What a delightful steamy romantic tale. The love your characters have for each other is evident in the way they read each other's needs. Keep it comming! Lancer1

Now that is truly amazing. I don't even wish nor know how to describe how I felt.

I read this awhile ago and just had to read it again to celebrate it's Second Place. I loved it even more the second time around I think. That was lovely and now if you don't mind I'm going to ask my boyfriend permission for a good fuck. Ta ta Lady O

I simply loved this story. It is refreshing to read about a sm relationship thats not purely physical pain, but delves deeper into the emotional aspect of the relationship. I love the terms of endearment, love the story. Keep writing!

What a beautiful and sultry expression of the Master/Slave relationship! Wonderfully articulated.

The tension your Master created through the entire evening left me breathless, what an amazing thing to be loved, adored, and owned.

that was great xxoo!

This was such a hot story! I could not read it fast enough! I cant wait to see if you have written others. I am finding I really like to read this category.

You know I can't really say anything because it's already been said, but I will be honest with you. When I read the first paragraph, I honestly was going to skip reading this. But! Then I scrolled down and saw the fuck ton of comments so I decided to read it. And oh my! I am so glad that I did! I loved it all the way through and I can see this one being a repeat reader for me. Thank you for writing this! You're one with the words and I felt like I was there. It was quite gripping. Thank you again. xxx Morby

I love suspensful stories that are down to earth, believable yet full of steamy sex. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Will he, won't he, will she, won't she. And the ending! Wow, didn't see that cumming. Thanks

Alexandra, Without any doubt, this is the hotest story I have read in the LL!! You have just the right amount of crudness---Passion----and vocabulary! I think that the "EGG" was an intresting tool that made the reader wonder just when she would loose it or break it, and make the reader wonder if she would be hurt with the sharp edge of the egg shell if she had broken it! I think that YOU were the master in this story and what the LL needs is a true master (author) and we do have one in you! Congratulations and well done! Lee

Alex, well done. I'd like to add some stinging rebuke for the 3 (or maybe 1 in 3 incarnations) people who posted childish crap, but you took good care of that earlier. Any solid man who keeps either slaves or subs would be a fool to look past you, little Alex. Your talents exceed expectation. Very well done. I'm very proud of you.

Beautifully written Alexa, from start to finish! nice work ~ xoxo oxy

wow Alexa luv that was great! thank you for shareing! kisses

Thanks for a good Master slave story that is not over the top. Sexy, slutty and believable!

This is a HOT story...I love to hear a woman beg to be fucked.

Normally, I don't make comments about the storys that I read, but the ones I do comment about, usually get a line or two comment! However, I started reading this and I was instantly sucked into a story that could pass for a reality, rather than a fictional story. and I couldn't stop reading it! The situations expressing your own lust as well as his passion, the kissing offered the reality that you yourself MUST have done yourself! (ie the egg) In my own old age, I cannot ever remember seeing a woman holding an egg that at any moment might fall out on the floor! (A great twist to the story too) Then as you express the passion of the kissing was done very well and I could almost see it being done too. The vocabulary was excelent, and not mundane OR insipid! I think that the ONLY change I would have made, would have been to use the word "love rather than Lord" otherwise the vocabulary was right on. I do feel that the teasing DOES ad to this story and I like that too. Details are included with just the right amount discription, and a nice twist with the second lover! My only question for you is will the wife seek her own personal revenge? maybe bring in a lover for her husband, like someone he knows from work or maybe a friends younger sister/or mother?? I really hope to talk to you about that at a later time! I grade this story as 4 A and one of the best I have ever read here in the LL keep it up sweetheart Lee

that was a great read. I think I will go back and read it again

Awesomely done alexa :) great story.....

Every garden of beautiful stories, require a few 'WORMS' to help them grow! No brains, brainy1 and lolo are an example of such! They show jealousy for excellant writers, because they lack any talent of their own. Their pathetic little words mean nothing NOTHING to us ! You are a GIFT to our library! Bring us more, of what we long for..... L2

I just didn't realise HOW HOT? Concentration has not been a strong suit for me lately Alexa, yet you kept my attention from the get go! You have a powerful delivery of feelings, as you give us your words in a song! Yes, song! It was like your body was singing, drawing us into harmony... and mutual orgasm! 3 well deserved points from Luv2, for the newest TOP story on my fav's list! Master-Luv2 :)

ok excellent as always I think I'm gonna go take a cold shower unless you wanna join then we can make it hot and steamy ;-)

Alexa, you're story was amazing, you're story just made me discover a new turn on of mine!!!...so thanks!

Hot and steamy Alexa! You deserve story of the week. I started and was going to stop for a little bit to go do something in my kitchen, but I couldn't tear myself away! lol. Bravo dear! <3

alexa ... ............. how did i miss this?! ... must have been when i was busy. DAMN, you are good ( and you can write, too ) ... i want to be 'master' in your next incarnation.

Absolutely amazing! Great job!

Alexa, You have me feeling exactly as your heroine and hero felt at the end of the story...Totally spent. Thank you for such an erotic tale, one in which I wish to be a character, especially if sweet Alexais the heroine. Beautifully crafted, lovely lady. B

Mmm...uhh...wow...gee whiz! DAMNED! VERY NICE ALEX! Now THAT'S why I come to LL....... Better than a pacemaker to get the ticker pounding and the blood pumping.

Alexa, this little piece of yours is quite possibly the hottest story I have read in six months. Your slave is so hot the word hasn't been coined yet to describe her......her insatiable pace and thirst is phenomenal. You know such a woman? Whoa!! The thought is enough to make a guy break out in a cold sweat!!!

A wonderful little story with excellent potential for development in to a really great longer story, expanding upon character development and secret activities during the party. Maybe this is the way a story should be. It leaves a great deal for the mind to contemplate as to what could have happened, did happen, or turns & twists that might have happened.

Alexa, a super story, I was hard all the time reading it

As we come to expect from you Alexa a lucid and candid storyline. For the more negative comments, well thats your point of view, however you must accept that others enjoy the bdsm lifestyle, its all about choices and we all make our own. Alexa doesnt need me to stick up for her, but i find the negative comments unconstructive.

Both "no brains" and "brainy 1," I must say that your words here are less than civil, and profoundly unfair and hurtful to a person I have come to know well over several years. First of all, to take a story of this length and read it from beginning to end when you don't find it to your liking does show that you have, in your own words, "no brains." But I don't object to that as even grubs and slugs are not much better off either. ( I am assuming of course that you have read the entire story to make such a cynical series of remarks. Otherwise what would your remarks be based on as a self-anointed "brainy1?") But what I, as someone who knows this woman well for a long time object to, is the claim that this story got to be story of the week in any way that was underhanded or unjust. I will have you know that of all the people I have met on this site, and it is many hundreds, I have met only 2 or possibly three people who have more integrity than Alexandra M. For your information I personally wrote a post on the fact that NEARLY ALL stories here and at other erotic sites get read many, many times before anyone even comments on it. So your claim that it has had so many hits and "only" 100+ points in a few days is contrary to fact. That is a substantial score for many stories that have been on this site for a lot longer than a few days!!! You should note that I am NOT in any way vested in this site but am just an ordinary member who is doing this out of a deep sense of fairness and justice.

so very good, even better, far past best, long past outstanding, I was so wet, I am so hot, my juices won't stop...hmmmmm, yes......

I fail to see what you are trying to accomplish here? Yes, you don't like me, my lifestyle or my story, guess what? You don't have to! I can live without your approval quite easily. Are you trying to dissuade people from reading the story? Maybe, some would, but I tend to think the controversy will actually have more people reading it. If you hope to take away the enjoyment that I had in writing this story, I'm sorry, you can't.

Certainly worth waiting for Alexa!! That's one hell of a story, way to go, girl!

Thank you for your comment. I think if you look at the voting, the story is proving itself. Yes, I'm also pretty sure its not a Pulitzer prize winner, but I am damn proud of it and of the man who made it possible for me to share such a big part of myself, with other people.

Beautifully written Alexa. x

When is your next story out darling? You were so right! Not a good idea to read this on the bus home!

I love this Alexa! Very, very hot!

That was hot and sexy, left me panting, wanting more. Excellent job.

I like it A LOT! well written and a brilliant idea :D

Alex, this story is brilliant! White hot and filled with love at the same time. Congratulations xo

She's been slowly teased and as are you Alexa towards the reader. A great slowly smoldering build-up of sexual tension.

Outstanding job Alexa! Hope you will continue your writing!

one of the best stories i've read on here in a while. i'm thoroughly turned on, and wish i had man to dominate me like that ;) superb job!

Excellent! Captivated me from the get go and held me until the end. Enjoyed!

Since discovering LL I have read many enjoyable stories, but relativley few have been truly inspiring. Welcome to my short list with this one, Alexandra_M.

Alexa, vivid descriptions. Wubble XXX

That was hot... and that is saying a lot coming from a lesbian... LMM

I seem unable to reply to the individual comments, so i would just like to thank you for reading and commenting. It is appreciated. Alexa

Fuckingbrilliant! Kisses Peachie

This could serve as a case study in the depiction of hungry hard edged sex that is polished and well oiled by feminine perspective and desire. Great descriptions, great word play, very erotic.

What can i say, loved every part of it.

you're sooo great Alexa. got me turned on, totally. haha. :)

Nice one Alexa........written from the heart!

Alexa that was fucking amazing.. Hard as nails doesn't even begin to describe!! ;) Loved every word. thank you and very well written x x

oh alexa, what a great story and what a great turn on. Especially when the 3rd comes into play. The ending is just perfect......more pls......X