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| sefriendlyguy |
Posted: 2010/1/2 3:33 Updated: 2010/1/2 3:33 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/7/1 From: Seattle Posts: 5 |
 a good job of teasing us!! this is a good story!!! very erotic love story, too bad there is not more of
it, like later on that day!
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| Bfsfaerie |
Posted: 2008/11/5 6:38 Updated: 2008/11/5 6:38 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/2/28 From: Dracula's bed chamber Posts: 15 |
 :3 That was excellent. very well written. kept you captivated :3
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| Morgan-Rose |
Posted: 2008/1/5 13:04 Updated: 2008/1/5 13:04 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/1/28 From: England Posts: 39 |
 ummmm ooooo i like..i want more..please write more? i absolutley loved it!! Morgan
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2007/9/22 18:09 Updated: 2007/9/22 18:10 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
 thsis is so good I got so orgasmic I diddled myself into an orgasm right allong with her, my god
this is my 2nd comment, so that tells you how good it is
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2007/9/10 17:13 Updated: 2007/9/10 17:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
 oh my that was so arousing...I actually got dizzy reading this, great writing,,,really
great
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| ghostwords |
Posted: 2007/8/26 15:19 Updated: 2007/8/26 15:19 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/8/8 From: Posts: 234 |
 Quick quickie Brief, but fun. Do you plan to continue this?
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| CanITellUSmThin |
Posted: 2007/7/25 1:33 Updated: 2007/7/25 1:33 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/7/25 From: Here and There Posts: 40 |
 :) Ooh. Very nice. I really loved it!
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| Auzriel |
Posted: 2007/4/30 16:53 Updated: 2007/4/30 16:53 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/4/30 From: Posts: 24 |
 I love curiosity... I would be lying if I said this story didn't turn me on, however, I feel that
it was rushed and left something to be desired. Be a little more discrptive.
Otherwise, you've told a fantastic tale! Good job. -Auzriel Voc
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| italiankitty |
Posted: 2007/4/4 16:50 Updated: 2007/4/4 16:50 |
Chat Moderator   Joined: 2006/3/1 From: IL Posts: 765 |
 Hot...... this was a good story....am extremely turned on.....mmmmmmmm
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2007/3/20 17:54 Updated: 2007/3/20 17:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 2122 |
 perfect! Really nice short Lisa! I'm really liking your work!
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2007/3/11 0:46 Updated: 2007/3/11 0:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Good stuff Nice Lisa, very very nice.
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| sailor |
Posted: 2007/3/10 12:41 Updated: 2007/3/10 12:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/12/11 From: East coast USA Posts: 506 |
 Frankly Scarlett.... ... that was fucking perfect... ahhhh... true stories; nothing like them.
Excellent!
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| tom82 |
Posted: 2007/3/10 10:11 Updated: 2007/3/10 10:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/22 From: London, UK Posts: 370 |
 i agree with JP this is a very hot and sexy quick story. got me hard at the mention of 'not
a lot else!' i know im easy but the female body is amazingly beautiful...
and when there are two of them very close together!!
nice story lisa. thanks xx
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| Lisa_Myst |
Posted: 2007/3/9 19:00 Updated: 2007/3/9 19:00 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: USA Posts: 66 |
 Thank you I sincerely appreciate the reviews and votes.
I didn't include any emotion because there wasn't any other than respect an
d friendship. I also left out certain details on purpose as they would only
served to slow it down. Becky and I had been flirting with the idea of a g
irls' time together but I didn't want to scare her or make her uncomfortabl
e. When she touched my leg, I was pretty surprised.
As for it being contrived, no, but I'm aware why someone could believe that
. These things don't happen every day, unfortunately, but wouldn't it be ni
ce if they did? *winks* Thanks again.
Lisa x
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| lappinglisa |
Posted: 2007/3/9 11:48 Updated: 2007/3/9 11:48 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2005/11/12 From: Posts: 74 |
 becky and lisa hi, my name is also lisa and i loved this tease of a story, more girl, more
lisa
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| Jonathan_Philips |
Posted: 2007/3/9 9:25 Updated: 2007/3/9 9:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/2/3 From: London UK Posts: 3011 |
 Congratulations! Well I thought it was great! It was really nicely written. You managed the
'quicky' (something I cannot do) without it seeming rushed or lacking in de
tail and it was a very hot story on top of everything else. No need for mor
e. Our imaginations can decide what happened next. Well done! JP x
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| viola |
Posted: 2007/3/9 1:14 Updated: 2007/3/9 1:14 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/9/3 From: Posts: 78 |
 Excellent! Fabulous start-- way to leave us hanging! My only issue is that this seems
to be a bit too contrived to be a true story. Nevertheless, good job!
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| jessica123 |
Posted: 2007/3/8 18:48 Updated: 2007/3/8 18:48 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: Rochester, NY Posts: 1 |
 nice very good start, but it needs a little more. show how both of you felt. Oth
erwise, a great start. You had me wet and wanting more. I'd love to see wha
t happens!
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