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  Cheating Slave (1/3)  

14 votes
Author: gnarlygirl  Published: 10/5/2006  story views: 6957
 


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She knew she’d done it this time. Her Master would never forgive her. He had gone out of town for a few days, leaving her to her own devices. She was ok for the first few days, but she got lonely and on his last night out of town she went to the bar they liked. She’d been flirting with this cute guy at the bar, and had just turned to dance with him, when she saw her Master at the door. His icy glare pinned her where she stood. She’d quickly made her excuses and left the gentleman to go to her Master’s side.

He’d come back into town early, and went to her house to surprise her. Not finding her there he’d quickly located her at the bar. His recriminations and disappointment was nothing to hers. She was his body and soul, of her own free will. She’d signed the slavery agreement herself. He’d turned and walked away from her. She’d followed him out begging and pleading for forgiveness. He’d told her to meet him at his house first thing and morning and left.

She parked and got out of the car. She was wearing a trench coat with nothing on under it, because she knew that’s how he liked her. Soon as she rang the doorbell he answered. Her heart leaped at his handsome, beloved face. He held out his hand and she immediately took off the coat and handed it to him. He hung it on a coat rack and turned walking out of room. She followed him hurriedly knowing they were going to the playroom, but today would be no playful session.  As soon as they were in the door she dropped to her knees, kneeling before him, head down in an attitude of complete submission. She saw his feet as he stood there looking down at her.

Finally he spoke. “Do you want to be mine slave?”

Immediately she responded with, “Yes Master.”

“You didn’t show that last night Slave. You showed an utter disregard for my ownership. Do you accept the consequences of your actions slave?”

“Yes Master,” she responded at once.

“Then you will accept punishment, and work hard to earn my trust again slave?”

“Yes Master I will.”

She watched his feet as he walked across the room stopping at a door leading into the rest of the house. Opening it, she heard him talking to someone. She watched is he returned bringing someone with him.

“Look up slave.”

Looking up she looked right into the face of the man she had started to dance with the night before. Her heart thundered as she pondered what his appearance could mean.

“Slave this is my friend Katrina’s slave. He was at the bar last night looking for a playmate for his Mistress. She let me borrow him, and I’ve giving him permission to punish you for me.”

“Please Master No….”

“Do you wish to stay with me Slave?”

“Yes Master with all my heart.”

“Then take your punishment, and we’ll forget the whole thing happened.”

He turned and left leaving her with her worst nightmare. She knew as a slave herself that if given the opportunity to punish another slave she would be even harsher then her Master, and from the look on this one’s face he was of a like mind. He said not a word, just grabbed her hair and pulled her to the middle of the room, where handcuffs hung down from the ceiling and shackles were hooked to the floor. Roughly he handcuffed her, before kicking her legs far

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Romano Giovanni
Posted: 2006/10/15 23:20  Updated: 2006/10/15 23:20
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/13
From: I travel a lot.
Posts: 17
 Re: Deja vous much?
Don't change it if you have it the way you wanted it! I gave you two stars! It wasn't like I thought it was BAD, I just thought it repeated some stuff from the first one. Two stars is good still! *hugs*
gnarlygirl
Posted: 2006/10/15 21:42  Updated: 2006/10/15 21:42
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/9/22
From: Florida
Posts: 96
 Re: Deja vous much?
No stars...cries into my mush. Huggssssssss I'll see what I can change. There are a million ways to punish and humilate a body. I'm sure I can figure out something diffrent.
Romano Giovanni
Posted: 2006/10/15 21:09  Updated: 2006/10/15 21:09
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/13
From: I travel a lot.
Posts: 17
 Deja vous much?
I thought this story was structurally well written, but it was almost a complete repeat of "Punishment." From the need to punish a slave to the bringing in of outside help (though I have heard is a common thing in the master/slave lifestyle for a master to use another person to punish their subordinates), to the method of punishment, “Cheating Slave” mirrored “Punishment.” The anal pounding without lubrication, combined with a fisting while chained up was almost the same. The cat and the urine was an interesting touch, though extremely harsh. The comment about castration made me cringe. If the lifestyle goes that far, I definitely would never want to be a part of it, neither as master or as slave, though I am more inclined to submission than dominance. Urine actually can act as an astringent, cleaning wounds and preventing infection, so if he peed on the lash marks (provided he had broken the skin, which I am not sure from the story if he did) it would actually do some good. Of course it is a tale of fiction and I’m bringing too much reality into it. It was a good story in all, but I just see so many comparisons to “Punishment” including the treatment after the punisher leaves. I can’t give three stars for this one just for that reason.
gnarlygirl
Posted: 2006/10/15 6:08  Updated: 2006/10/15 6:08
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/9/22
From: Florida
Posts: 96
 Re: Hmmm
Thanks for the comments. I appreacate any critisism as I do take my work serously. I relize this is not a well accepted area, but I hope the BDSM readers appreacate it.
lilypad
Posted: 2006/10/9 9:34  Updated: 2006/10/9 9:34
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/3/21
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Posts: 578
 Hmmm
Definitely not my thing! You did a great job writing and it was very heartfelt! I'll check out some of your other literary adventures.