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| stillpure |
Posted: 2008/8/8 16:04 Updated: 2008/8/8 16:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/1/12 From: Posts: 227 |
 ..... ..........................Damn.
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| Tasteyyy.x |
Posted: 2008/6/11 18:00 Updated: 2008/6/11 18:00 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/6/2 From: England Posts: 6 |
I like the fact.. That it was shaped like a cock :) It made me smile. But the poem is bloody brilliant.
I did wonder how people would write poems about sex, but it's good. I might try
it some time!
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| unicornryder |
Posted: 2008/1/29 0:20 Updated: 2008/1/29 0:20 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/1/16 From: east coast, US Posts: 13 |
Heeheee... This made me smile and clench my thighs together at the same time! Nicely done.
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| bushman69 |
Posted: 2007/12/20 0:41 Updated: 2007/12/20 0:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/11/26 From: Ohio north of the river Posts: 214 |
A Sex Poem I read all your poems tonight. This one was my favorite. Very nice.
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2007/11/10 14:24 Updated: 2007/11/10 14:24 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/1/19 From: florida Posts: 2366 |
WOW!!!!!! beyond my ability to praise...just so much
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| Precious Pet |
Posted: 2007/11/2 13:25 Updated: 2007/11/2 13:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/9/11 From: In your mind right now Posts: 986 |
Very good! The visual layout as well as the wording made for an excellent poem! Very well
done!
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| freddyair |
Posted: 2007/10/25 8:05 Updated: 2007/10/25 8:05 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/2/26 From: Merrie Olde England Posts: 2415 |
SEX Layla, I loved the poem. I then thought I'd try writing one of my own... but
I'd come up short, I'm sure. :) =f=
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| pen2extacy |
Posted: 2007/9/26 17:48 Updated: 2007/9/26 17:48 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/7/4 From: California Posts: 31 |
This was great! Write more!!!!
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| sailor |
Posted: 2007/9/25 16:57 Updated: 2007/9/25 16:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2005/12/11 From: East coast USA Posts: 425 |
Damn! ...Damn!...Hot
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| sexscribe |
Posted: 2007/9/1 19:43 Updated: 2007/9/1 19:43 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/8/12 From: Australia Posts: 2 |
A Sex Poem Had a great flow to it. Brilliant!
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| Snagoran |
Posted: 2007/7/6 10:53 Updated: 2007/7/6 10:53 |
Flirt Joined: 2007/7/4 From: Wales Posts: 39 |
A brazen verse Beautiful mixture of the crude and romantic. Maybe the crude should be more romantic
but then it would lose its rasping appeal . Thankyou might I suggset it has a
bit of the John Skelton touch
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| Montana Norman |
Posted: 2007/6/17 15:56 Updated: 2007/6/20 16:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/6/11 From: Dallas Texas Posts: 808 |
Well done! You captured the heat, the passion of the first lust. And I gotta say, that really
is an interesting layout of your poem! Very, very creative...... Keep it up!!!
No pun intended
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| foreveropen |
Posted: 2007/5/1 20:50 Updated: 2007/5/1 20:50 |
Flirt Joined: 2007/4/26 From: Posts: 33 |
hot and sexy well i have read the comments and they are all vey good. all i can add is this
was so hot i was reaching for my pussy after the second line lmao more please
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| thinksexy |
Posted: 2007/4/25 21:10 Updated: 2007/4/25 21:10 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/12/17 From: Posts: 2855 |
Layla... So creative the way you laid out your thoughts...pun intended. Fantastically
visual and erotic...
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| SSbbwPornStar |
Posted: 2007/3/7 1:31 Updated: 2007/3/7 1:31 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/3/6 From: Orange county,New york Posts: 6 |
wow wow that was just amazing!
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| Dejon Nell |
Posted: 2007/1/26 11:18 Updated: 2007/1/26 11:18 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/1/26 From: Posts: 1 |
Re: Easy to grasp the meaning nice picture
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| SlowHand |
Posted: 2007/1/22 18:38 Updated: 2007/1/22 18:53 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/1/20 From: Posts: 112 |
This is hot some amy say it is not The visual effect of the arrangement of the words shaped the pleasuring too
lt... made it clear... pounding in to it's lady fare. The simplicity of
message and shape makes its impact all the same...telling us all lust and s
ex is its aim. Thanks for writing it all the same. Then again some may sa
y it's not. :0)
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| gaspass |
Posted: 2007/1/6 20:43 Updated: 2007/1/6 20:43 |
Bookworm Joined: 2007/1/1 From: Posts: 125 |
Re: a sex poem Next time, Laqyla, you will have to do a poem shaped like a vulva!
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| Lee |
Posted: 2006/11/21 16:02 Updated: 2006/11/21 16:02 |
Bookworm Joined: 2006/10/25 From: Chicago Posts: 91 |
a sex poem I really hate poetry! I REALLY do! However this I thought was good! It was short, it was quick. to top it off is was shaped like a dick! I guess you couldn't ask for anything more I wont!
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| Donabdul |
Posted: 2006/11/13 7:30 Updated: 2006/11/13 7:30 |
Flirt  Joined: 2006/11/10 From: Nigeria Posts: 22 |
Mmmm! Mmmm! Hot and to the point, Love it.
Don
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| gnarlygirl |
Posted: 2006/10/1 21:23 Updated: 2006/10/1 21:23 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2006/9/22 From: Florida Posts: 96 |
wonderfull Loved it! Keep them coming...
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| wordlover |
Posted: 2006/9/24 4:06 Updated: 2006/9/24 4:06 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2006/8/14 From: Everywhere and Yet nowhere Posts: 404 |
meaning easy to read that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| erotic section |
Posted: 2006/9/20 9:26 Updated: 2006/9/20 9:26 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/7/16 From: Posts: 2015 |
Easy to grasp the meaning But hot nonetheless!
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