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I look into the mirror, taking stock of the picture in front of me, my thoughts with you. You have been away on business for the past ten days, and to be honest, I would much rather wait for you in the foyer, naked, on my knees, ready to suck your cock the minute you walk through the door. Unfortunately, that is not to be.
In a moment of stupidity, I have invited all our friends over for a cocktail and dinner. This is the first time, since I’ve moved to be with you, that we are entertaining on a big scale. Over the months, they have come to accept me as the new leading lady in your life. I wanted to celebrate that, JUST NOT TONIGHT. Tonight I really need to feel that I belong to you.
Skimming my hands over the black lace of my cocktail dress, my fingers caress my nipples into hard points. Breath wheezing out of my mouth, as a slight moan, builds up in my throat. Pinching my nipples hard, I rub my thighs together, adoring the wetness dripping out of me, the lace bands of my stockings a subtle binding contrast to the silky moist cavern above.
Sighing, I let go and turn around to admire the cut of the low back on my dress. Knowing that your eyes will follow me all night. Grinning at the way it shows off my well rounded tush. Around my neck, I’m wearing the silver and blue topaz slave necklace you gave me for my birthday, marking me as yours. I will get my fucking, I think to myself, just a bit later. Smiling a deliciously wicked smile, I go downstairs to mingle with our guests.
Suddenly I feel a prickling sensation at the back of my neck. You have arrived. Swirling around, my gaze meets the blue fire of yours. Hmmm, My Lord definitely likes the dress, I think to myself, once again cursing the party under my breath. Then again, if I waited for a night when I did not want you to possess me, we would never entertain.
A nod of your head has me making my excuses to the group of people I had been talking to. All thoughts of politics and the state of the economy disappear like wisps of mist in a wind.
Swaying my hips deliberately, I start making my way to you. Crossing the room, a blush rushing to my cheeks under the approval in your eyes. Stumbling, as a deep clench of desire steals through my womb, sharp, almost a pain, leaving a rush of moisture in its wake: a warm silky pool of desire spilling over, covering the top of my thighs, making me intensely aware of each step that I take.
You weave your fingers into mine, sensuously twining our fingers, bending my hand and with it my arm behind my back, pulling me close against your form. Your lips softly brush my temple. “Hallo Little Princess,” comes the deep rumble of your voice next to my ear, whispering, “I really need to kiss you, come with me!”
Leaning into your hard body, my breasts brush lightly against your chest, nipples tightening as I bring my lips to your ear. Nipping at your earlobe, my breath washing over the sensitive shell, I enjoy the shudder travelling through your body. “Lead on, My Lord.”
A soft growl emerges from your throat and pulling me forward, you walk to the study, stopping briefly to say something to Michael, our assistant. Barely entering the door, you thrust your hand into the hair at my nape, your fingers tightening until I can feel my scalp tingling. Your other arm wraps around my waist, pulling me flush against you. My breasts are crushed against your chest, nipples pebbling inside the lace covering them, my thighs trembling as they lay against yours.
Your hand tilts my head up, blue eyes burning fire into mine for the longest moment, before you finally bring your mouth down to my lips. In sharp contrast to the fierceness of your hold, our mouths touch softly, pulling back, meeting again. Our lips open, barely brushing against each other, our breaths rasping loud in the stillness of the room. Your tongue reaches out to lap over my bottom lip.
The sudden spearing of your tongue has me gasping, moaning deep in my throat as the heat spills over once more, burning us in its fire, mouths desperately eating at each other, tongues duelling. Pressing me back against the wall, blindly shutting the door, your thigh pushes between my legs. Impatiently, your hands reach down to push my skirt up, the tight cut hampering your quest to get as close to me as possible. Your fingers clench when you feel the lace of my stockings against my bare skin. Your hands slide up to close hotly on my hips, dragging my pelvis into yours, anchoring me against you.
I moan as your hands clench on my hips, feeling the imprint of each finger digging into my soft skin. Realising just how close to the edge you are, raises my arousal, pushing it past boiling point. You always affect me this way. Arousing you arouses me, unbearably at times. A vicious cycle of heat that threatens to consume us in its fire.
Dragging your mouth from mine, breathing fast, your eyes glitter on the swollen moist contours of mine. Glancing down, your gaze stares intently at your fingers as they catch my nipples, squeezing softly. I watch your face in a daze, feeling your thumbs rolling around my nipples, teasing but after that initial squeeze, never actually touching the now diamond hard tips.
Mewling little noises escape my mouth, my body twisting against yours, striving to push my nipples into your touch. My hips writhe against yours, tempting you into action, rubbing against the hardness of your body. Straddling your leg and trapping it between mine, I thrust against it, needing the pressure desperately.
I dig my fingers into your shoulders, my leg rising up to cradle your hip, wrapping around it as I arch my back, offering my breasts for your touch. “Please, My Lord, I need… something… more… you… anything.” The nearly incoherent words spill from my lips, on a rush.
“Exactly where would you like my touch?” you ask softly with a wicked grin, and I know that I will have to be very explicit or the touch won’t come.
In the next instant, your teeth close over a nipple, bitingly, laving it with your tongue before suckling on it. Even through the double layers of lace and satin, the feeling is enough to make me scream softly. “Yess, there My Lord. More, please?”
Your fingers find its twin, teasing it softly, the twin sensations streaking through me. Your hips roll into mine, thrusting your hardness against me, your body answering the convulsive shudder going through me. My hands tangle in your hair helplessly, my back arching backwards, as far as it can, curving me into your body. My fingers urge your mouth harder onto my breast, totally uncaring of the wetness on the lace. My leg slides down almost helplessly, the length of yours, back up again, pressing my swollen clit into your thigh.
Using my hands in your hair, dragging your mouth away from my breast, I claim its warmth with my own, wildly, forcing your lips apart, rapaciously thrusting my tongue deep into its musky drugging cavern. Dragging the roughness of my tongue over yours, tangling our tongues together, drawing yours into my mouth, as I wish to draw your body into mine, I close my lips around it, sucking deeply.
Breaking away from my mouth, you chuckle, watching through lidded eyes as my hands slip from your neck, glides down over your chest, opening your jacket, scratching over your nipples with my nails. Enjoying the hiss escaping your mouth, I turn it into a growl by pinching them, teasing them till I feel the involuntary thrust of your cock into my cunt, pinning me roughly against the wall.
“Laughing at me, My Lord? You do not appear to be unaffected by having a little slave in heat!” I throw my head back, the challenge in my eyes meeting your burning blue gaze.
Hearing the warning growl issuing from your throat does not deter me in the least. “Fuck me, please, my Lord, your slut needs to have your cock deep inside her, now!”
Your mouth twists into a little half grin and my confidence wavers. I adore that little smile, just the left corner curling up, but I also know that little smile. It usually means that I am about to be tested. Some limit is about to be pushed and pushed hard.
I shudder openly as your fingers trail down over my stomach, sliding into the wet groove between my thighs. Gasping for breath, I lean back against the wall, never taking my eyes from yours. My hands slide from your chest to rest, limply beside me on the wall.
The sudden pinch of your fingers on my clit has me straining my hips towards you, my shoulders pressed hard against the wall, nails digging into it. “Oohhh Fuck, yes My Lord,” the cry breaking free from my throat of its own accord, followed closely by a grateful moan when you thrust two fingers deep into my cunt. My body undulates against yours, riding those long, elegant fingers as I would your cock, loving the feel of having a part of you inside me.
My eyelids fall down, all my concentration centred on the slow slide of your touch into my pussy, feeling the hot glide, my muscles clasping around the intrusion as if trying to keep you there. Reluctant to let you go.
“Hmmmmm, that feels so good, My Lord.” Followed by another hot thrust, your hand straining against me, forcing your fingers as deep as they can go, your thumb pressing down on my clit.
“Noooo!” the sudden removal of your touch has me wailing my disappointment.
Shaking my head to clear the fog of passion from my mind, I focus to see you removing something from your jacket pocket. My eyes widen as I recognise the egg, my heart sinking into my feet. This is going to be a long night. “Please, My Lord, not tonight?”
“Don’t you want to please your Master, my little slave?” you ask, a curious expression on your face. Almost stern, not the usual one when I refused to do something and you tried to understand why. I don’t know this look; I don’t know how to deal with it.
Closing my eyes briefly, swallowing hard, I manage to croak, “You know I do, My Lord. I will submit to whatever you have planned for me.”
Smiling, you reach down and press the egg into my opening, slipping it deep inside with your fingers. “Then you will hold that egg the entire evening, and when I say the word ‘Adagio,’ you will cum for your Master, regardless of who else is around. Do you understand?”
Mortified, I can only nod, my thoughts racing ahead. I will have to clench around that egg constantly. As aroused as I am it will not take too much to make me cum. Damn, this is going to be hell. I’m not wearing knickers; it could fall out if I can’t hold it. I’m so wet, how will I manage?
Helping me to stand up straight, fiddling my dress back into a semblance of decency, you kiss me softly on my lips. “You are so beautiful, go and freshen up, before joining me and our guests.”
Fifteen minutes later I walk back into the entertainment area of our house, seemingly under control, tidy, my make up once again in place, my nerves just about shattered. Constantly aware of the egg in my pussy, the muscles around it clenching and releasing in a lover’s touch, driving me to distraction.
Drawing in a deep breath, I enter the room, smiling at guests, stopping every now and then to exchange pleasantries with a friend, as I make my way to you. Finally, I arrive at your side, greeting the group of people before kissing your cheek. Your arm slides around me automatically, pressing me against your side.
“Would you like a drink, princess?” you ask with a warm smile. The sudden explosion of the egg in my pussy leaves me gasping. My left hand finds purchase on your thigh, nails digging into flesh. My whole body is stiff, fighting against the overload of feeling. It feels as if the diabolical little toy is dancing inside me, softly hammering against my g-spot, sending a rush of moisture spilling from me. I have to press my thighs together, my face drawn in a tight smile, hoping that none of the guests will recognise my discomfort.
“Please, My Lord,” I manage as the buzzing stops. Taking slow deep breaths, I turn to the gentleman next to me and start up a conversation, hoping to hell that I am making sense.
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Weakly leaning my forehead against the door, I enjoy the coolness of the wood against my burning skin, grateful that the last guest has left and that, despite the constant teasing, He has not made me cum in front of all the guests. There had been a few moments during dinner I had thought he would. He has deliberately kept me on edge the entire time. Pressing the remote control at the most unexpected times, making me jump more than once and equally making me fight not to surrender and cum. Turning the conversation to music, in between bursts of fireworks in my cunt.
I stiffen slightly as I feel your arms surrounding me, your chest against my back. I squirm as I feel one hand sliding down to my leg, raising my skirt as it comes up. The other wraps around my waist, pulls me back into your body. I relax, the tension draining out of me. My head falls back onto your shoulder. You nuzzle your face into my neck, kissing a path up to my ear. Moaning softly, I turn my head a fraction, giving you access.
The sharp grunt escapes my throat as your fingers slip between my legs and finds my clit, covering the hard swollen button with a soft stroke. Then, you press the remote as you whisper “Adagio” in my ear and all hell breaks loose. The continued arousal of the evening has taken its toll. I scream out my pleasure, loud enough to wake the neighbours. My body goes into overdrive, shuddering in ecstasy against yours. My hands clamp on your arm around my waist.
I’m pleading almost incoherently, “Please my Lord, it’s too much!” not really knowing if I want it to stop or to carry on. My body barely coming down from one climax to the next, I feel as if my legs will go out from under me at any moment.
Laughing out loud, you release the button and walk me over to one of the leather chairs on the edge of the entertainment area. “Bend over and brace yourself on the armrests!” you command and I can hear the rustle of cloth as you release your cock from your pants.
“Do you wish to be fucked?” you ask quietly. I can feel the tip of your cock pushing its way through my sopping pussy, the head rubbing over my clit as you slowly slide it backwards and forwards between my swollen folds.
“Yes, My Lord. Please fuck me! Give me your cock, please, my Lord, your slut needs to be fucked hard!” I’m begging, my voice breaking, long past any pride and willing to do anything to have your cock.
The sudden tug on the cord of the egg makes me clench my muscles instinctively, resisting the pull. You tug again, firmer and the egg slips free, replaced almost immediately with the long slow delicious thrust of your cock inside me. The deep groan that rumbles from your throat is lost in my delirious shout of pleasure. At this stage nothing exists for me but the feeling of your cock, pushing inside, slowly drawing back, filling me then leaving me empty. Slow pressure building up, I can feel the tingles starting in my fingers and toes and I know that this one is going to be massive.
‘Please my Lord, may I cum?” I gasp the words out, knowing that I am so close, I could erupt at any second.
“No!”
“Please my Lord!” I wail at you, “I need to cum, I am sooo close!”
“No!” And with that you pull your cock from me, stepping back, removing your touch completely.
“Fuck!” Slamming my fists on the armrests, I strive to gain some measure of control. Sucking in deep breaths, I become aware of tears streaming down my face. Fleetingly I think that my make up must be a mess.
You step around the chair, rest your knee on the seat and tangle your hands in my hair, pulling me closer. “I want to feel your mouth on me! Take me!”
I bend over to wrap my tongue around the head of your cock, in a rough wet caress. Dipping in to catch a taste of your essence. Kissing you, hotly, just the tip, my fingers wrapping around your magnificent shaft, slowly stroking.
Suddenly greedy, I swallow that sensitive head into my warm mouth, my lips stretching wide to take you in, tongue pointed as I tease the ridge, sucking... releasing to graze my teeth over the soft skin... groaning as my desire for you mounts.
Looking up, I see that your eyes are glued to the sight of your cock disappearing into my mouth. Plunging down, I try to take it all, my tongue gliding, hotly twisting around your shaft, this way then that way, sucking as I draw back... the glistening shaft slowly appearing between my lips.
My fingers wrap around your cock, following my mouth... gliding over the tip as I release you, before swallowing you in again, this time all the way, till you breach my throat and I can feel you as I swallow, feel my throat tighten around you.
My left hand trails down, finds the jewels still hidden in your pants and draws them out, softly caressing. Feeling them tighten, I pull them away from your body... Slowly dragging my mouth off your hard cock, sucking till just the tip remains on my tongue.
"Please my Lord, give this slut your cum?" I beg, pressing my clit hard against the back of the chair, knowing that it will be enough to send me over with you.
Hmmmmm, drawing the flat of my tongue over and around, the soft flesh, pointing to dip into the groove, tasting you... slamming down, forcing you into my mouth, down deeper... till I have all of you, sucking hotly... moaning in lust.
Pulling my head back slowly, my teeth ravage the ridge of your penis, plunging down. I release your scrotum, allowing the twins to draw tight... Your hands tangle in my hair, grasping, holding me still as you start fucking my mouth, your constant groans filling the air.
I feel your cock swelling in my throat. At the same time I feel someone’s hands on my hips. Startled, I try to speak but in the next moment a hard cock slam into my pussy and I am lost.
Fucked hard from both sides, my body does not care who it is fucking; it is climbing to reach the orgasm it has been searching for.
“Cum, princess, cum with me,” you command hoarsely and before the final word has left your mouth, I hear the groan that signals your orgasm. Tightening my lips, I try to swallow desperately as my own body clamps down on the cock furiously slamming into my cunt. Pulling my mouth from your cock to shout my pleasure as I go into orgasm, I hear the grunts of the man behind me as he as he fights to catch up, gasping as he slams deep into me, reaching his completion at the same time that your cock erupts over my face, covering me in your cum. I can do nothing but hang over the backrest of the chair, shuddering, trembling, whispering my gratitude.
Slowly coming down, I wipe your cum from my face, slipping my fingers into my mouth to savour the taste, smiling as I feel the man behind me continuing to thrust softly. Aftershocks tremble through me. You sink down on your knees, cup my nape in your hands as you lean closer to me.
“That was so fucking beautiful! You are amazing!” Your lips find mine for a deep kiss, filled with all the emotions that we cannot express.
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| JourneyBaby |
Posted: 2010/6/27 1:35 Updated: 2010/6/27 1:35 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/2/5 From: Posts: 11 |
 Great Story This one was really creative which I appreciate and I felt like you did a great
job setting the scene with the vivid descriptions at the beginning.
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| mickeyfinn1 |
Posted: 2010/6/24 4:29 Updated: 2010/6/24 4:29 |
Virgin Joined: 2010/6/16 From: mpumulanga south africa Posts: 3 |
masters touch Alexandra, the stoty line was reat, puuting your eggs into ones basket, wish
t was me fro behind, i feel really horny, ready you next story here in SA
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| Pearl1113 |
Posted: 2010/5/14 23:32 Updated: 2010/5/14 23:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/9/3 From: Posts: 370 |
holy cow!!! wow that was indeed amazingg!!! alexa... i love how u write... utterly fantastic...
kudos for this masterpiece!!!
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| HellKitty |
Posted: 2010/5/9 12:03 Updated: 2010/5/9 12:03 |
Virgin  Joined: 2010/4/28 From: Posts: 3 |
Great job! I'm normally not a fan of master/slave stories, but I absolutely enjoyed yours!
Great job! Do we ever get to find out who the stranger at the end is?
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| letsgetiton |
Posted: 2010/5/3 19:13 Updated: 2010/5/3 19:13 |
Virgin Joined: 2010/5/2 From: Posts: 1 |
Dude Excellent! I loved the part with the egg. That is so hot!
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| horny18 |
Posted: 2010/4/22 8:34 Updated: 2010/4/22 8:34 |
Virgin Joined: 2010/4/20 From: Essex Posts: 7 |
My Dream... This is my ultimate fantasy i can't wait to experience it...Thanks! Fantastic
Job cant wait for another!!!
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| DirtySailor |
Posted: 2010/4/12 20:13 Updated: 2010/4/12 20:13 |
Flirt  Joined: 2009/7/15 From: Posts: 35 |
Absolutely AMAZING Breathtakingly perfect, and the idea with the remote control vibrating egg...sheer
genius!!
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| turcicus |
Posted: 2010/3/29 21:25 Updated: 2010/3/29 21:25 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/10/27 From: 32°23' N, 34°52' E Posts: 83 |
tantalizing... ...story. very well written and thought out. made me hunger for my attentive
lover... made me wet thank you!
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| krtpforever |
Posted: 2010/3/24 3:26 Updated: 2010/3/24 3:26 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/3/20 From: uk Posts: 2 |
Raw Alex well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2010/3/10 17:57 Updated: 2010/3/10 17:57 |
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Bring it on! What a delightful steamy romantic tale. The love your characters have for each
other is evident in the way they read each other's needs. Keep it comming! Lancer1
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| ShanyShotgun |
Posted: 2010/2/20 10:06 Updated: 2010/2/20 10:06 |
Virgin Joined: 2010/2/17 From: Posts: 8 |
;) Now that is truly amazing. I don't even wish nor know how to describe how I felt.
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| Lady O |
Posted: 2010/2/16 21:31 Updated: 2010/2/16 21:31 |
Flirt Joined: 2008/9/8 From: California Posts: 34 |
I Must Say... I read this awhile ago and just had to read it again to celebrate it's Second
Place. I loved it even more the second time around I think. That was lovely and
now if you don't mind I'm going to ask my boyfriend permission for a good fuck.
Ta ta Lady O
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| Akyra |
Posted: 2010/2/14 8:27 Updated: 2010/2/14 8:27 |
Flirt Joined: 2006/12/7 From: Strapped to your bed Posts: 32 |
loved it!! I simply loved this story. It is refreshing to read about a sm relationship thats
not purely physical pain, but delves deeper into the emotional aspect of the
relationship. I love the terms of endearment, love the story. Keep writing!
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| VooDoo Kitty |
Posted: 2010/2/6 18:39 Updated: 2010/2/6 18:39 |
Virgin  Joined: 2010/2/6 From: Michigan Posts: 2 |
Utterly Breathtaking What a beautiful and sultry expression of the Master/Slave relationship! Wonderfully
articulated.
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| thinksexy |
Posted: 2010/1/24 13:08 Updated: 2010/1/24 13:08 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/12/17 From: Posts: 2877 |
Alexa.... The tension your Master created through the entire evening left me breathless,
what an amazing thing to be loved, adored, and owned.
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| NaughtyFaye |
Posted: 2009/11/24 19:50 Updated: 2009/11/24 19:50 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2009/6/29 From: Georgia, USA Posts: 41 |
gorgeous.. that was great xxoo!
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/7/31 17:13 Updated: 2009/7/31 17:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 421 |
Oh My This was such a hot story! I could not read it fast enough! I cant wait to see
if you have written others. I am finding I really like to read this category.
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| MorbidFantasy |
Posted: 2009/6/30 3:37 Updated: 2009/6/30 3:37 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/8/31 From: In arms that won't break me Posts: 447 |
Wow You know I can't really say anything because it's already been said, but I will
be honest with you. When I read the first paragraph, I honestly was going to
skip reading this. But! Then I scrolled down and saw the fuck ton of comments
so I decided to read it. And oh my! I am so glad that I did! I loved it all the
way through and I can see this one being a repeat reader for me. Thank you for
writing this! You're one with the words and I felt like I was there. It was quite
gripping. Thank you again. xxx Morby
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| Stitchless |
Posted: 2009/5/24 17:09 Updated: 2009/5/24 17:09 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2006/10/15 From: Where told to be Posts: 74 |
Gasp...gasp...gasp I love suspensful stories that are down to earth, believable yet full of steamy
sex. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Will he, won't he, will she,
won't she. And the ending! Wow, didn't see that cumming. Thanks
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| Lee |
Posted: 2009/5/15 21:36 Updated: 2009/5/15 21:36 |
Bookworm Joined: 2006/10/25 From: Chicago Posts: 95 |
A Masters Touch Alexandra, Without any doubt, this is the hotest story I have read in the LL!!
You have just the right amount of crudness---Passion----and vocabulary! I think
that the "EGG" was an intresting tool that made the reader wonder just when she
would loose it or break it, and make the reader wonder if she would be hurt with
the sharp edge of the egg shell if she had broken it! I think that YOU were the
master in this story and what the LL needs is a true master (author) and we do
have one in you! Congratulations and well done! Lee
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| Gearjammer |
Posted: 2009/4/27 14:10 Updated: 2009/4/27 14:10 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/12/20 From: Posts: 108 |
Chuckle.... my my my Alex, well done. I'd like to add some stinging rebuke for the 3 (or maybe 1 in
3 incarnations) people who posted childish crap, but you took good care of that
earlier. Any solid man who keeps either slaves or subs would be a fool to look
past you, little Alex. Your talents exceed expectation. Very well done. I'm very
proud of you.
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2009/4/21 14:22 Updated: 2009/4/21 14:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 2186 |
dreamy hot and wet Beautifully written Alexa, from start to finish! nice work ~ xoxo oxy
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| Ginger54 |
Posted: 2009/4/12 7:23 Updated: 2009/4/12 7:23 |
Flirt  Joined: 2006/11/17 From: Colorado, U.S. Posts: 23 |
wow wow Alexa luv that was great! thank you for shareing! kisses
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| sexrighter |
Posted: 2009/4/10 18:13 Updated: 2009/4/10 18:13 |
Flirt  Joined: 2009/2/11 From: USA Posts: 23 |
Thanks Thanks for a good Master slave story that is not over the top. Sexy, slutty and
believable!
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| xusia |
Posted: 2009/4/10 13:55 Updated: 2009/4/10 13:55 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/11/30 From: texas Posts: 1 |
this is hot This is a HOT story...I love to hear a woman beg to be fucked.
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| Lee |
Posted: 2009/4/9 13:54 Updated: 2009/4/9 13:54 |
Bookworm Joined: 2006/10/25 From: Chicago Posts: 95 |
A Masters Touch Normally, I don't make comments about the storys that I read, but the ones I
do comment about, usually get a line or two comment! However, I started reading
this and I was instantly sucked into a story that could pass for a reality, rather
than a fictional story. and I couldn't stop reading it! The situations expressing
your own lust as well as his passion, the kissing offered the reality that you
yourself MUST have done yourself! (ie the egg) In my own old age, I cannot ever
remember seeing a woman holding an egg that at any moment might fall out on the
floor! (A great twist to the story too) Then as you express the passion of the
kissing was done very well and I could almost see it being done too. The vocabulary
was excelent, and not mundane OR insipid! I think that the ONLY change I would
have made, would have been to use the word "love rather than Lord" otherwise
the vocabulary was right on. I do feel that the teasing DOES ad to this story
and I like that too. Details are included with just the right amount discription,
and a nice twist with the second lover! My only question for you is will the
wife seek her own personal revenge? maybe bring in a lover for her husband, like
someone he knows from work or maybe a friends younger sister/or mother?? I really
hope to talk to you about that at a later time! I grade this story as 4 A and
one of the best I have ever read here in the LL keep it up sweetheart Lee
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| ladys |
Posted: 2009/4/8 5:44 Updated: 2009/4/8 5:44 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/1/16 From: from the northern climes that make a good reason to snuggle with someone Posts: 6 |
more please that was a great read. I think I will go back and read it again
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| hotfuckingguy |
Posted: 2009/4/5 5:22 Updated: 2009/4/5 5:22 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/9/6 From: 3 rd planet from the sun Posts: 1 |
Good Job Awesomely done alexa :) great story.....
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2009/4/3 10:29 Updated: 2009/4/3 10:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/4/7 From: Fading into the western sunset... Posts: 5739 |
Ignore the CHILDREN Alexa. :) Every garden of beautiful stories, require a few 'WORMS' to help them grow! No
brains, brainy1 and lolo are an example of such! They show jealousy for excellant
writers, because they lack any talent of their own. Their pathetic little words
mean nothing NOTHING to us ! You are a GIFT to our library! Bring us more, of
what we long for..... L2
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2009/4/3 10:07 Updated: 2009/4/3 10:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/4/7 From: Fading into the western sunset... Posts: 5739 |
I knew you were HOT Alexa ... I just didn't realise HOW HOT? Concentration has not been a strong suit for me
lately Alexa, yet you kept my attention from the get go! You have a powerful
delivery of feelings, as you give us your words in a song! Yes, song! It was
like your body was singing, drawing us into harmony... and mutual orgasm! 3 well
deserved points from Luv2, for the newest TOP story on my fav's list! Master-Luv2
:)
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| master_swordsman |
Posted: 2009/4/2 20:14 Updated: 2009/4/2 20:14 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/3/15 From: Maryland Posts: 95 |
wow oh wow ok excellent as always I think I'm gonna go take a cold shower unless you wanna
join then we can make it hot and steamy ;-)
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2009/4/2 19:42 Updated: 2009/4/2 19:42 |
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WOW Alexa, you're story was amazing, you're story just made me discover a new turn
on of mine!!!...so thanks!
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| pinkphreak |
Posted: 2009/4/2 14:57 Updated: 2009/4/2 14:57 |
Flirt  Joined: 2008/2/22 From: beautiful pacific northwest Posts: 39 |
wow Hot and steamy Alexa! You deserve story of the week. I started and was going
to stop for a little bit to go do something in my kitchen, but I couldn't tear
myself away! lol. Bravo dear! <3
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/4/2 10:50 Updated: 2009/4/2 10:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1147 |
the best ... alexa ... ............. how did i miss this?! ... must have been when i was busy.
DAMN, you are good ( and you can write, too ) ... i want to be 'master' in your
next incarnation.
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| Bohemian-artist |
Posted: 2009/4/1 14:21 Updated: 2009/4/1 14:21 |
Virgin  Joined: 2007/9/26 From: Posts: 10 |
wonderful! Absolutely amazing! Great job!
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| vinciblesatyr |
Posted: 2009/3/29 16:02 Updated: 2009/3/29 16:02 |
Bookworm Joined: 2006/12/2 From: Maryland Posts: 71 |
A Master's Touch Alexa, You have me feeling exactly as your heroine and hero felt at the end of
the story...Totally spent. Thank you for such an erotic tale, one in which I
wish to be a character, especially if sweet Alexais the heroine. Beautifully
crafted, lovely lady. B
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| sensualtravler |
Posted: 2009/3/24 1:49 Updated: 2009/3/24 1:49 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/11/11 From: Looking over your shoulder. Posts: 278 |
Where's those damned tissues?! Mmm...uhh...wow...gee whiz! DAMNED! VERY NICE ALEX! Now THAT'S why I come to
LL....... Better than a pacemaker to get the ticker pounding and the blood pumping.
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| Eric |
Posted: 2009/3/21 20:30 Updated: 2009/3/21 20:30 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
Out of this World Alexa, this little piece of yours is quite possibly the hottest story I have
read in six months. Your slave is so hot the word hasn't been coined yet to describe
her......her insatiable pace and thirst is phenomenal. You know such a woman?
Whoa!! The thought is enough to make a guy break out in a cold sweat!!!
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| sextoy4her |
Posted: 2009/3/21 6:05 Updated: 2009/3/21 6:05 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/9/16 From: Central Texas Hill Country 60 yr old guy Posts: 501 |
Excellent Potential for Expansion A wonderful little story with excellent potential for development in to a really
great longer story, expanding upon character development and secret activities
during the party. Maybe this is the way a story should be. It leaves a great
deal for the mind to contemplate as to what could have happened, did happen,
or turns & twists that might have happened.
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| frisco007 |
Posted: 2009/3/21 5:42 Updated: 2009/3/21 5:42 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/6/15 From: Up above the clouds Posts: 1844 |
super Alexa, a super story, I was hard all the time reading it
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2009/3/20 22:57 Updated: 2009/3/20 22:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4522 |
Well written As we come to expect from you Alexa a lucid and candid storyline. For the more
negative comments, well thats your point of view, however you must accept that
others enjoy the bdsm lifestyle, its all about choices and we all make our own.
Alexa doesnt need me to stick up for her, but i find the negative comments unconstructive.
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| Tucker |
Posted: 2009/3/20 16:45 Updated: 2009/3/20 16:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/8/30 From: United Staes Posts: 182 |
I Take Profound Exception Both "no brains" and "brainy 1," I must say that your words here are less than
civil, and profoundly unfair and hurtful to a person I have come to know well
over several years. First of all, to take a story of this length and read it
from beginning to end when you don't find it to your liking does show that you
have, in your own words, "no brains." But I don't object to that as even grubs
and slugs are not much better off either. ( I am assuming of course that you
have read the entire story to make such a cynical series of remarks. Otherwise
what would your remarks be based on as a self-anointed "brainy1?") But what I,
as someone who knows this woman well for a long time object to, is the claim
that this story got to be story of the week in any way that was underhanded or
unjust. I will have you know that of all the people I have met on this site,
and it is many hundreds, I have met only 2 or possibly three people who have
more integrity than Alexandra M. For your information I personally wrote a post
on the fact that NEARLY ALL stories here and at other erotic sites get read many,
many times before anyone even comments on it. So your claim that it has had so
many hits and "only" 100+ points in a few days is contrary to fact. That is a
substantial score for many stories that have been on this site for a lot longer
than a few days!!! You should note that I am NOT in any way vested in this site
but am just an ordinary member who is doing this out of a deep sense of fairness
and justice.
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2009/3/20 16:11 Updated: 2009/3/20 16:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3225 |
wow!!! so very good, even better, far past best, long past outstanding, I was so wet,
I am so hot, my juices won't stop...hmmmmm, yes......
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| Alexandra_M |
Posted: 2009/3/20 12:06 Updated: 2009/3/20 12:06 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/1/16 From: East of the Moon Posts: 1423 |
no brains, brainy1, lolo or should I just call you handle1715? I fail to see what you are trying to accomplish here? Yes, you don't like me,
my lifestyle or my story, guess what? You don't have to! I can live without your
approval quite easily. Are you trying to dissuade people from reading the story?
Maybe, some would, but I tend to think the controversy will actually have more
people reading it. If you hope to take away the enjoyment that I had in writing
this story, I'm sorry, you can't.
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| Molly-girl |
Posted: 2009/3/19 15:37 Updated: 2009/3/19 15:37 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/10/23 From: Posts: 895 |
Brilliant! Certainly worth waiting for Alexa!! That's one hell of a story, way to go, girl!
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| Alexandra_M |
Posted: 2009/3/19 12:13 Updated: 2009/3/19 12:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/1/16 From: East of the Moon Posts: 1423 |
no brains Thank you for your comment. I think if you look at the voting, the story is proving
itself. Yes, I'm also pretty sure its not a Pulitzer prize winner, but I am damn
proud of it and of the man who made it possible for me to share such a big part
of myself, with other people.
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| red rose |
Posted: 2009/3/19 7:14 Updated: 2009/3/19 7:14 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/6/27 From: www.just-kinky.com Posts: 1668 |
Congrats... Beautifully written Alexa. x
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| Woman |
Posted: 2009/3/19 5:07 Updated: 2009/3/19 5:07 |
Chat Moderator  Joined: 2008/8/11 From: The Interrogation Room Posts: 1502 |
Encore! When is your next story out darling? You were so right! Not a good idea to read
this on the bus home!
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| BadRabbitGirl |
Posted: 2009/3/17 14:19 Updated: 2009/3/17 14:19 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/1/15 From: Tennessee Posts: 5 |
Oh to be owned! I love this Alexa! Very, very hot!
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| desertwolfaz |
Posted: 2009/3/17 13:46 Updated: 2009/3/17 13:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/8/9 From: Phoenix, AZ Posts: 780 |
Out-fucking-standing! That was hot and sexy, left me panting, wanting more. Excellent job.
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| AriannaKing |
Posted: 2009/3/17 12:42 Updated: 2009/3/17 12:42 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2008/10/18 From: UK Posts: 145 |
very sexy I like it A LOT! well written and a brilliant idea :D
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| Dukky |
Posted: 2009/3/17 6:54 Updated: 2009/3/17 6:54 |
Chat Moderator  Joined: 2006/6/7 From: The pond in the park Posts: 1571 |
Amazing Alex, this story is brilliant! White hot and filled with love at the same time.
Congratulations xo
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| wanderedhere |
Posted: 2009/3/17 3:02 Updated: 2009/3/17 3:02 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/12/27 From: I'm not sure, what day is it? Posts: 376 |
Love the tease She's been slowly teased and as are you Alexa towards the reader. A great slowly
smoldering build-up of sexual tension.
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| buddha1701d |
Posted: 2009/3/16 22:08 Updated: 2009/3/16 22:08 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/8/29 From: Texas Posts: 558 |
Very hot!!!! Outstanding job Alexa! Hope you will continue your writing!
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| irisheyesgirl |
Posted: 2009/3/16 20:58 Updated: 2009/3/16 20:58 |
Flirt Joined: 2007/8/30 From: Posts: 36 |
wowed one of the best stories i've read on here in a while. i'm thoroughly turned on,
and wish i had man to dominate me like that ;) superb job!
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| jakie |
Posted: 2009/3/16 20:54 Updated: 2009/3/16 20:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/29 From: USA - State known for "Big" Posts: 314 |
Master Excellent! Captivated me from the get go and held me until the end. Enjoyed!
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| Jane Awsum |
Posted: 2009/3/16 20:37 Updated: 2009/3/16 20:37 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/12/18 From: East Coast Posts: 159 |
Inspiring!!! Since discovering LL I have read many enjoyable stories, but relativley few have
been truly inspiring. Welcome to my short list with this one, Alexandra_M.
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| well behaved lady |
Posted: 2009/3/16 15:57 Updated: 2009/3/16 15:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/4/10 From: RSVP Erotica Posts: 4028 |
Congratulations Alexa, vivid descriptions. Wubble XXX
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| lovemymistress |
Posted: 2009/3/16 14:24 Updated: 2009/3/16 14:24 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/10/22 From: NY Posts: 228 |
Wow... That was hot... and that is saying a lot coming from a lesbian... LMM
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| Alexandra_M |
Posted: 2009/3/16 13:28 Updated: 2009/3/16 13:28 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/1/16 From: East of the Moon Posts: 1423 |
A very big thank you! I seem unable to reply to the individual comments, so i would just like to thank
you for reading and commenting. It is appreciated. Alexa
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| peachiebaby |
Posted: 2009/3/16 13:05 Updated: 2009/3/16 13:05 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/4/26 From: In your dreams love, in your dreams Posts: 323 |
One word.......... Fuckingbrilliant! Kisses Peachie
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2009/3/16 12:05 Updated: 2009/3/16 12:05 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 642 |
Wonderful!!! This could serve as a case study in the depiction of hungry hard edged sex that
is polished and well oiled by feminine perspective and desire. Great descriptions,
great word play, very erotic.
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| wyliecoyote |
Posted: 2009/3/16 9:03 Updated: 2009/3/16 9:03 |
Moderator   Joined: 2008/2/22 From: on the road to nowhere Posts: 1209 |
Wow! What can i say, loved every part of it.
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| cinnamonkisses |
Posted: 2009/3/16 5:58 Updated: 2009/3/16 5:58 |
Flirt Joined: 2009/3/1 From: Philippines Posts: 38 |
BLAZING HOT. you're sooo great Alexa. got me turned on, totally. haha. :)
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| angiewalkerblue |
Posted: 2009/3/16 5:17 Updated: 2009/3/16 5:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/31 From: Australia Posts: 2002 |
Hmmmmmmm Nice one Alexa........written from the heart!
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| tom82 |
Posted: 2009/3/16 4:57 Updated: 2009/3/16 4:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/6/22 From: London, UK Posts: 370 |
=] Alexa that was fucking amazing.. Hard as nails doesn't even begin to describe!!
;) Loved every word. thank you and very well written x x
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| Arwen |
Posted: 2009/3/16 4:38 Updated: 2009/3/16 4:38 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/11/19 From: Middle Earth Posts: 172 |
wow oh alexa, what a great story and what a great turn on. Especially when the 3rd
comes into play. The ending is just perfect......more pls......X
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