i sometimes forget to check up on the poetry of the day ... what an oversight on my part! ... ... i' ve gone back and read most of your stuff. i like the way your mind, you imagination, works.

Hey ES I always enjoy reading your poetry. I like this for the thought behind it. We as people never really look at the soul of others which tends to hold us back. Also I liked the way you wrote it out just there with no rhmye. Another great one.

And, often when it is reality we touch The fantasy seems oh, so sweet. xoxo

Love poems that encourage people to look inward at their own soul... Reflect... To take a minute to contemplate.... I'm all about it! Great message.... A healthy serving of Food for thought. (yummy) And now, a criticque of the layout of this poem..... If Lusty would allow you a rewrite on this.. work on the rythm... the breaks. I fully understand that, as the writer, we hear the beat... in our heads, so to speak... however.... John Q Public... tends to be ALWAYS marching to a different beat... a different drummer... And it's Johnny we're always trying to reach.... Ain't life a Bitch. Good work though! Montana