bloke hinders me somewhat in that respect but I was really turned on by
it, you described it so vividly!
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| Miss Bee |
Posted: 2007/4/23 7:25 Updated: 2007/4/23 7:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/22 From: Buzzing about...here, there and everywhere Posts: 878 |
 Let it snow, let it snow , let it snow! Wow Lisa,
I had to take this one upstairs - twice!
A fabulous story, beautifully written and really intense.
Bee xx
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| Marnie Starla |
Posted: 2007/4/21 9:40 Updated: 2007/4/21 9:40 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2005/9/28 From: Posts: 150 |
 Teary-eyed I couldn't blink! I had to finish reading the story!
Wow.
Thank you!
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| silverfox |
Posted: 2007/4/21 6:47 Updated: 2007/4/21 6:47 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/27 From: scotland Posts: 168 |
 first time , snowfall so hot,keep up the good work,got me hard,right from the start....excellent
work
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| nicedaddy |
Posted: 2007/4/20 12:27 Updated: 2007/4/20 12:27 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/1/30 From: tennessee, usa Posts: 133 |
 Very nice! Makes you wish it would snow more often. Great story! Very sensual
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| Susan815 |
Posted: 2007/4/16 22:00 Updated: 2007/4/16 22:00 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/29 From: Posts: 2 |
 Lisa Your HOTTT Excellant story. I am a female and i gave you a blazing because you made me
hot. My pussy was twitching as i read your story.Keep the good writing up.
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| paulanka |
Posted: 2007/4/16 6:41 Updated: 2007/4/16 6:41 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/4/15 From: Posts: 1 |
 blazing story want more stories like this
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| Lesbian_lover69 |
Posted: 2007/4/16 6:31 Updated: 2007/4/16 6:31 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Wollongong Posts: 3 |
 wow wow realli great had me going from the start
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| AllyM |
Posted: 2007/4/15 18:59 Updated: 2007/4/15 18:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/4/15 From: Posts: 3 |
 Great! All I have to say is...wow....
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| Innocent_Pisces |
Posted: 2007/4/14 11:28 Updated: 2007/4/14 11:28 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/12/19 From: UK./US. Posts: 6 |
 Beautiful and Amazing I'm completly speechless.. beautiful..
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/4/12 0:01 Updated: 2007/4/12 0:01 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 66 |
 Re: Snowfall I'm still in shock. Thank you for the kind comments and replies.
I really am surprised considering the talent on this site. Appreciation fro
m the bottom of my ... heart. lol
Lisa xoxox
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| SnowFlake4U |
Posted: 2007/4/9 7:44 Updated: 2007/4/9 7:44 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/29 From: Virginia Posts: 355 |
 Snowfall This has got to be one of the best stories I have read here. The way you wr
ote about a woman's first time with another woman truly aroused me, making
me want a woman. I will read this story many times.
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| lappinglisa |
Posted: 2007/4/7 12:21 Updated: 2007/4/7 12:21 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2005/11/12 From: Posts: 74 |
 yummy Hi Lisa,
good job...u took your time and it paid off w/a hot, sultry story, loved it
love lisa
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| italiankitty |
Posted: 2007/4/4 16:37 Updated: 2007/4/4 16:37 |
Chat Moderator   Joined: 2006/3/1 From: IL Posts: 765 |
 Yummmmmmmmm Mmmmmmm.....now that was a super hot story!! Makes me want to find a woman
of my own to have that with :)
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| puertoricanlove |
Posted: 2007/4/4 9:39 Updated: 2007/4/4 9:39 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/8 From: fl. Posts: 4 |
 Re: Story of the month? I think your story was just beautiful. It was one wild ass thrill from star
t to finish. Keep writing your great. Drop me a line sometime i would like
to chat with you.
The name is CARRIE
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| puertoricanlove |
Posted: 2007/4/4 9:33 Updated: 2007/4/4 9:33 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/8 From: fl. Posts: 4 |
 awesome that was just sexy. all the way sexy
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| david48 |
Posted: 2007/4/3 13:41 Updated: 2007/4/3 13:41 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/22 From: Dallas Posts: 2 |
 another kind of "non-commitment On another site I have commented on this kind of story often. Like most me
n I think two women together having hot monkey sex, is the ultimate male fa
ntasy event. I am unabashedly straight, so the other side of that coin has
no interest for me at all. But hot women in lust with one another? Porn
Heaven in my opinion. Great story. Keep writing...
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/4/3 4:52 Updated: 2007/4/3 4:52 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 66 |
 Story of the month? Pardon me whilst I scream. AHHHHHH.
Sorry. I am so honored to have my story voted. Thank you! I didn't know unt
il now.
Lisa x
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| 2luscious |
Posted: 2007/4/3 4:23 Updated: 2007/4/3 4:23 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/14 From: Always checking my headings ... Posts: 2235 |
 That's how I would want it to be! Lisa, you have captured your reality here in a loving, hot, intense way tha
t came thru every single adjective, verb and sentence! It was more than ho
t, it was rich and had a dream like fantasy quality that sometimes make the
real steamy with imagination. Thanks, babe! ... Story of the month it i
s! CONGRATS!
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| Lady Evie 69 |
Posted: 2007/4/3 1:15 Updated: 2007/4/3 1:15 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/13 From: Little Rock, AR Posts: 4 |
 EXCELLENT!!! That was a wonderful story. So well written, that I read it twice. If only
I had a neighbor like that...
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| SthrnAtHeart |
Posted: 2007/4/2 21:29 Updated: 2007/4/2 21:29 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/2/16 From: Posts: 1 |
 Wish I was your neighbor That was HOT HOT HOT. I wish I was your neighbor. Loved every minute of it.
Hope you write more.
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| nunya40 |
Posted: 2007/4/2 17:32 Updated: 2007/4/2 17:32 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/1/18 From: Springfield, OR. Posts: 2 |
 awsome!! Made me sooooo wet just reading this....
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| MANLYONE |
Posted: 2007/4/2 1:02 Updated: 2007/4/2 1:02 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/29 From: Posts: 6 |
 Exhilarating This story had me rubbing my crotch through my pants creating quite a tent.
I enjoy your descriptive style of writing. It is no wonder why you are so
popular. I have all the intentions of placing you in my favorite authors
list.
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| jtweety |
Posted: 2007/4/1 15:14 Updated: 2007/4/1 15:14 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/9/27 From: Morgan Hill, CA Posts: 193 |
 So .... ... how'd it go? LOL, that was so blazing hot, can't wait for more. Thank
you for sharing, she's a very lucky lady.
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/3/30 2:57 Updated: 2007/3/30 2:57 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 66 |
 Thank you I just noticed the 'story of the week' and want to thank you. I'm so honour
ed.
Lisa xo
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| Fiery Female |
Posted: 2007/3/29 21:55 Updated: 2007/3/29 21:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/14 From: Posts: 15 |
 Good Job Much different than your other stories. I like this approach much better. K
eep it up.
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| violetta |
Posted: 2007/3/28 9:55 Updated: 2007/3/28 9:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/19 From: Sweating in the Delta Posts: 16 |
 A New Favorite What a lovely way to perk up my moaning, er, morning! I can easily believe
that every word was inspired by experience, as these well told details all
rang quite true with me.
Overwhelmingly I find that woman to woman sex is, perplexingly in most form
s of telling, either hastily underexpressed or sensationalized into traditi
onal masculinized terminology. This story is exceptional.
Definitely one of my new favorites. Thanks!
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| Lindorie |
Posted: 2007/3/27 21:14 Updated: 2007/3/27 21:14 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/12/21 From: Ontario, Canada Posts: 3 |
 Holy Cow Hot damn!!!! Awesome story....
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| viola |
Posted: 2007/3/27 15:22 Updated: 2007/3/27 15:22 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/9/3 From: Posts: 78 |
 Excellent! Another incredible piece, Lisa. One of the best I've read here.
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| hotsex |
Posted: 2007/3/27 8:26 Updated: 2007/3/27 8:26 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/13 From: Posts: 5 |
 Re: well deserving of story of the week! loved every minute of it. well done
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2007/3/27 0:50 Updated: 2007/3/27 0:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 2122 |
 well deserving of story of the week! exquisitely written and well paced. loved the ending! keep it up Lisa!
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/3/9 19:06 Updated: 2007/3/9 19:06 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 66 |
 Thanks I'm grateful for the reviews and votes. Kendra and I are still together alt
hough we don't tell anyone we're more than friends. I owe her a lot for tea
ching me the things she has. I changed a few details like her name and some
of the back story but the sex parts are all what happened. One of my favor
ite memories- and one I get off to so often.
Thanks again!
Lisa x
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| Nasty Karl |
Posted: 2007/3/7 22:52 Updated: 2007/3/8 23:17 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/12/7 From: Posts: 142 |
 EXCELLENT! Lisa I gave you a Blazing and your story wasn’t the least bit nasty. It was
well written and sexy as hell. You are a writer.
I came back read it again and added it to my favorites. I to love to eat pu
ssy.
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2007/3/7 1:20 Updated: 2007/3/7 1:20 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Congratulations Wonderful story, lusty from the start.
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