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Poetry: Lust:
  What Does She See? (1/1)  

38 votes
Author: erotic section  Published: 7/24/2006  story views: 673
 


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I see you watching me. 

I have laid my body bare, craved your touch; I love you.  Shall I think of some new way to please you?

You have the advantage of playing passive observer.  How comfortable  for you, while I writhe beneath your eyes, inside my own skin.  You harden and smile, lazily, while I burn.

Well, Fuck You.  Let me make you burn. 

Whenever I need, I act.  I please him, tease him, lick him, suck him, breathe and moan my orgasms into his ear.  I cry out with every pleasurable sensation I receive.  I take him in in every way.  He bathes in my fluids and I swallow his.  He takes his time at my core: touching, teasing, fingering me while my muscles tighten from top to bottom, and I scream. He arises triumphant, like a dragon with glittering eyes, and kisses me deeply.  Are you feeling me now?

So, now, while my legs are still shaking and my core still melting, flowing out, I'll tell you this. I learned fast the way to survive you.  I need you all over me, inside me, pouring through.

So Fuck You. I'm Fucked. We exchange pleasure and pain.  It's your turn to feel the pain.

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Vote:
Total Votes: 38
Steamy
(1 vote)
Hot
(2 votes)
Blazing
(3 votes)
Poster Thread
stillpure
Posted: 2008/8/8 16:16  Updated: 2008/8/8 16:16
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2008/1/12
From:
Posts: 569
 ....
Everything inside the slave's mind...Damn good job.
Montana Norman
Posted: 2007/10/18 15:09  Updated: 2007/10/18 15:09
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/11
From: Dallas Texas
Posts: 815
 Hmmmmmmm!....
Love, Lust, Anger, Submission, Power, Hostile, Need, Pleasure, Desire....... to conquer, to be a slave, to be a..... woman, to be his woman. Good Very Good.... Montana
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/9/28 15:56  Updated: 2007/9/28 15:56
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: florida
Posts: 2370
 these are very interesting
to me, you're telling us only what you want us to know, so there in lies the mystery of the poetry...well done
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/9/18 13:21  Updated: 2007/9/18 13:21
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
From:
Posts: 2856
 Holy Crap ES!
Your words blaze across the screen, burning a hole in my monitor. Every word means something, every thought palatable.
BruceBloggie
Posted: 2007/3/31 0:21  Updated: 2007/3/31 0:21
Virgin
Joined: 2007/3/30
From: Canada/UK
Posts: 20
 yes!
this is exactly the core if not the essence of an intense relationship that must be constantly revisited... nice...
runeblade
Posted: 2007/3/1 1:29  Updated: 2007/3/1 1:29
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/9
From: Canada
Posts: 450
 steel sliding
Damn.....
Rip
Posted: 2007/1/27 17:37  Updated: 2007/1/27 17:37
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/26
From: USA
Posts: 219
 Bastard
What does he want??? He has pure heat and doesn't know what he has. The b astard
wordlover
Posted: 2006/8/28 3:49  Updated: 2006/8/28 3:49
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/8/14
From: Everywhere and Yet nowhere
Posts: 409
 quick
That was quick and full of lust. I could feel the pleasure and pain all at once. Love it!!
wildryd
Posted: 2006/8/12 3:26  Updated: 2006/8/12 3:26
Virgin
Joined: 2006/7/20
From: City of Angels
Posts: 10
 love your moist prose
short, hot, steamy. i would love to taste more. there's lots of energy there to develop and play with e.s. keep up the nice work.
erotic section
Posted: 2006/7/30 19:00  Updated: 2006/7/30 19:00
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/16
From:
Posts: 2082
 Re: 'What does she see'
Lol - thank you for taking it in the spirit in which it was offered. I appreciate the comments.
steve66
Posted: 2006/7/29 8:15  Updated: 2006/7/29 8:15
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/2/9
From: newcastle NSW australia
Posts: 277
 hey e.s.
i to have felt the burn, and know about the pain, nice work e.s.
nakedeye
Posted: 2006/7/26 3:16  Updated: 2006/7/26 3:16
Virgin
Joined: 2006/7/8
From:
Posts: 15
 'What does she see'
oohh love your hot poem. Im ignitin' n' feel the heat - lovely! torment me more!