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A touch so soft like feathers on my skin I shiver and watch as my skin moves... of its own accord
Your fingers tracing paths of temptation over my reclining body igniting my desire... my wish to surrender
Your lips follow leaving me breathless as every inch of me is consumed by you... I am devoured by need
Fingers and lips teasing me intimately A touch, a caress a sigh, a moan... I want you so much
My pleasure explodes lightning flashes cannons roar I shake and shudder... no more, no more
Panting and gasping I recline and relax you have teased me and pleased me... It's my turn now...
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Posted: 2008/2/3 4:39 Updated: 2008/2/3 4:39 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/1/7 From: *looks around* where the hell am I? Posts: 8 |
 Taking turns is fun I love this. The way you capture the needs being met, followed by contentment
and a switch of positioning;) The flow of the whole poem overall was beautiful.
Keep looking in that library of yours! ex-oh ~pi
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Posted: 2007/12/19 15:13 Updated: 2007/12/19 15:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/16 From: Posts: 2082 |
 Interesting This is third time I've read, but it didn't really strike me until after reading
Serendipity. Now it resonates... Good work.
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