Playful sarcasm at it's best. Nice how you made such a common little thing between a couple into a mini drama. Fun, thankx for sharing.

I Liked this one. Angry and passion all in one. Pm you more

Blazing in its get to the point language. Funny erotic, everyone seems to be finding something completely different in your work. Here's what I heard: She digs her guy...makes love to him...gives him head....meets him at hotels...tells him she wants him... And he accuses her of ignoring him. So she lists the different way she ignores him...with such an attitude (who can blame her)...and finesse...

Agreed, Montana - I do the exact same thing:) And I appreciate knowing the impression of the reader. The only reason I felt compelled to comment was to allay any sense of concern:) I usually don't. But I've written some works that cause people to go, "Oh, no, what's wrong??" I hate the thought that people would worry;)

....I make it a point to log a comment on what I read here in LL. If I liked the story or not. I read each story as though I am the person whom the story is about. And then I try relay what I feel from that read, back to the Author. It is not always a positive comment, or in some cases, the meaning of what the Author attempting. If we totally connected, GREAT... But that doesn't always happen. However, I do beleive it is as important as how the reader interpretes the story. Sometimes, the reader is able to associate an event in their life, to what the read may be. My earlier comment is what I derived from your story. And based on that interpretation, I liked your story. Keep up the good work.

Aggression, Language, Motion, Command...a whole new panorama of your needs and wants. I love the twist...come again to my room next time

interesting:) One of my lowest rated poems brings forth the most curiosity:) To poet ~ you read me pretty well;) The answer to your question is all of the above. To Montana ~ no love is wasted here, my friend ~ not to worry ~ just a very healthy lust and a fascinating play between minds. It's all good;)

I see a woman who refuses to be hurt... again. This person you ride... is just a fuck.. That's what you want to believe. And this is how you deal with him. The hard shelled covering over your heart is your way of staying in his life. Retaining some control, ( is nothing more than denial), over your desire to be the one. Much like the cottage cheese in your fridge, there is an experation date on this affair, and you know it. This love will never be. But God!!! These types of situations always are the best............Source for a story line. The fuel for writers. Good work!

would love to know the story behind the poetry... quick pace, intriguing story... though, can't tell if you are being aggressive and seductive... or feigning annoyance... i'd like to think the first one...