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| emma_skye |
Posted: 2010/2/10 23:16 Updated: 2010/2/10 23:16 |
Virgin   Joined: 2010/1/30 From: Colorado Posts: 7 |
 Very Hot That was a very hot story but I wish it didnt end so abruptly. I hope your thinking
of writing more.
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| Fmehard |
Posted: 2010/1/22 16:05 Updated: 2010/1/22 16:05 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/9/7 From: Posts: 9 |
HOT One of the hottest stories I have every read. My pussy is dripping!!! THANK YOU
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| sprinklesxxx |
Posted: 2010/1/3 22:28 Updated: 2010/1/3 22:28 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2009/11/12 From: Ireland Posts: 69 |
Christ on a bike My god that is the hottest thing i have ever read! Loved it.
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| MooxMoo |
Posted: 2009/12/28 17:52 Updated: 2009/12/28 17:52 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/4/11 From: United States Posts: 9 |
... This was well written. Through all the distractions I had while reading this,
I couldn't quit. o-o
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| unending.desire |
Posted: 2009/2/28 20:20 Updated: 2009/2/28 20:20 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/12/28 From: Posts: 14 |
gasp Aww I want one!
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| lolamiramar09 |
Posted: 2009/2/18 2:55 Updated: 2009/2/18 2:55 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/2/16 From: Twin Cities, MN Posts: 2 |
The Android.... If only I could order one on E-Bay! D.A.V.I.D. wouldnt cheat, make you sick,
or leave the toilet seat up, LOL
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| scubadvr |
Posted: 2009/2/17 12:22 Updated: 2009/2/17 12:22 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/2/16 From: somwhere between heaven and havin' fun Posts: 3 |
Damnit! I liked it tremendously. Wouldn't it be nice if it was true. O to have mind blowing
sex with someone who knows exactly what you want without all the hassle of dating!
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2009/1/25 19:32 Updated: 2009/1/25 19:32 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
no wonder it sounded so right, I'd read it before...see how good it is?????
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2009/1/25 19:29 Updated: 2009/1/25 19:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
this is great a movie, "making mr right", you did a better job at making it more interesting...the
is really the only way I could totally enjoy a male.
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| Lady O |
Posted: 2009/1/11 19:33 Updated: 2009/1/11 19:33 |
Flirt  Joined: 2008/9/8 From: California Posts: 30 |
DAMN Mommy I want one of those for christmas! Holy shit that was hot. Thank you for
the wetness. Lady O
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2008/12/31 11:05 Updated: 2008/12/31 11:05 |
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Congratulations Congratulations Sam on 3rd place, very well deserving. I enjoyed this story immensely,
due to the uniqueness you showed. The added element of voyerism was enjoyable.
All in all a great story!
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2008/12/30 11:54 Updated: 2008/12/30 11:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
I have to admit That i didnt read this before, but now that i have i can see how your writing
earned you 3rd place
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| Jonathan_Philips |
Posted: 2008/12/18 10:59 Updated: 2008/12/18 10:59 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/2/3 From: London UK Posts: 3011 |
Well done! A really fun, imaginatively unique little story. If I dare make one observation
it is that I didn't understand your leap back and forth from first-person perspective
to third-person, but I thoroughly enjoyed it nonetheless.
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| JustSomeGuy |
Posted: 2008/11/15 9:04 Updated: 2008/11/15 9:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/4 From: Jacksonville FL Posts: 1065 |
WOW Simply Amazing. Very Hot, Very well written. Loved it
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| shadowqueen |
Posted: 2008/6/3 16:42 Updated: 2008/6/3 16:42 |
Virgin  Joined: 2007/8/22 From: Posts: 9 |
OMFG OMFG OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u have a sick mind, my friend. Exelent story!!
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| GeorgetheWriter |
Posted: 2008/5/24 15:13 Updated: 2008/5/24 15:13 |
Flirt Joined: 2006/5/3 From: New Jersey near NYC Posts: 27 |
Great idea! but I caught a problem Great idea! but I caught a problem. You start out talking in thre first person
"I" then switch without warning or transition to the third person "Jillie." Still,
I liked its naughtiness and female perspective.
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| GeorgetheWriter |
Posted: 2008/5/24 15:12 Updated: 2008/5/24 15:12 |
Flirt Joined: 2006/5/3 From: New Jersey near NYC Posts: 27 |
Great idea! but I caught a problem Great idea! but I caught a problem. You start out talking in thre first person
"I" then switch without warning or transition to the third person "Jillie." Still,
I liked its naughtiness and female perspective.
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| frisco007 |
Posted: 2008/5/19 3:50 Updated: 2008/5/19 3:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/6/15 From: Up above the clouds Posts: 1829 |
amazing a brilliant idea.. a good story ...
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| navyman13 |
Posted: 2008/5/18 11:37 Updated: 2008/5/18 11:37 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/5/17 From: Florida Posts: 2 |
WOW that was amazing. Is there going to be anymore david stories. Can't wait to see
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| angelic_l3itch |
Posted: 2008/5/14 12:37 Updated: 2008/5/14 12:37 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2005/10/5 From: North Carolina Posts: 134 |
awesome... That story was one of the best I have read in awhile...I absolutely loved it!!
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| calitree |
Posted: 2008/5/13 12:56 Updated: 2008/5/13 12:56 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/6/4 From: Bristol, England Posts: 5 |
damn! i hope theres one of those for guys out there somewhere too! p.s. great story!
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| horniertday |
Posted: 2008/5/12 15:28 Updated: 2008/5/12 15:28 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/7/31 From: Posts: 2 |
MMMMMMmmmmmm Very hot....I've often fantasized about fucking a robot....I've seen a movie
about it too....it was soooooooooo HOT!!!!!!
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| Maryfvo |
Posted: 2008/5/8 11:30 Updated: 2008/5/8 11:30 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/4/28 From: Miami Fl Posts: 15 |
Sounds expensive They better get to making these quick. Loved every page.
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| godessofhell |
Posted: 2008/5/6 11:32 Updated: 2008/5/6 11:32 |
Virgin  Joined: 2006/1/30 From: CANADA!!! Posts: 8 |
woww oh dear god that was unbelieveably hot!!! awesome job!!! that story got me so
horny! honestly one of the best stories i've read on here so far! <3
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| ramrod_seeker |
Posted: 2008/5/5 16:54 Updated: 2008/5/5 16:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/4/27 From: Michigan Posts: 381 |
aye very good!
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2008/5/4 4:59 Updated: 2008/5/4 4:59 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
there sam you proved my point, other then making sperm for babys we don't need thosefucking
men, great story, loved it
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| Kara-Wildsong |
Posted: 2008/5/3 23:28 Updated: 2008/5/3 23:28 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/5/2 From: Posts: 17 |
Amazing! This is gorgeously delicious!
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| firey_lover |
Posted: 2008/5/3 22:36 Updated: 2008/5/3 22:36 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2007/10/24 From: California Posts: 75 |
wow! congrats, you found a way to have a perfect lover, and not try to make him seem
real, i'm impressed
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| wanderedhere |
Posted: 2008/5/3 6:11 Updated: 2008/5/3 6:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/12/27 From: I'm not sure, what day is it? Posts: 375 |
Unique but well told I liked how you have dared to be different here. The story is one of the more
unique ones I have read and I'm glad you wrote it. The addition of the watchers
adds an extra element of voyerism to the story. You almost made David human,
which was tricky. Now all we need is the David and Cherry2000 story and we are
all redundant.
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| Emerald Panther |
Posted: 2008/5/1 14:02 Updated: 2008/5/1 14:02 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/1/30 From: too many miles from my other half :( Posts: 153 |
Loved it... so much I couldn't even last as long as Jillie! :)...glad it got story of the
month since I wasn't around when it was first posted!
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| rockshorty30 |
Posted: 2008/4/20 22:07 Updated: 2008/4/20 22:07 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/4/20 From: new zealand Posts: 6 |
ummm well don't we all need someone or something like that. Pleased me to no ends.
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| xlonewolfx |
Posted: 2008/4/20 12:48 Updated: 2008/4/20 12:48 |
Flirt  Joined: 2008/4/20 From: Posts: 22 |
wow Wow, that was awesome. Great job with the writing. Can't wait for more ^_~
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| luckykissx5 |
Posted: 2008/4/19 15:09 Updated: 2008/4/19 15:09 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/3/3 From: Some Girls are Just Born Lucky Posts: 1691 |
Very Very good. hmm I loved your discriptions. The whole robot thing is not up my ally, but it
was a pleasure to read anyways. I really loved the creativitie and the added
voyerism involved. Hit alot of different notes in your store.. yummy.
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| Astrial Whispers |
Posted: 2008/4/18 18:33 Updated: 2008/4/18 18:35 |
Bookworm Joined: 2007/5/18 From: International Library of Lusty Stories Posts: 108 |
Android the way you describe David made me visualize a hot bishonen, anime style! yumm.
I often wish Fifth was real so I could love him, that poor, sweet, sexy robot.
(you have to be a fan of Stargate SG-1 to know who the hell I am talking about.)
*why don't I fantasize about the actor who played him? no idea... *Cough* sorry
anyway full score!
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| Hathor |
Posted: 2008/4/16 22:17 Updated: 2008/4/16 22:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/4/13 From: USA Posts: 455 |
Hot stuff! Oooo - where can I get me one of these. More please!
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| PrettyLady |
Posted: 2008/4/16 21:26 Updated: 2008/4/16 21:26 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/4/13 From: The Land of Oz Posts: 3 |
WoW Very creative idea and SO HOT! I wish these were real!
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| peachgurl221 |
Posted: 2008/4/16 21:25 Updated: 2008/4/16 21:25 |
Flirt  Joined: 2008/2/14 From: Posts: 34 |
Wow I need one of those lmao. you had me panting for each page!!
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