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| shewalks |
Posted: 2007/12/20 20:12 Updated: 2007/12/20 20:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/11/18 From: Australia Posts: 352 |
 Re: Hey Oz. This is the first story of yours I've read. I loved it.The pictures your words
created stirred my pot. In pondering what makes a story work for me I've decided
that heightened sensual and emotional awareness build the tension deliciously.
You achieved that tingling and tightening with your descriptions of clothing,
movement and the entire interview senario. Bravo.
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| wordlover |
Posted: 2007/7/3 4:29 Updated: 2007/7/3 4:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/8/14 From: Everywhere and Yet nowhere Posts: 409 |
 Hey Oz. I understand your story or the start of your story. Not all BDSM is touch, paddling
, whips, chain and other things to inflick pain and pleasure at the same time.
As clara found out being put on display and being embrassed can have the same
effect. Can't wait to read the rest or part 2.
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| cydde |
Posted: 2007/7/2 17:55 Updated: 2007/7/2 17:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/9/25 From: Posts: 7 |
 controversial! Loved it! Am a big fan of 'mirror image' and a prequal is always good. Am looking
forward to the next one.
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| ozmango00 |
Posted: 2007/7/2 8:00 Updated: 2007/7/2 8:00 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/24 From: Sydney, Australia Posts: 320 |
 Re: sorry You are entitled to your view but you have obviously only read american attempts
at bdsm .If you ever read any English versions such as we find in a magazine
called Scarlet you may even learn something. Also as you have never commented
on previous stories I thank you for the comment.
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| sextoy4her |
Posted: 2007/7/1 17:18 Updated: 2007/7/1 17:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/9/16 From: Central Texas Hill Country 58 yr old guy Posts: 267 |
 LIKE IT! I liked your story, Oz, even voted on this one. The D/s is good area for stories,
since no D/s section, this is a good place for this story. Also, i totally agree
with KinkyKrys post, the humiliation & embarrassing submission are an excellent
avenue to explore. It has much potential for further chapters, hope you are working
on them.
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| wer |
Posted: 2007/7/1 15:21 Updated: 2007/7/1 15:21 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: New England, USA Posts: 535 |
 sorry The "sex" in the story seemed thrown in for good measure. It did not add to the
story and in no way was the story at all sexual or had any thing to do with BDSM.
Maybe you should read more stories at this site & other places before you try
writing again. Stories should be exciting, not dull.
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| ozmango00 |
Posted: 2007/6/30 7:04 Updated: 2007/6/30 7:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/24 From: Sydney, Australia Posts: 320 |
 Re: Well... Thanks Krys I thought apparently wrongly that humiliation was a form of bdsm
. Having to sit in front of people naked and have them touch her is humiliating
and unacceptable to most women - no -most people, in fact. IT is so good to have
a comment that provokes comments thanks again.....votes are of little consequence.
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| Krys |
Posted: 2007/6/29 10:32 Updated: 2007/6/29 10:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/15 From: Maidstone, Kent, UK Posts: 159 |
 Well... (stands up on the soap box) To many people BDSM is not all about the whipping,
torturing or binding. I think this is a different area of BDSM that has not been
recognised on this site very often. I believe the main characters actions and
feelings are more of a testiment to what many in the lifestyle think and feel
as they enter the scene. Personally i think this is a well thoughtout prequel
and i would really enjoy it if Oz would write more stories like this. (climbs
down from the soap box)
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| ozmango00 |
Posted: 2007/6/28 21:57 Updated: 2007/6/28 21:57 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/24 From: Sydney, Australia Posts: 320 |
 Get off my back They missed the first line which reads Prequel to Mirror Image- if prequel is
too difficult it means set at a time pre-existing that story- so this is how
Claire gets into bdsm. Wow this is what it takes to get a comment I will mislabel
all my stories in the future....
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| noimaginationsoborrowsurs |
Posted: 2007/6/28 20:52 Updated: 2007/6/28 20:52 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/6/17 From: North Carolina Posts: 84 |
 maybe BDSM in the next installment? *hoping it comes soon*
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| Kitten |
Posted: 2007/6/28 17:36 Updated: 2007/6/28 17:36 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/4/14 From: Posts: 128 |
 Huh? Have I missed something here? Where is the BDSM? Kitten
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| summer47 |
Posted: 2007/6/28 16:08 Updated: 2007/6/28 16:08 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/2/26 From: Bedford, UK Posts: 88 |
 And? BDSM? Where?
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