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Poetry: Love:
  Honey?? (1/1)  

48 votes
Author: Eric  Published: 12/12/2006  story views: 757
 


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Honey??

Shy Eric

Honey??  Is that you??
I can't see in the night
Though the hopes and the dreams
Are still burning bright

In the brightness of day
In the darkness of night
I love you I love you
But you are away…

Should you come to me now
While my heart still knows how
To love life in fun
Our victories won…

While the smile on my heart
Holds on to be ready
For your first Hello
Its timbre I’ll know…

 

Who you are in your kiss
Who you are in our bliss
How our lives fit together
For ever and ever

 
Your spirit so gentle
Your body so giving
Your blessings accepted
No meaning excepted

 

I long so to hold you
Our bodies entwined
Know your sweet Eden
Our pulses sublime

 

I long so to hold you
To my soul ever open
To your love everlasting
Sweet memory lasting

 

Yet hidden you linger
My heart may not bear it
A life torn asunder
There's no one to share it

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Total Votes: 48
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8PUSSIES
Posted: 2009/4/18 18:01  Updated: 2009/4/18 18:01
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2009/1/22
From: frolicking naked in the forest . . .
Posts: 7243
 Superbly written, sublimely felt--
Your talents, unfettered; Your soul bared to all; Your words salve our heartbreaks when, perchance, we might fall.
Eric
Posted: 2007/12/16 16:35  Updated: 2007/12/16 16:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: cyberspace
Posts: 2219
 Re: Yearning
OMG Layla, You read me so well darling. I am humbled to know you and Think and Pen read my work. I love you all for it. If only I knew how to repay you....
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/12/11 18:47  Updated: 2007/12/11 18:47
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 it is truely lovely
so soft and sweet, tender and loving thank you my love well written
Layla
Posted: 2007/12/8 11:37  Updated: 2007/12/8 11:37
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/15
From: State of Disillusion
Posts: 736
 Yearning
"While my heart still knows how" This sounds so much like stuff I used to write. This poem does a wonderful job of expressing the yearning that still lingers in a broken heart.
angechanteuse
Posted: 2007/11/4 1:08  Updated: 2007/11/4 1:08
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/9/20
From: College Town USA
Posts: 1305
 honey
That was so sweet and loving my darling eric...amazing. Kisses sweetheart
alterego
Posted: 2006/12/12 17:23  Updated: 2006/12/12 17:23
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/6/20
From: I have been banned from chat while talking to someone in private
Posts: 1804
 good one
That was good :)
Lee
Posted: 2006/12/12 15:50  Updated: 2006/12/12 15:50
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Chicago
Posts: 95
 Honey
Great Job Eric keep em comming
cbw77
Posted: 2006/12/12 15:48  Updated: 2006/12/12 15:48
Virgin
Joined: 2006/12/8
From: Hampshire
Posts: 8
 Smiles
Oh eric thats lovely xx