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  A Wicked Temptation (2/5)  

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Author: red rose  Published: 10/23/2007  story views: 19617
 


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trees in front. A small farmhouse, with a deathly aura, nestled within shrouds of bushes. A huge elm tree spread its broad branches over the roof of it. A labyrinth of sweet smelling flowers surrounded the imposing rustic door. Two grotesque Gargoyles guarded the entrance, their statue eyes watching Billy. The lingering brook swirled around the back of the house, with its sweet delicate waters seeping its way through the grass. The owl had followed her too and was now chorusing his and Billy’s arrival from the thatched roof top.

A flickering orange glow fell straight from the trestles window as Billy edged nearer the house. The mass of trees began to stoop as if beckoning her towards the slightly ajar front door. A sudden gust of wind opened it further inviting her in. She gingerly walked inside, and then stopped to survey her surroundings. To the left was a large room running through the house. Dancing flames from the fireplace toyed with her eyes as she walked closer to the warmth. Wood pigeons bubbled their delight in the loft above at their guest’s arrival. The main door creaked shut causing her to withdraw into the seclusion of the dark influence surrounding her.

A mass of thick, silky grey cobwebs spiralled all around. Its occupants seeking refuge back into the small nooks and crannies of the dilapidated walls. More exotic flying rodents appeared and swooped swiftly up to hang from the oak beam above Billy’s head. Rats and field mice scampered across the wooden floors. Scurrying to seek solace in the broken furniture and floorboards.

Then suddenly a quivering lip lightly brushed her neck. Billy wasn’t startled this time, her breathing remained calm, her aura remained serene. More kisses with delicacy were placed on random spots of her neck and shoulders. Her pretty face slackened for a moment as she closed her eyes. Fingers grazed across her hips and then moved slowly upwards past her stomach and towards her chest. A quiet moan seeped from her at the silent sensual touch she was receiving.

The dominant apparition slowly began to undress Billy, her clothes drifting to the floor as the fire in the hearth blossomed into an inferno of wickedness and sorcery. A hand enveloped her right breast and her soft brown rose peaked upwards with desire. Her cavern became damp as her awakened bosom became excited. Billy was laid gently down onto an old withered rug on the wooden floor. The spectre languished on top of her, as his hands roamed freely across her glistening body.

This prudish in life woman, glowed warmly in approval of the carnal act she was embarking on. The musky odour of her arousal pervaded across the room. Her walnut eyes twinkled through the shadows hovering. Her porcelain face became suffused in pleasure as fingers slid down her Venus mound and floated up her folds into her palpitating lips. Warm fluids began percolating from her as the pistoning of the spectre’s fingers went deeper. Billy’s loins melted in a fusion of fire and brimstone.

Her staccato breathing continued as the spectre spread the warm flowing liquid around her erect pulsating bud. Moans emulated from her mouth and danced off walls within the room as multiple sensations erupted inside her. She became light headed as she tried to regain her breath. Then she whimpered slightly as the spectre’s lips claimed hers. He sucked her tongue into his mouth
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thinksexy
Posted: 2009/4/2 14:14  Updated: 2009/4/2 14:14
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 Hey Beautiful!
I'm re reading cuz your work is soooo freakin amazing! Love ya and miss you girl...More than you know...
peachgurl221
Posted: 2008/2/17 16:42  Updated: 2008/2/17 16:42
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 WOW
I have to agree with think the way you describe and detail your storys are amazing!! LOVED IT.
red rose
Posted: 2007/12/12 13:33  Updated: 2007/12/12 13:33
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 Shiena...
Shiena....I guess it depends on a persons perception as to what Erotica really is....I feel anyone can write hot stories or porno type stories...but after a while of writing the same ole thing using the same old words it gets boring...maybe you should read some of my other more down to earth stories... I just wanted a change of direction from the norm and wanted to stretch my imagination with this one. But like you say each to their own. Thank you for taking the time to read it anyway.
Rogerhobart
Posted: 2007/12/12 12:13  Updated: 2007/12/12 12:13
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 Excellent
I had to take a moment ..........
shiena
Posted: 2007/12/5 13:23  Updated: 2007/12/5 13:23
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/13
From: London
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 A Wicked Temptation
That is a truly bewitching story, written with great sensitivity, and skill. But is it erotic? That is always a matter for each reader, of course, but I would be surprised if many were sexually aroused by it. This applies to many of the highly rated stories, in my opinion. The site suggests that it provides stories for the sexual intellectual. It seems that the preponderance of taste in those who vote is towards the intellectual rather than the sexual. Nothing wrong with that of course. But those who wish to produce reasonably written, but arousing stories, may well have to look elsewhere for recognition.
little one
Posted: 2007/11/11 20:02  Updated: 2007/11/11 20:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/29
From: Texas
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 Congrats
I really enjoyed this story. Interesting concept that makes you think. I really liked it. Thanks for a great read!
Dapper Dan
Posted: 2007/11/8 8:31  Updated: 2007/11/8 8:31
Flirt
Joined: 2007/6/14
From: midwest, USA
Posts: 40
 Congrats...
on winning second place in the Halloween contest. DD.
angelique
Posted: 2007/10/30 20:27  Updated: 2007/10/30 20:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/10
From: in my bliss
Posts: 163
 Damn! Take me THERE, lover!
"She reaches a place of paradise, never felt before, sending her into a quivering trance. Her aura is like a rainbow, changing colours as she changes dimensions." I want to know love like this, be shaken to my core like this. MMM! soo sexy! Congrats! :)
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/30 17:21  Updated: 2007/10/30 17:21
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 Red Rose,
Congratulations, I knew this story was something special. :)
silentheart
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:32  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:32
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Pittsburgh, Pa
Posts: 100
 Red rose
as a writer I loted this story. very well thought out and told. your attention to detail amazing, as a wiccan I loved the refrences to wicca. as a contstant i'm very happy uou got 2nd prize , this deserves 1st.
red rose
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:10  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:10
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 Thankyou...from the bottom of my heart...x
WOW... I'm completely overwhelmed.. at the response this story got.. I was nervous as hell when I submitted it, as it was a change in style and direction of my writing, but I wanted to stretch my self, and move towards this way of writing....I've been blown away by peoples messages and votes.... SO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR VOTING AND POSTING SUCH KIND COMMENTS ON THIS STORY.....and I'm glad you all liked it.... Health, Wealth & Happiness to you all.. .Rose x
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/30 11:33  Updated: 2007/10/30 11:33
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 Well done!!
I knew this story was a winner when i read it!! Much deserved Red Rose....congratulations hun...x
Miss Bee
Posted: 2007/10/30 9:35  Updated: 2007/10/30 9:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/22
From: Buzzing about...here, there and everywhere
Posts: 878
 A well-deserved silver medal!
Rose, Really enjoyed the fluidity of your writing. Beautifully described, truly erotic. Well done!! Bee x
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/29 12:36  Updated: 2007/10/29 12:36
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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 Excellent...
Absolutely loved it!! It doesnt get much better than this!! Good luck in the contest, because this is most definately deserving of a win!!
Montana Norman
Posted: 2007/10/27 13:57  Updated: 2007/10/27 14:28
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: Dallas Texas
Posts: 862
 Oh yesssssssss.......
That was good! I was confused as why she was there at that spot and not fearing for her safety, but then you pulled it all together... BEAUTIFULLY!!! Just a quick note; I used to know a girl who loved to masturbate in graveyards... I thought that was where you were going... I was pleasantly surprised otherwise! The car wreck and mangled body. Excellent!!! And the best yet. She's given the choice and in my opinion, she chose wisely. Let's run with the scenario that there is the ability to find passion and love in the after world. Something to really think about. I can wrap my head around that concept. Anyway, I loved it! Great Job... Hope you win... Montana
Wabbit
Posted: 2007/10/25 19:48  Updated: 2007/10/25 19:48
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Posts: 1098
 My My.....
Dear Red... what a fine story you spin for us! You fan our fires with words of desire! And I for one sing you praise of thanks! Kisses Chicky
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/10/25 7:47  Updated: 2007/10/25 7:47
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 so wonderfully done
far troo much for my limited vocabulary to properly praise
erewon
Posted: 2007/10/25 3:39  Updated: 2007/10/25 3:39
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/7/18
From: New Zealand
Posts: 56
 mental images
thanks for a fantastic story Red, felt like I was walking with you, great build up, passion and feeling, you have a way with words. xx Erewon
cindy
Posted: 2007/10/24 9:40  Updated: 2007/10/24 9:40
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/30
From: down the county...
Posts: 1541
 Wow
This story was amaising! I loved how you sweetly chose to write it. I was not expecting the crash at all. Loved it, loved it...loved it!
TeresaDean
Posted: 2007/10/24 9:29  Updated: 2007/10/24 9:29
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 To Rose!
I love the sweet sense of innocence with the words you chose to describe sexual pleasures. Not only was the story intriguing and seductive it certainly made my mind wander into a world one can only dream of experiencing. LOVED IT! I want to read more of your tantalizing teasing way you have with words!
freddyair
Posted: 2007/10/24 7:57  Updated: 2007/10/24 7:57
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From: Near Boston
Posts: 3146
 Ah, Red Rose...
...such a fine awakening for me this morning. Your words were eerie, sexy, and erotic. Nice story and great images. I hope I don't intentionally plow into a tree on the way to work. ;) =f=
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/23 22:35  Updated: 2007/10/23 22:45
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 Red Rose,
I love way you write details. And the words you came up with to describe the lusty goings on came across so soft and gentle, like a soft rain on a hot day. You spoke of learning from reading my work, I think this time it has worked the other way around. :)