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Poetry: Love:
  I Love You Suzy (1/1)  

63 votes
Author: Eric  Published: 11/29/2006  story views: 977
 


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I love You Suzy

Shy Eric

Eyes so light blue
Like the heavens above
Stole my heart away
Sweet gestures of love

Lips made for kissing
Wear an endearing sweetness
A kindness there shining
I see my completeness

Your skin is like satin
Your face oh so soft
Slight brush of my hand
Just sends me aloft

Gold hair is so lovely
Curves gently round your face
Caressing and holding
Thy head, as fashioned in lace

My lips were both made
For cheeks made in heaven
My hands just to hold you
My arms to enfold you

I long so to reach them
Your wonderful charms
And keep them forever
In these loving arms

I hope it makes it!!! lol
Shy
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Total Votes: 63
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stillpure
Posted: 2009/9/9 16:20  Updated: 2009/9/9 16:20
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/1/12
From: NY
Posts: 5919
 ...
Very sweet and romantic, well done!
Jayne's Dreams
Posted: 2009/6/15 1:13  Updated: 2009/6/15 1:13
Bookworm
Joined: 2009/5/21
From: Colorado USA
Posts: 87
 To be Suzy
A beautiful poem - simple in its elegance, showing a true depth of feeling.
saucylady
Posted: 2009/5/31 9:31  Updated: 2009/5/31 9:31
Virgin
Joined: 2009/2/16
From: England
Posts: 18
 I love you Suzie
So romantic, I loved it!
8PUSSIES
Posted: 2009/4/18 18:07  Updated: 2009/4/18 18:07
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2009/1/22
From: frolicking naked in the forest . . .
Posts: 7241
 Soothing the ache---
Sometimes writing down the words soothe the heart. I know it helps me.
Eric
Posted: 2008/9/28 22:59  Updated: 2008/9/28 22:59
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: cyberspace
Posts: 2219
 I Still Love You Suzy
Thank you to all of you who have expressed such lovely sentiments about this poem. Fact is, I am not sorry I wrote it as I am still in love with Suzy.
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/12/11 18:50  Updated: 2007/12/11 18:50
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 yep a ture romantic
and one who expresses himself very well
angechanteuse
Posted: 2007/10/5 22:54  Updated: 2007/10/5 22:54
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/9/20
From: College Town USA
Posts: 1305
 wow
I am in awe of the romanticism of this poem. It moves me and is truly beautiful. I loved it --Ange
gaspass
Posted: 2007/1/6 15:20  Updated: 2007/1/6 15:20
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/1/1
From:
Posts: 125
 Re: Charming
Great poetry of yearning. Keep at it!
McMike
Posted: 2006/12/28 0:01  Updated: 2006/12/28 0:01
Virgin
Joined: 2006/12/27
From: where i hang my hat
Posts: 1
 i Love You Suzy
Eric...Great stuff. I'm pleasantly suprised by the quality of your writing
majickchick
Posted: 2006/12/1 7:02  Updated: 2006/12/1 7:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/21
From: in a lil msn box... teasing ;)
Posts: 668
 lovely
very sweet,
oxfordrhythm
Posted: 2006/11/30 15:15  Updated: 2006/11/30 15:15
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: somwhere between church and state...
Posts: 2122
 fade in
Eric, you are becoming quite the prolific poet. Another nice one that stirs up lovely airy images and emotions.
savageminstrel
Posted: 2006/11/29 22:19  Updated: 2006/11/29 22:19
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/6/10
From: Gaia
Posts: 6179
 nice
Nice poem, my friend, makes me think of someone I know.
missminx
Posted: 2006/11/29 19:24  Updated: 2006/11/29 19:24
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/5/20
From:
Posts: 747
 Charming
This was beautiful Shy...poetry is a forgotton joy I feel. You've triggered me to read more.
justa girl
Posted: 2006/11/29 17:41  Updated: 2006/11/29 17:41
Virgin
Joined: 2006/9/16
From: somwhere
Posts: 6
 lovely
loved it eric!!!! very sweet