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Poetry: Lust:
  So Beautiful (1/1)  

15 votes
Author: erotic section  Published: 1/14/2008  story views: 262
 


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Butterfly, butterfly lights, I see

Calmly waiting, watching me

Tempting me to lie down and gaze

Upon blonde locks

To which I raise

My fingers to feel the silken strands

Which slip like light rays through my hands



And close my eyes when first I feel

The soft tongue’s meander o’er my lips

My eyes fly open to find hers shut

Then I am lost as her softness dips

Deeper into me, gentle but firm

Expertly darting, in and throughout

I can feel it building; I’m losing control

But her wings then enfold me and block all thought out



Flowing and moaning into her I crash

And vaguely I sense her satisfied smile

Shuttering still in the haze of pleasure

A thought emerges and begins to thrash



How to hold a butterfly?

To make it tremble, build, and flush

With warmth? I fear my fingers tend

Toward a much more brazen touch

If I try and fail, I fear I’ll lose…

What then? What then?
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Total Votes: 15
Steamy
(1 vote)
Hot
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Poster Thread
wordlover
Posted: 2008/5/10 5:12  Updated: 2008/5/10 5:12
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/8/14
From: Everywhere and Yet nowhere
Posts: 409
 Wow Es
I loved your poem. It had such depth and meaning. Your use of words painted a picture of love, lust and I think betrayal. It seems like it was written right out of real life. Great job as always:-)
2luscious
Posted: 2008/2/23 12:01  Updated: 2008/2/23 12:01
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/14
From: Always checking my headings ...
Posts: 2221
 Faved it!
Great imagery, ES, and sexy on different levels. Really admired it, girl!
runeblade
Posted: 2008/2/18 9:00  Updated: 2008/2/18 9:00
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/9
From: Canada
Posts: 450
 Hmm
Nice....like blonde essence on a pillow.
runeblade
Posted: 2008/1/25 2:17  Updated: 2008/1/25 2:17
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/9
From: Canada
Posts: 450
 Love it
I liked this poem very much. Its sharp like a razor and soft as velvet. I do believe we share a certain understanding...