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Poetry: Lust:
  The Fire (1/1)  

53 votes
Author: rain_goddess  Published: 12/5/2006  story views: 1031
 


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as you walk in i can feel your gaze upon me

sending shivers through my body

making every hair stand up.

You place a hand on my bare arm,

it's like a fire that melts me right through to my soul.

You stand in front of me and in your eyes, there's a burning fire.

One of desire, one of passion, one of love.

As you lean into me I can smell you.

Your scent is like home, something i belong to.

Your strong arms encircle me and i'm barely able to stand

I'm pushed against you, my softness accentuating your pure masculine form

I cannot speak for your firm lips have claimed mine.

My body is set aflames by your every touch and move.

You pull back from me and i look in those warm eyes again,

Promises for the night are left unspoken in your eyes

As you pull me close and i revel in the flame, and know that tonight will be

one like no other.
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Vote:
Total Votes: 53
Steamy
(1 vote)
Hot
(2 votes)
Blazing
(3 votes)
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tail gunner
Posted: 2009/4/28 9:33  Updated: 2009/4/28 9:33
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/6/28
From: the great American southland
Posts: 1139
 gooe words ...
you use language well ... you have an understanding of how to evoke a feeling, how to create a sensation with a breviety of words. . please write more. ........ the gunner
Woman
Posted: 2009/4/22 5:53  Updated: 2009/4/22 5:53
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/8/11
From: The Interrogation Room
Posts: 1311
 Spectacular!
"Your scent is like home, something i belong to." I love this line!
wyliecoyote
Posted: 2009/4/14 22:23  Updated: 2009/4/14 22:23
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/2/22
From: on the road to nowhere
Posts: 1196
 Cool
ironic as it seems... very cool XX
stillsopure
Posted: 2008/12/15 22:41  Updated: 2008/12/15 22:41
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/7/13
From:
Posts: 342
 mmmm
Very good, very good indeed
well behaved lady
Posted: 2008/5/16 6:35  Updated: 2008/5/16 6:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/10
From: not taking life too seriously
Posts: 4008
 True Love
wonderful rainy, I'd love to see some more poetry from you...when you have someone in your mind when writing poetry the words just seem to flow. Wubble XXX
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/12/1 18:02  Updated: 2007/12/1 18:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
From:
Posts: 2871
 Mmmm...
Your scent is like home, something I belong to... And don't we all want to belong to someone? Beautiful Rain, just like you.
sailor
Posted: 2007/6/24 12:36  Updated: 2007/6/24 12:36
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2005/12/11
From: East coast USA
Posts: 506
 Love is....
... friendship....ON FIRE! great poem
eXcentrik
Posted: 2006/12/6 3:19  Updated: 2006/12/6 3:19
Virgin
Joined: 2006/11/9
From:
Posts: 11
 Holy Hell!
that was awsome! Erotic and souful at the same time. great poem
bigdenver
Posted: 2006/12/6 1:24  Updated: 2006/12/6 1:24
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/9/23
From: Denver
Posts: 387
 for you
you know me bye now and i loved your poem babe. i didnt even know you wrote one til someone told me but i read it immediately. very nice and a very lucky man whoever he is..
Eric
Posted: 2006/12/5 21:53  Updated: 2006/12/5 21:53
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: cyberspace
Posts: 2219
 A Sublime Promise
Beautifully composed with clear yet beckoning key words. One senses the promise and the danger of the fire that will light up the night.
vinciblesatyr
Posted: 2006/12/5 21:43  Updated: 2006/12/5 21:43
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/12/2
From: Maryland
Posts: 71
 THE FIRE
YOU MUST REALLY LOVE HIM A BEAUTIFUL POEM
Dukky
Posted: 2006/12/5 21:26  Updated: 2006/12/5 21:26
Chat Moderator
Joined: 2006/6/7
From: The pond in the park
Posts: 1494
 Beautiful
Rain honey this is lovely. Sweet and earnest.