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Poetry: Love:
  Fete Is A Fate: I Am Rom (1/1)  

48 votes
Author: Eric  Published: 11/27/2006  story views: 499
 


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Fete is a Fate:

   I Am Rom

   Shy Eric

 

I am Rom,

My life it doth fly,

Through hither and yonder,

We ride you and I.

 

Through the earth’s golden valleys,

To the mountains above,

We hang, heads in sorrow,

No-“where” to call home.

 

Twas ever a “one day,”

A moment of bliss,

Saw first my “Dark Eyes,”

In the heavens domed skies.

 

Stars all a glitter,

The augury told,

Fate it embraced me,

My heart it grew bold.

 

Her fire it consumed me,

Lasting rebirths in our soul,

Her wishes ensnared me,

The earth near took its hold.

 

Dark Eyes, she was thrilling,

Breasts filled with life’s milk.

Her body was satin,

Topoi soft or like silk.

 

My fingers were blessed there,

My nostrils, all my toes,

They’d leap in such silence,

Yet they’d throb in life’s snows!

 

Wave after wave of  sweet cream,

So heavenly salty,

Caressing my light house,

So joyed to be bawdy.

 

She sucked me  in deeply,

My feet flew into mid-air!

As my nose sought out treasure,

Under clitoris and hair.

 

Then out again quick-ly,

To draw me back in,

My breaths they were many,

From her forces within.

 

Dancing the Gypsy,

On life’s open flower,

My life rose within me,

My maleness, now power!

 

Oh the moments were precious,

Ah my senses so filled,

Giving in to her daring,

How I learned to care!

 

But Dark Eyes grew vicious,

That I learned to fear,

The sweetest, soft places,

My heart burned by her glare!

 

Once more I am Rom,

My life it doth fly,

Through hither and yonder,

We ride you and I.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Vote:
Total Votes: 48
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sloc
Posted: 2009/5/9 16:24  Updated: 2009/5/9 16:24
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2009/4/23
From: Switzerland
Posts: 415
 Loved it
Both carnal and tender - a wonderful mix! Thank you
8PUSSIES
Posted: 2009/4/18 18:11  Updated: 2009/4/18 18:11
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2009/1/22
From: frolicking naked in the forest . . .
Posts: 7238
 Life's pleasures:
Much of life is fleeting. We must grab and enjoy the best moments while we can. Then we must savor them when there are none to grab. -------#8
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/12/11 18:52  Updated: 2007/12/11 18:52
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 you do this so well
saying so much in so few words, well done
Layla
Posted: 2007/12/8 12:02  Updated: 2007/12/8 12:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/15
From: State of Disillusion
Posts: 736
 A moment of bliss
Was it worth it for Rom to taste that single moment of bliss? Did it change him or affect him at all? This poem has beautiful words but lacks the emotion of some of your other works. Not meaning I did'nt like it because I do. I can just tell you write this one with your head and the others your heart. It is a nice telling of an epic tale. Your words paint lovely vivid pictures.
Lee
Posted: 2006/12/12 16:01  Updated: 2006/12/12 16:01
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Chicago
Posts: 95
 Fete is a Fate
You show a real nack for poetry Eric! You write well and it is intresting as well! Keep writting pal!
oxfordrhythm
Posted: 2006/11/30 15:03  Updated: 2006/11/30 15:03
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: somwhere between church and state...
Posts: 2122
 delightful
Eric, that was a real treat to read. On the surface it's kind of soaring and optimistic and even whimsical or jaunty in the language and metaphor — But I like the way you kind of subvert that and twist it around with a bit of darkness like an underlying heretical element that pokes through. I like it. Reads a little deeper each time.
alterego
Posted: 2006/11/28 17:35  Updated: 2006/11/28 17:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/6/20
From: I have been banned from chat while talking to someone in private
Posts: 1804
 Very Deep
I have to admit that I always have had a difficult time with poetry so it took me a long time to read this. I had to look up a few words also. (Thanks, I always like a challenge :)) It was a very deep poem and I applaud you for your first publication on Lusty Library. I still think you should publish your story though.
erotic section
Posted: 2006/11/27 19:24  Updated: 2006/11/27 19:24
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/16
From: In the eye of the storm
Posts: 2381
 Excellent
You packed a passionate tale into these excellent words.