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| CumShotGodess |
Posted: 2010/1/3 21:19 Updated: 2010/1/3 21:19 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/9/4 From: Posts: 3 |
 :O god this made me well horny. tbh well written :) want more stories from you please
:) x
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| NaughtyFaye |
Posted: 2009/11/15 20:58 Updated: 2009/11/15 20:58 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2009/6/29 From: Georgia, USA Posts: 41 |
darn I wish my library's copiers weren't in the rhotunda!
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| organism |
Posted: 2009/9/25 18:51 Updated: 2009/9/25 18:51 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/12/2 From: Posts: 1 |
Naughty narrator I loved this and the voice over added spice!
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| JJ Forever |
Posted: 2009/7/13 4:11 Updated: 2009/7/13 4:11 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/7/12 From: Oregon Posts: 11 |
A TITLE TO CATCH YOUR ATTENTION!!! Very nice story! Like a lot of posters, I too feel the sex scene could have been
a bit longer, and maybe some foreplay before BANG-Sex. But don't ever shorten
anything else. The entire introduction, and some details throught the story,
made me really feel like it was winter! I felt like I was there, and apart from
the sex, it seemed like a very believable situation. You're a very talented writer,
and you're words flow extremely well. Keep up the good work!
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| youarethemoon |
Posted: 2009/3/16 10:42 Updated: 2009/3/16 10:42 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/3/15 From: Posts: 6 |
i'm... literally about to cum. a fantastic story, and your voice made it even hotter.
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| AmberLee |
Posted: 2009/2/28 15:53 Updated: 2009/2/28 15:53 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/2/27 From: Posts: 8 |
The sound... Of your voice made the story so much better :) although the story was AMAZING
by itself :)
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| Owned_slave |
Posted: 2009/2/5 0:31 Updated: 2009/2/5 0:31 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/9/1 From: Posts: 11 |
good but could have been a wee bit longer on the sexual part :) i like the ending though
with some one walking off the elevator.
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| frankwilson |
Posted: 2008/12/28 21:27 Updated: 2008/12/28 21:27 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/12/24 From: Posts: 13 |
Copies anyone Fantastic writing. Your narration made it even better and believeable. Excellent
job.
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| deprived4muno? |
Posted: 2008/8/19 12:03 Updated: 2008/8/19 12:03 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/8/5 From: Posts: 1 |
the sexy voice! good reader with a sexy voice! I would look for your kind of voice (among other
things) as I am looking for a girl friend and or a wife.
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| sfoster |
Posted: 2008/5/9 1:57 Updated: 2008/5/9 1:57 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/5/7 From: N.C. Posts: 5 |
HOT!!!!!! This story was very erotic but your voice was the most amazing thing!!!! You
have an extremly sexy voice!!! Please make more I loved it!!!!
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| Eric |
Posted: 2008/3/25 20:25 Updated: 2008/3/25 20:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
What A Voice Over a year later, and I have listened to this again. The reader's audio is still
very sexy! What a voice she has...whew! For that reason this is one of my all
time favorites.
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| pen2extacy |
Posted: 2007/10/7 13:53 Updated: 2007/10/7 13:53 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/7/4 From: California Posts: 32 |
Great story!! Really exciting!!!
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| DragonFire |
Posted: 2007/9/28 1:40 Updated: 2007/9/28 1:40 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Sadly, Ohio Posts: 232 |
hmmm.... very intriguing story. I LIKE IT!
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| ll4reeel |
Posted: 2007/9/24 2:23 Updated: 2007/9/24 2:23 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/9/22 From: Posts: 4 |
Very good The imaging was great, just the story should have been finished off. But apart
from that, it was a very enjoyable piece. Have you considered writing novels?
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| chimaera |
Posted: 2007/9/16 1:26 Updated: 2007/9/16 1:26 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/9/15 From: Posts: 4 |
So hot... Waaaaayyyyyyyy sexy. There is no way you can go about life without at least thinling
about writing more...
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| lostboy37 |
Posted: 2007/8/18 14:49 Updated: 2007/8/18 14:49 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Posts: 1 |
smashing Can I add that class? Smashing voice to go with a seductive story ...
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| bladed_thesis |
Posted: 2007/7/7 13:20 Updated: 2007/7/7 13:20 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/11/4 From: Hong Kong Posts: 152 |
College I wish things like that would have happened to me in College! Great story and
really had the mind and libido working.
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| defaultian |
Posted: 2007/6/24 3:40 Updated: 2007/6/24 3:40 |
Virgin  Joined: 2007/2/21 From: Right here. Posts: 5 |
Breathtaking I loved the story and I especially loved the person who read the story. A very
good read.
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| bardius |
Posted: 2007/4/28 6:45 Updated: 2007/4/28 6:45 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/3/24 From: Posts: 3 |
coolieos nice story XD
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| prop69 |
Posted: 2007/4/4 16:48 Updated: 2007/4/4 16:48 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/5/23 From: GA Posts: 13 |
Buying my own Copy Machine I think I'll buy my own copy machine. It sounds like a great line.
Nice story. I would have liked a little more foreplay especially while you
were making copies.
Loved the sexy voice reading the story!!!
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| Skipper1974 |
Posted: 2007/3/23 16:32 Updated: 2007/3/23 16:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2006/2/12 From: San Diego, CA Posts: 167 |
Very Nice... Oh me likey
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2007/2/12 15:04 Updated: 2007/2/12 15:04 |
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WOW awesome stuff Awesome stuff, i don't really care for an 'wouldn't it be so cool if you'd
added' watever, as that story was perfect as is, it needs no more adding to
it, you are a truely a talented writer.
Catcha ya
Sirenxxx
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| Jorje Theo |
Posted: 2007/2/11 16:41 Updated: 2007/2/11 16:41 |
Flirt  Joined: 2007/2/5 From: with my family Posts: 33 |
Hmmm... Did realize that when you did that, it was taking notes. Glad you took the
m thought. Care to make me a copy?
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| vin_t007 |
Posted: 2007/1/28 15:02 Updated: 2007/1/28 15:02 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/1/28 From: india Posts: 1 |
beautiful voice very well done nice job
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| TheClaw18 |
Posted: 2007/1/22 20:48 Updated: 2007/1/22 20:48 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/1/17 From: Posts: 127 |
great job you got a great voice and i need to tell my school to build a few more lvls
onto the library!
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| Eric |
Posted: 2006/12/29 22:31 Updated: 2006/12/29 22:31 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
Great Audio!! Second time through this I listened to the audio and the reader's voice and style were as awesome as the story itself. You have to catch this voice. It is delicious.
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| tom thumper |
Posted: 2006/12/23 20:29 Updated: 2006/12/23 20:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/12/20 From: left coast of Canada Posts: 259 |
great story atmosphere... Loved the slow build, the feeling of erotic tension, but yeah I agree with other posters it would be great if the sex went on longer, perhaps generating even more tension...
Love those climaxes!
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| Eric |
Posted: 2006/12/8 10:22 Updated: 2006/12/8 10:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
Gotta Love It How could anyone resist wishing they could have such an experience????
It was hot and sexy and thought provoking!!!!
(among other things!)
Really loved it!!!
Shy
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| sexyman123 |
Posted: 2006/11/21 16:00 Updated: 2006/11/21 16:00 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/11/21 From: Posts: 12 |
what a coincidence lol this is freaky im in college now and pretty much the exact same thing happened to me a few weeks ago i was copying this girls notes and nextg thing i know shes riding my like a mechanical bull, have u been following me?
btw i have to clean cum off my keyboard now thanks alot
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| sweet dreamer |
Posted: 2006/9/24 13:47 Updated: 2006/9/24 13:47 |
Flirt Joined: 2006/8/3 From: england Posts: 34 |
Huba huba Just wanted to say i loved the story. Got me realy going, had to drag hubby to bed for lunch time fun. Keep writting.
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| sexxylover |
Posted: 2006/7/17 1:27 Updated: 2006/7/17 1:27 |
Flirt Joined: 2006/3/19 From: hartford Posts: 26 |
hey........ ...hey that was great
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| secto_5 |
Posted: 2006/7/11 0:23 Updated: 2006/7/11 0:23 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/7/10 From: GA Posts: 1 |
Re: Great story! it was great but u could of had a threesome if it had that it would be perfect.
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| Luvnlace |
Posted: 2006/7/5 14:50 Updated: 2006/7/5 14:57 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/5/18 From: South Carolina Posts: 1 |
Great story! Wow!! Great story!
Never thought a library could be sexy, now everyones going to be wondering why I keep smiling while choosing books. Dang copiers are next to the check out desk here!
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| cocochanel |
Posted: 2006/6/13 12:48 Updated: 2006/6/13 12:48 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2006/6/5 From: Pacific Northwest Posts: 106 |
Cute story I liked this story--especially how they were both caught up in the moment. Very realistic; the point of view was great. Just wish the sex scene was a little more kinky!
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| jtri121 |
Posted: 2006/4/15 13:17 Updated: 2006/4/15 13:17 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/1/12 From: Midwestern USA Posts: 4 |
My Comment Sandwich. I'll starty with something tha tI liked, then something I think you could improve on, then end on something good.
First off, the writing and the audio file combined were very good. I could see the images whenever I closed my eyes, and I still can. Your a very good writer with the knowledge of what most readers would like in a story.
Second, I believe that you could improve on the length of the sex scene. The person that came out of the elevator could either start up a new sex scene, or you could haven lengthened the sex scene and have the person stepping out of the elevator catch them right in the middle of it.
Thirdly, the whole story receives a rating of 7 out of 10 from me. Excellent story, but people only get a perfect ten out of me if it is the right length ;) However, don't get down in the dumps by any criticism. Your a good writer and you should be proud of that. Keep up the good work.
Your Lusty Library Friend,
jtri121
AKA James Erickson
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| criticroyal |
Posted: 2006/4/8 18:02 Updated: 2006/4/8 18:02 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/3/3 From: England Posts: 3 |
college im in college ay the moment and this story has definitley given me ideas..my copy machines are on the top floor. great story really realistic i saw the images in my mind.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/3/2 18:33 Updated: 2006/3/2 18:33 |
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college great story!If only that would really happen in school....
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/2/28 16:02 Updated: 2006/2/28 16:02 |
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lust it would be so sexy if the proffeser stept of the elevator and the three of them would have a threesome
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/2/28 12:13 Updated: 2006/2/28 12:13 |
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i loved it.com a lovely comment. such a great command of the english language
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/2/28 12:07 Updated: 2006/2/28 12:07 |
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lusty library member as a seasoned erotic novel and sunsual story utiliser and enthusiast i feel it is my duty to judge and pass comment on all such literature?
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| latinmama |
Posted: 2006/2/22 16:05 Updated: 2006/2/22 16:05 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2006/2/7 From: new york city Posts: 89 |
i loved it. this was actually a great story, with real people getting all swept up. it was more believable and the images were definitely in my mind.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/2/13 22:57 Updated: 2006/2/13 22:57 |
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Re: Great story! Dear fuckin' god that was retarted! Erm...anyway, It would have been cool if the person stepping out had been like...the teacher of the class 'they're' in.
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| topbadog |
Posted: 2005/12/14 12:39 Updated: 2005/12/14 12:39 |
Flirt Joined: 2005/12/12 From: Posts: 22 |
Any Guy Would Want This To Happen Nice set up but could have had a little longer sex encounter. I could see her rocking on him in my mind so that image was good.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2005/12/12 2:28 Updated: 2005/12/12 2:28 |
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Nice! Very good, I'm in college, wish I would be that lucky.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2005/12/9 11:24 Updated: 2005/12/9 11:24 |
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Re: I wish it s so bad
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| Elelith |
Posted: 2005/12/4 15:19 Updated: 2005/12/4 15:19 |
Flirt Joined: 2005/12/4 From: London Posts: 26 |
Pheww OMG, that was one of the best stories I have read in a long while. WOW!
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| Greedyandneedy |
Posted: 2005/11/24 3:51 Updated: 2005/11/24 3:52 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2005/10/29 From: UK, South East Posts: 502 |
Fab I've actually re-read this story a few times. I really like it.
Thought you may like to know.
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| Greedyandneedy |
Posted: 2005/11/2 9:08 Updated: 2005/11/2 9:08 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2005/10/29 From: UK, South East Posts: 502 |
Re: I wish Yeah, life's a bitch hey. ha ha
I wish I'd gone to that college
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2005/8/22 16:52 Updated: 2005/8/22 16:52 |
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I wish My school's copy machines were in the front of the library by the main entrance.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2005/8/17 15:48 Updated: 2005/8/17 15:48 |
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Great story! Made me want to be back in college!
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