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Straight: Fantasy/Demon/Gothic:
  Desire of The White Wolf (1/4)  

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Author: justboycrazy45  Published: 5/5/2009  story views: 2914
 


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Leslie Amberton closed up her New Orleans-based plus-size lingerie store, Lush Pleasure, for the night. She had gone through a very tough day. Her self-centered, narcissistic boyfriend Brad had a fight while at work and then dumped her by way of a text message on her cell phone, saying she was bad for his up-and-coming celebrity image. Brad's an aspiring actor/model trying to get himself discovered. She knew he was wrong for her, because he had been trying to change her appearance and all that. He wanted her to be super skinny, trying to get her on every diet imaginable, etc. She was so mad at him, called him a selfish, egotistical douchebag. She never wanted to compromise herself for anyone.

Even her friends and family wanted her to dump him. He was no good for her for every reason. That night, she decided to go see her family in Tulane. Though she is 25 and works and lives in New Orleans on her own, Tulane is where she calls home. She called her mom and dad to let them know she was coming to see them before she went into her silver Cadillac CTS. She put on her London Fog off-white jacket just in case it rains.  As she drove past city limits, the engine of her car then broke down in the middle of the road and it started raining outside. She got out of her car, took out her cell phone from her purse, and called her parents to let her know about her car breaking down. While talking to them, an average brown wolf slowly crept on her, deeply growling, behind her. She closed her phone, put it in her pants pocket, and began fighting off the wolf. She screamed as she fought him off. He scratched the side of her stomach with one of his claws. Suddenly, a large white wolf came to her defense and attacked the brown wolf. The brown wolf ran away in fear. The white wolf came to Leslie's aide as he softly licked her face. She woke up and saw the white wolf. She then thanked him by petting him. The white wolf then changed into a human. He was tall as in 6'2 with blonde hair and chocolate brown eyes.

"Miss, are you alright?" the handsome stranger asked.

"I'm a little shaken but I'm fine," Leslie said to him.

He noticed the scratch on the side of her stomach. He got out the first aid kit from her car and bandaged her wound.

"Thank you for your help," Leslie said.

"You're welcome. Can I take you home?" he asked.

"Well, my car's broken down and I was on my way to my parents' house in Tulane," Leslie replied to him.

"'I'll contact OnStar in your car and also call a mechanic to get your car fixed," he said.

The stranger went into her car and contacted OnStar. After that, he called a mechanic on his cell phone.

"Where's your car?"

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MalGal
Posted: 2009/5/5 22:17  Updated: 2009/5/5 22:17
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 Two suggestions
Great story, but my only suggestions would be to work on your dialougue and how it works together between the two characters, and then you should also work on your product placement, you keep adding brand names, and that takes away from the story.
8PUSSIES
Posted: 2009/5/5 20:48  Updated: 2009/5/5 20:48
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 Howling good story--
I enjoyed reading this imaginative, well written story. Your descriptive talents put me in the middle of your words and I felt the passion of your characters. Thanks for writing another great tale. ---------#8
Pensuwana
Posted: 2009/5/5 14:00  Updated: 2009/5/5 14:00
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 this is neat
the wolf part kinda adds ot the excitement, good writing