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| Layla |
Posted: 2007/11/4 19:24 Updated: 2007/11/4 19:24 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/15 From: State of Disillusion Posts: 654 |
 tied up Cool, great job. I'd love nights like that too. Looking forward to reading more
of these.
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2007/9/15 20:18 Updated: 2007/9/15 20:18 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: florida Posts: 2370 |
 very good beautifully written
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| Precious Pet |
Posted: 2007/9/12 19:09 Updated: 2007/9/12 19:09 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/9/11 From: In your mind right now Posts: 986 |
 Breathtaking! When you said you thought i would enjoy this, you were absolutely right! The
scene vividly unfolds in the mind as the words, so eloquently written, are read.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
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| Montana Norman |
Posted: 2007/8/28 0:14 Updated: 2007/8/28 22:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/6/11 From: Dallas Texas Posts: 815 |
 You must be awesome... in the sack! After reading this, I'm awestruck! So take me, take me now!!! Excellent
use of rhyme and timing. Strong character action. Very important. And you make
it look so "eazy".... With these words as your paintbrush, you composed a very
vivid ..playreel for our minds to watch your every move.... And what I just saw
on my minds flatscreen 5.1 HD, well... made me blush. Excellent work! Keep it
up. Montana
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| wordlover |
Posted: 2007/8/17 4:00 Updated: 2007/8/17 4:00 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/14 From: Everywhere and Yet nowhere Posts: 409 |
 WoW Your poem is very hot. I loved how you switched rules with your lover. Your style
and rhyme help with the mood of your writing. Great poem.
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| lustywabbit |
Posted: 2007/3/18 21:28 Updated: 2007/3/18 21:28 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/23 From: Lost..my mind is an expansive place Posts: 723 |
 Wow!!! Damn Doll.. nicely written..love the idea of leather!
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| sailor |
Posted: 2007/3/10 18:14 Updated: 2007/3/10 18:14 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/12/11 From: East coast USA Posts: 435 |
 Ummmm I do believe you do.... ... thinksexy.... very nice... a...throbbing Elisabeth Barrett Browing...
perhaps..
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| SlowHand |
Posted: 2007/3/10 5:20 Updated: 2007/3/10 5:20 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/1/20 From: Posts: 112 |
 thinksexy I like the cadence of the rhyme. thinksexy I like the cadence of the rhyme. It does rhyme and presents diff
icult emotion well. You said a lot of what most won't say and you said it
very well. Very nice poem.
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