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  A Haunting Reminder (11/11)  

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Author: Precious Pet  Published: 10/29/2007  story views: 10169
 


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in the gentlest of kisses. "Always remember this Stacey," he seemed to plead. "Always remember that you are mine, and that I, in turn am yours." Stacey started to tell him that she would not, could not, ever forget, but he held a finger to her lips. "Shhhhhh Kitten," he said. "Sleep now."

He wrapped his arms around her and pulled her into his body, warming her in the night-chilled air. Stacey fought against sleep, but felt an overwhelming drowsiness. With a satisfied sigh she felt her eyes slowly close as she drifted into slumber.

A sound awoke her and she opened her eyes grudgingly. With a start she realised that she was back in her own bed. "Hey there sleepyhead." A teasing voice drew her attention to the bedroom doorway. Eric stood there watching her with a teasing smile on his face. "I didn't think you were ever gonna wake up," he said with a smile. "I hope you don't mind me coming over early, but I thought I'd come straight from work and get changed here."

Confused, all Stacey could mumble was "Huh?"

Eric laughed. "Don't tell me you've forgotten about your own party?" Stacey sat up in the bed and looked around her in a daze. Her outfit was still hung on her wardrobe door! A glance at the clock told her that it was only 7 o'clock! A dream! It must have been nothing but a dream!

"Are you ok Stacey?" Eric asked in a concerned voice.

"F-fine I think," she stammered.

How could she tell him that she'd just had the most erotic dream of her life, and that he had been the main character! Deciding that he had no need to know she laughed her mood and the remnants of her dream off. "You can use the bathroom first while I wake up."

She looked away as Eric thanked her and started to unbutton his shirt, but couldn't help peeking at him when she was sure he wasn't looking. As he shrugged the shirt off his shoulders he turned slightly, and Stacey gasped when she caught sight of the little puckered scar just under his left nipple. Hearing her sharp intake of breath Eric turned a quizzical gaze at her and raised an eyebrow in question.

"What's wrong?" he asked.

"I was just wondering how you got that scar,” she replied.

"What scar?" He said, turning to look at her full on. "I don't have any scars." As Stacey started to point, in the distance an owl hooted, and a wolf howled, and before her very eyes the scar faded to nothing.

And then a whisper reverberated through the recesses of her mind.

"Remember me" was what she heard....

 
 
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MalGal
Posted: 2008/3/9 1:05  Updated: 2008/3/9 1:05
Virgin
Joined: 2008/1/28
From:
Posts: 10
 sequel?
pretty please?
Miss Vanessa
Posted: 2008/1/5 18:02  Updated: 2008/1/5 18:02
Virgin
Joined: 2007/12/30
From: S. Wales. UK
Posts: 17
 precious....
you write story's as well as you write poetry. I am so glad you won a prize for this! Just the right touch of romance to balance it out. Well done girl!
little one
Posted: 2007/11/11 20:37  Updated: 2007/11/11 20:37
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/29
From: Texas
Posts: 156
 Congrats
I have to agree with someone... not sure who said it lol but I love how this flowed and wasn't too crude... great story! Makes me miss mine all the more!!! Is it December yet????
Dapper Dan
Posted: 2007/11/8 8:35  Updated: 2007/11/8 8:35
Flirt
Joined: 2007/6/14
From: midwest, USA
Posts: 40
 Congrats..
on your third place win in the Halloween contest. Well done. DD.
erotic section
Posted: 2007/11/3 8:23  Updated: 2007/11/3 8:23
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/16
From: In the eye of the storm
Posts: 2382
 Wow
You write well - very easy to feel and visualize from your words. Excellent, Precious!
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/10/31 15:34  Updated: 2007/10/31 15:34
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 you really outdone yourself
his is really great keep it up and we'll have another regular prize winner
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/31 4:27  Updated: 2007/10/31 4:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/9/11
From: In your mind right now
Posts: 1364
 Thank you all!
I just wanted to thank you all for your lovely comments and words of encouragement. Having read some of the other entries i'm gobsmacked to have won 3rd place!! Thanks again everyone!! xxx
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/30 17:23  Updated: 2007/10/30 17:23
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
From:
Posts: 2871
 Precious,
Congratulations to you! Now when can I borrow that sexy cat costume of yours? teehee
red rose
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:53  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:53
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/27
From:
Posts: 1670
 Congrats on 3rd place...
Hey Well Done for your story too.. I read it and knew it would do well... and thank you so much for your comments on mine... Congrats again on being a winner.. Rose x
red rose
Posted: 2007/10/30 4:13  Updated: 2007/10/30 4:13
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/27
From:
Posts: 1670
 Well Done...
Great Story...vivid, descriptive and hot...great visualisations...Good Luck with the Contest. x
serendipity
Posted: 2007/10/29 22:00  Updated: 2007/10/29 22:00
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/10/5
From: UK
Posts: 87
 Bravo!
This story has it all! Wonderful setting, beautifully descriptive, amazingly sexy without being crude...and it was easy to read too! It was simple to read the story in pictures in my mind as well as words on the page....it was that well written. And it left the door open to a part 2. Impressed doesn't even come close.
Master2u
Posted: 2007/10/29 21:03  Updated: 2007/10/29 21:03
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/9/11
From: FL
Posts: 48
 Great Work
Very Hott! The detail of it all, let me visualise every action. You described the love so tender I just plan and simple loved it.The story leaves me wondering more,what with the scar?
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/29 18:18  Updated: 2007/10/29 18:18
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/12/17
From:
Posts: 2871
 Precious,
Wow!!! You had me lost in a trance as your story unfolded. Is it too late for me to set up a costume party? I want what she had!!!
cindy
Posted: 2007/10/29 12:04  Updated: 2007/10/29 12:04
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/30
From: down the county...
Posts: 1541
 Precious!
That was amaizing! I loved every detail and I felt like I could feel the way she touched him when they were together. Wow.