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Poetry: Lust:
  Awakening (1/1)  

31 votes
Author: Miss Bee  Published: 10/11/2007  story views: 802
 


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Awakening

Whispering softly, as bamboo
Let my murmurs gently awaken you

Bending gracefully, as willow
Yielding to your wants and desires

Quietly intuitive, as hazel
Allow me to guide you to my still waters

Wrapping tightly, as a vine,
Strong and urgent in the sultry heat

Giving, bountiful, as a pear tree
Feast on my luscious, nourishing fruit

Bursting forth, zestful, as a fern
Unfurling every frond to you

Tenderly encircling, as rowan
May only I ever enchant you


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Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/11/2 13:30  Updated: 2007/11/2 13:30
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/9/11
From: In your mind right now
Posts: 986
 Beautifully tender...
and wonderfully written. Excellent! x
sailor
Posted: 2007/10/30 12:25  Updated: 2007/10/30 12:25
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2005/12/11
From: East coast USA
Posts: 435
 Your poem...
... whispers softly of your inner self.... beautifully.
silentheart
Posted: 2007/10/15 16:50  Updated: 2007/10/15 16:50
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Liberal, Kansas
Posts: 79
 sweet
that was lovely.
Shy2Start
Posted: 2007/10/14 13:53  Updated: 2007/10/14 13:54
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/10
From:
Posts: 889
 Magical
Bee, this is lovely, its almost like a spell or a charm. There is something about it that reminded me of the Gaelic Tree Alphabet: "Tagh seileach nan allt, tagh calltain nan creag, Tagh fearna nan lòn, tagh beithe nan eas, Tagh uinnseann na dubhair, tagh iubhar na leuma, Tagh leamhan na brùthiach, tagh duire na grèine." Shy xxx
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/10/13 15:27  Updated: 2007/10/13 15:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: florida
Posts: 2370
 again very well written
if you ever opened upI think perhaps you'd leave everyt one else in your dust, so they should all thank you for no writing much....no not they, we should thank you
irishgenie
Posted: 2007/10/13 14:26  Updated: 2007/10/13 14:26
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/2
From: Ireland
Posts: 226
 awakening
An enchanting and sensual read. Well done you ;)
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/13 13:43  Updated: 2007/10/13 13:43
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
From:
Posts: 2856
 Mmmm...
I don't know about everyone else, but I sure feel enchanted. *smiles*
Montana Norman
Posted: 2007/10/13 11:30  Updated: 2007/10/13 11:30
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/11
From: Dallas Texas
Posts: 815
 Is it Love or Desire...
Wanting to give... all... to him... Montana
baby
Posted: 2007/10/13 3:33  Updated: 2007/10/13 3:33
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/5/11
From:
Posts: 3737
 Soft sighs
Lovely...
dirtypaul
Posted: 2007/10/12 7:59  Updated: 2007/10/12 7:59
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/7/16
From:
Posts: 495
 Lovely!
Simple but affecting. Just like this comment.
freddyair
Posted: 2007/10/11 9:28  Updated: 2007/10/11 9:28
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 rowan
Bee, this is tender and yet exciting. I like the imagery... and the very economy of your words. By the end I felt surrounded by warmth, lust, and consummation. =f=