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| thisisablast |
Posted: 2009/9/26 21:08 Updated: 2009/9/26 21:08 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/9/26 From: Posts: 19 |
 Hot story... This was a well written, hot story... Keep up the good work.
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| BigFlirt68 |
Posted: 2009/7/21 4:56 Updated: 2009/7/21 4:56 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/6/21 From: California Posts: 10 |
Nice Very intense story, I enjoyed it very much, now thats a birthday to remember.
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| Sir M |
Posted: 2009/7/16 17:01 Updated: 2009/7/16 17:01 |
Flirt  Joined: 2009/3/24 From: North of the border Posts: 34 |
hot happy birthday indeed! Great story. Would love my gf to give me a present like
that! No harm in asking i suppose........
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| Nasty Karl |
Posted: 2009/1/2 1:12 Updated: 2009/1/2 1:12 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/12/7 From: Posts: 142 |
More Gome back we need Ladies who have hot and NASTY minds.
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| jo babe |
Posted: 2008/9/7 20:05 Updated: 2008/9/7 20:05 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/8/26 From: Posts: 1 |
hotttttttttttttttttttt happy birthday,menny more and sooooooooo sexy story..love jo babe
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| madmaxx |
Posted: 2008/8/16 4:20 Updated: 2008/8/16 4:20 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/4/22 From: United States Posts: 14 |
What a gift! Without a doubt, this is incredibly hot stuff, and you have a fantastic way with
words. Keep up the work! This birthday is something almost magical!
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| TheAcquaintance |
Posted: 2008/6/21 14:46 Updated: 2008/6/21 14:46 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/6/21 From: Posts: 13 |
Very nice I was interested because I just submitted my first story..waiting for it to be
published. Mine was a similar story line but with another man involved. Really
enjoyed your writing! Please check out my story when you have a chance. I would
love to hear what you think.
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| Jezzabel |
Posted: 2008/5/27 14:03 Updated: 2008/5/27 14:03 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/4/18 From: Posts: 8 |
Happy Birthday that was so hot and sexy. keep writting. i would love to have a threesome. i
love your detail
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| imail |
Posted: 2007/12/1 22:13 Updated: 2007/12/1 22:13 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/12/1 From: Posts: 3 |
Re: Birthday treat Good story ... I wish i could get this gift on my birthday.
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| ghostwords |
Posted: 2007/8/17 6:22 Updated: 2007/8/17 6:22 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/8/8 From: Posts: 234 |
Birthday treat You might have included an explanation as to how you know all that happened when
you weren't around (maybe he told you afterwards), or you could switch to his
p.o.v.; there's also no hint at where Jackie came from (is she a friend or a
hooker?); finally, he didn't even get to take a spin with Jackie, which seems
a little unfair.
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| ashton |
Posted: 2007/3/23 13:39 Updated: 2007/3/23 13:39 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/3/23 From: Posts: 1 |
keep the detail cuming you are a great writer and I love the detail it was a very pulsating story
keep it up
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| lurch1022 |
Posted: 2007/1/30 22:52 Updated: 2007/1/30 22:53 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/12/28 From: Posts: 10 |
Happy Birthday I agree Caprihorn1, it is a hot story and I want the same every special day
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| caprihorn1 |
Posted: 2007/1/26 13:58 Updated: 2007/1/26 13:58 |
Flirt Joined: 2006/10/31 From: Midwest Posts: 35 |
A Birthday To Remember Very Sexy and Hott!!! I know what to ask for on my birthday now!
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| Skipper1974 |
Posted: 2007/1/24 10:11 Updated: 2007/1/24 10:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/2/12 From: San Diego, CA Posts: 167 |
more thought So, Candy,
I am seriously thinking we should get together and be each others' muse...
We have an experience and we tell it from each of our points of view...
I really liked this story!
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