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Poetry: Lust:
  Whisper (1/1)  

16 votes
Author: oshkrozz  Published: 2/19/2007  story views: 489
 


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Whisper, starting on the lips, gently flows

Brushing against the ear

Sweetness in the words spoken, a light caress

The touch soft as the lips pull back

Replaced with the soft feel of the finger

The tip moving from the ear to the lips

Tracing the outline and drawing forth a whisper

Inviting closer, eyes embraced as the finger divides us

Our lips wrapped around the barrier as just words are spoken

Your fragrance enters me and fills my heart

A passion awakes inside my lips burning

Wanting to touch and be complete

That one finger still divides as it moves along your lips

Drawing them closer still

I feel the warmth of your breath

The beating of your heart as each motion is slow

My hands cupping your face as the lips meet

Sensation racing through the body

Blood flowing and feeling the life

Feeling the touch of the lips

The caress of the sweet whisper of breath

We unite as the breathing fades into each kiss

And between us still the whisper
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Total Votes: 16
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Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/10/3 6:54  Updated: 2007/10/3 6:54
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: florida
Posts: 2370
 so sweet
from you only precious words could be spoken softly to another
cindy
Posted: 2007/9/7 13:46  Updated: 2007/9/7 13:48
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/30
From: down the county...
Posts: 1531
 Oshie,
Very lovely, sweetie! Just so you know, I have great medicine for headaches....
Lisa_Myst
Posted: 2007/3/2 14:39  Updated: 2007/3/2 14:39
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/2/26
From: USA
Posts: 67
 Sensual
Romantic AND sensual. A bit like an appetizer before the main event. Like m entioned, the surrender is left to the reader's imagination. I really enjoy ed your poem. Thank you. Lisa
pinksapphire
Posted: 2007/2/23 9:32  Updated: 2007/2/23 9:32
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Joined: 2007/1/4
From:
Posts: 1918
 oh my!
wish i could write like that....
oshkrozz
Posted: 2007/2/19 21:12  Updated: 2007/2/19 21:12
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/14
From: Maryland
Posts: 460
 Re: What was whispered?
I have a headache ... j/k
2luscious
Posted: 2007/2/19 19:34  Updated: 2007/2/19 19:34
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Joined: 2006/7/14
From: Always checking my headings ...
Posts: 2221
 What was whispered?
A lovely poem, just lovely. But I am deeply curious about what was whisper ed: "I surrender." "You are mine." "Celebrate our love, darling." .. "I surrender" is my favorite and who was it that surrendered? ........ D elightfully tantalizing. Thank you.