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  A Wicked Temptation (4/5)  

99 votes
Author: red rose  Published: 10/23/2007  story views: 19618
 


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pitiful and lonely existence. A life bereft of any love, lacking of any lust. A passionless an isolated life, filled with emptiness. Apart from a few invites to parties, that filled her with hope but always left her with despair. She lived in a reclusive world.

Then her mind filled with the memory of her lovemaking with the spectre stood before her. Her thirst for desire had been quenched, her need for love had been met, her lust aroused instantly. She had felt more alive then, than she had ever done. Feelings and sensations never felt before had been drawn from her spirit. Thoughts and emotions lain dead deep inside rose forth from the ashes.

“I will love and look after you always,” he whispered. “The afterlife is so much more than you ever thought possible. I will awaken your desires and feed them endless passions.”

Billy looked at her broken body laid stricken on the damp gravel and in an instance had made her mind up.

“I want to be with you,” she cried. “Let’s go, I have no doubts.”

The Medic stood up, his face disgruntled. “She’s gone, we can’t do anything more.”

“Probably is for the best.” The other medic frowned. “Every bone in her body seemed broken, her back definitely was.” He placed a blanket over her face.

A chilling wind blew autumn leaves across the medic’s path as he went to fetch a body bag from the Ambulance. He could have sworn he heard cackling coming from the woodlands. He shook his head and reprimanded himself for being so silly as to think such a thing. Billy took one last look at her crumpled body, and then turned to the Spectre. Smiling she took his hand in hers, and in that moment, two lost tortured souls forged into one bright, peaceful soul.

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Wild doves start to coo from the wispy branches of the Elm tree outside the rustic retreat of Billy’s new home. Her spirit renewed, she wraps her silky legs around the phantom's. Dawn begins to break in the woodlands, a signal to his feathery friends to sing their welcome to his hearts desire. She ruffles his ear with her fingertips, and then traces his outline down to his own unique woodland. His whole being tremors, as she takes hold of his log, now aching with desire. She clamps her mouth down and swallows him. A crushing bliss fills him as she begins to devour his hardness.

Such a passionate woman, engulfed in complete joy only adding to his high state of intoxicating arousal. Her eyes widen with the wickedness that has invaded her, as she continues to bring him ever closer to the brink of sexual madness. Ever teasingly she flicks her tongue around his tip, backwards and forwards, up and down. Swallowing any traces of his arousal as soon it appears.

Billy toys with his sac with her hands, gently manipulating him into an explosive orgasm. Sliding her wet, delicate tongue up his stem, and then down again to his base. Her teeth would touch his raw skin sometimes and she would quiver with pleasure. His torture begins to reach a peak as she sucks
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thinksexy
Posted: 2009/4/2 14:14  Updated: 2009/4/2 14:14
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 Hey Beautiful!
I'm re reading cuz your work is soooo freakin amazing! Love ya and miss you girl...More than you know...
peachgurl221
Posted: 2008/2/17 16:42  Updated: 2008/2/17 16:42
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 WOW
I have to agree with think the way you describe and detail your storys are amazing!! LOVED IT.
red rose
Posted: 2007/12/12 13:33  Updated: 2007/12/12 13:33
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 Shiena...
Shiena....I guess it depends on a persons perception as to what Erotica really is....I feel anyone can write hot stories or porno type stories...but after a while of writing the same ole thing using the same old words it gets boring...maybe you should read some of my other more down to earth stories... I just wanted a change of direction from the norm and wanted to stretch my imagination with this one. But like you say each to their own. Thank you for taking the time to read it anyway.
Rogerhobart
Posted: 2007/12/12 12:13  Updated: 2007/12/12 12:13
Virgin
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 Excellent
I had to take a moment ..........
shiena
Posted: 2007/12/5 13:23  Updated: 2007/12/5 13:23
Virgin
Joined: 2007/2/13
From: London
Posts: 8
 A Wicked Temptation
That is a truly bewitching story, written with great sensitivity, and skill. But is it erotic? That is always a matter for each reader, of course, but I would be surprised if many were sexually aroused by it. This applies to many of the highly rated stories, in my opinion. The site suggests that it provides stories for the sexual intellectual. It seems that the preponderance of taste in those who vote is towards the intellectual rather than the sexual. Nothing wrong with that of course. But those who wish to produce reasonably written, but arousing stories, may well have to look elsewhere for recognition.
little one
Posted: 2007/11/11 20:02  Updated: 2007/11/11 20:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: Texas
Posts: 156
 Congrats
I really enjoyed this story. Interesting concept that makes you think. I really liked it. Thanks for a great read!
Dapper Dan
Posted: 2007/11/8 8:31  Updated: 2007/11/8 8:31
Flirt
Joined: 2007/6/14
From: midwest, USA
Posts: 40
 Congrats...
on winning second place in the Halloween contest. DD.
angelique
Posted: 2007/10/30 20:27  Updated: 2007/10/30 20:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/2/10
From: in my bliss
Posts: 163
 Damn! Take me THERE, lover!
"She reaches a place of paradise, never felt before, sending her into a quivering trance. Her aura is like a rainbow, changing colours as she changes dimensions." I want to know love like this, be shaken to my core like this. MMM! soo sexy! Congrats! :)
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/30 17:21  Updated: 2007/10/30 17:21
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 Red Rose,
Congratulations, I knew this story was something special. :)
silentheart
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:32  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:32
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/5/8
From: Pittsburgh, Pa
Posts: 100
 Red rose
as a writer I loted this story. very well thought out and told. your attention to detail amazing, as a wiccan I loved the refrences to wicca. as a contstant i'm very happy uou got 2nd prize , this deserves 1st.
red rose
Posted: 2007/10/30 14:10  Updated: 2007/10/30 14:10
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 Thankyou...from the bottom of my heart...x
WOW... I'm completely overwhelmed.. at the response this story got.. I was nervous as hell when I submitted it, as it was a change in style and direction of my writing, but I wanted to stretch my self, and move towards this way of writing....I've been blown away by peoples messages and votes.... SO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR VOTING AND POSTING SUCH KIND COMMENTS ON THIS STORY.....and I'm glad you all liked it.... Health, Wealth & Happiness to you all.. .Rose x
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/30 11:33  Updated: 2007/10/30 11:33
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 Well done!!
I knew this story was a winner when i read it!! Much deserved Red Rose....congratulations hun...x
Miss Bee
Posted: 2007/10/30 9:35  Updated: 2007/10/30 9:35
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/22
From: Buzzing about...here, there and everywhere
Posts: 878
 A well-deserved silver medal!
Rose, Really enjoyed the fluidity of your writing. Beautifully described, truly erotic. Well done!! Bee x
Precious Pet
Posted: 2007/10/29 12:36  Updated: 2007/10/29 12:36
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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 Excellent...
Absolutely loved it!! It doesnt get much better than this!! Good luck in the contest, because this is most definately deserving of a win!!
Montana Norman
Posted: 2007/10/27 13:57  Updated: 2007/10/27 14:28
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: Dallas Texas
Posts: 862
 Oh yesssssssss.......
That was good! I was confused as why she was there at that spot and not fearing for her safety, but then you pulled it all together... BEAUTIFULLY!!! Just a quick note; I used to know a girl who loved to masturbate in graveyards... I thought that was where you were going... I was pleasantly surprised otherwise! The car wreck and mangled body. Excellent!!! And the best yet. She's given the choice and in my opinion, she chose wisely. Let's run with the scenario that there is the ability to find passion and love in the after world. Something to really think about. I can wrap my head around that concept. Anyway, I loved it! Great Job... Hope you win... Montana
Wabbit
Posted: 2007/10/25 19:48  Updated: 2007/10/25 19:48
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: In the shadows
Posts: 1098
 My My.....
Dear Red... what a fine story you spin for us! You fan our fires with words of desire! And I for one sing you praise of thanks! Kisses Chicky
Pensuwana
Posted: 2007/10/25 7:47  Updated: 2007/10/25 7:47
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
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 so wonderfully done
far troo much for my limited vocabulary to properly praise
erewon
Posted: 2007/10/25 3:39  Updated: 2007/10/25 3:39
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/7/18
From: New Zealand
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 mental images
thanks for a fantastic story Red, felt like I was walking with you, great build up, passion and feeling, you have a way with words. xx Erewon
cindy
Posted: 2007/10/24 9:40  Updated: 2007/10/24 9:40
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/30
From: down the county...
Posts: 1541
 Wow
This story was amaising! I loved how you sweetly chose to write it. I was not expecting the crash at all. Loved it, loved it...loved it!
TeresaDean
Posted: 2007/10/24 9:29  Updated: 2007/10/24 9:29
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 To Rose!
I love the sweet sense of innocence with the words you chose to describe sexual pleasures. Not only was the story intriguing and seductive it certainly made my mind wander into a world one can only dream of experiencing. LOVED IT! I want to read more of your tantalizing teasing way you have with words!
freddyair
Posted: 2007/10/24 7:57  Updated: 2007/10/24 7:57
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Joined: 2007/2/26
From: Near Boston
Posts: 3146
 Ah, Red Rose...
...such a fine awakening for me this morning. Your words were eerie, sexy, and erotic. Nice story and great images. I hope I don't intentionally plow into a tree on the way to work. ;) =f=
thinksexy
Posted: 2007/10/23 22:35  Updated: 2007/10/23 22:45
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 Red Rose,
I love way you write details. And the words you came up with to describe the lusty goings on came across so soft and gentle, like a soft rain on a hot day. You spoke of learning from reading my work, I think this time it has worked the other way around. :)