Oh wow, haha. It's people like you who give my fiance' ideas XD. Absolutely fantastic story! It almost had me checking under my own desk, haha! <3

Excellent job! Keep up the good work.

Fantastic story, sounds like something I would want to try out.

Amazing story, very well written. You have a great imagination. Hope there is a part 2 (your revenge).

Always hated the vile open plan things I always get, but after reading this , I want an office. Lush, this got a "hot" from me, and not many stories get that. At 12 pages it was long, but it was worth all 12 of them. I'd say a page-turner but yo u don't turn; a real "next clicker?" You've nicely built up the story, gradually building the heat as the tease goes on. I like the comical side to it too, which adds some humanity to the two characters.

i agree with you a little extra effort always helps

lush darlin,what can i say after reading that....well i could say you owe me the price of another box of kleanex,took nearly all i had to clean my cu m up LOL....that really was superb sweetie....as alwaysxxxxx

What a cute, sexy, funny story. And did I say it was hot? 'Cause it reall y was sizzling!

TOTALLY LUSCIOUS!! Sex as it should be: exciting and fun! Keep on going with this kind of stuff.

I wouldn't do a critique it wound draw lightning and sparks-- no not me. I would however not be using a white thong as a surrender flag and a pare of under ware for a crown as I speared around the window jam. Speaking of jam, I'd know where the blackberry jam was in the kitchen cabinet and brought it along just as a sweeter. I'd know that peanut butter with out jam would stick to the roof of your mouth every time. I don't get this guy not knowing--What's peanut butter with out jam [blackberry jam no less than the best] I'd know that and I'd treasure that white thong for ever; nope I wouldn't be a clown those shorts he was using for a crown must have been polka-dot shorts on his head by the looks of that scene. No way, I'd have a smile a mile wide as I screwed the lid down on the empty jar of jam and I'd lick my lips as I placed a new jar of that wonderful sweet goodness... virgin unopened blackberry jam jar on the half opened window jam and grin as I said "Just a little sweetness to remember us by. You get the peanut butter for next time." I'll bring the spoon. Well, be sure you get your revenge on that guy...2luscious. I'll be waiting for you just under the desk with a clean dish and spoon. :0) And just encase you forget or can't contain yourself I'll bring a virgin jar of blackberry jam just to make sure you don't forget about our sweetness. Great story 2luscious, I'll be waiting for your revenge on that clown. I love to be loved. I won't be waving any white flag when I leave. Those office people of yours will have their noses and eyes on all that work you gave them and they won't even notice us walk right past them when I leave with you on my arm, hand in had. Blackberry Jam is not for the faint of heart.

Pretty good!!! He came there to do what he wanted and left her wanting more. Also, taking a souvenoir from the activity.

Lush dear, that was awesome. The writing and imagery are fantastic. The story was great. My emotions were right in step with the story. Focused, shock, playful, nervous, horny, enraged, engulfed. Wow. The power of the foreplay, the submission to the lust, the raging sex...goodness. Explosive. Great story!!!!!!

Sorbus, do you use a compass, dear?

Wow, Sorbus! You make me glad that I changed the scene of him trying to strangle her with his underwear to him wearing it on his head instead. -- I am incredulous!

The Writing Excellent. The Premise I found Disturbing. This is not A Straight Couple. This is not Vanilla This is Full Tilt BDSM Embarrasment.. Terror.... Submission.... This is Heavy Duty Gal. This Guy is A Real Trickster, and Control Freak: She is Classisc Submissive. He invades Her Works Space, and Using Fear of Discovery, to hold her in thrall, Proceeds to bend her to His Will. Which being a Classic Submissive, Excites Her Further into consenting to her own dimishment and continuing degradation Comment Move to BDSM it`s True Home Well Done Lush A Class Act Sorbus Seal of Approval SSOA

Great story very entertaining well written and fun! Cant wait for the second part - her revenge!! One of your best lush!!! Well done!

Lush, I'm so glad you finally got this one posted. I loved it! You write with such vivid detail and imagery. What a delightful read that's hot and funny and sexy and charming at the same time. You're an awesome writer, keep it up!

dear sweet lushy. a wonderful ,sexy funny story,i could picture you at your desk with you know who. i am real glad you didnt shout peanut butter. is there a part 2,please?

This has been a long time cumming , hot stuff honey. I loved it, gotta save it to my favs file

i loved the teasing and humor

Excellent job-this story had it all. It was a pleasure to read. The humor just added to its realism.

id hide under your desk anytime... actually i dont normally have the patience for any story over 3 pages... but i really enjoyed that one..every word and image

Hon your an amazing writer with an amazing talent for getting everyone hot under the collar (aswell as other places) That was fantastic

Now where was it you work and are there any job openings?

I forgot how talented a writer you were. Thanks for the imagery.

Man! That was so hot. Good job!