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Straight: Husband and Wife:
  First time: last time (4/18)  

23 votes
Author: amalovanotarita  Published: 8/25/2008  story views: 7782
 


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suddenly felt protective towards her, responsible for her. She could have been the daughter we longed for but could never have. I couldn’t just leave her there. She was breathing like a frightened captured animal and I waited in silence till I felt her heartbeat begin to settle. ‘I’m going for a coffee, bite to eat… fancy anything? Just a bit of company? There was no reaction for a while. As I thought about repeating it, she nodded, even smiled a little.

 
‘I…’
 

Another sob shook her, interrupted her. Despite the nod, I was sure it would be a no, but I had to offer.

 

‘Er… yes. I’d like that.’ She looked down at herself, then back up at my surprised smile and was suddenly brighter, optimistic, transformed. ‘Not like this! I’ll nip and get some clothes on. Get the coffees in – I’ll be two minutes.’

 
 
III
 

I sat there, cup in hand, elbows on the table, staring forwards at nothing in particular. Quite a few of the staff were passing through here too, recharging, refuelling, all looking tired, washed-out. She wasn’t coming. I swallowed the bitter dregs and prepared to leave. A stunningly beautiful young woman strode confidently in through the swinging doors – wavy, almost curly black hair, tight blue jeans, her white cropped tube top accentuating her golden tan. The scanty top displayed a fair amount of her lovely curved belly and only semi-hid a pair of deliciously pert breasts. Her face was symmetrical, tanned, lightly freckled and her eyes were like dark honey. She headed towards me, smiling with brilliant white teeth.

 
‘Sorry I took so long!’
 

The bedlam of carnal thoughts that crowded my head with her entrance dispersed and my instant physical reaction to her appearance started to deflate as I realised who she was. I stood and beckoned her to sit.

 

‘Wow! It’s you. Scrub up well, don’t you!’ and we both laughed at the hospital joke. Was this really the girl from the stairwell? ‘You look amazing. I can’t believe you… you’re… I can’t believe…’

 
‘That I’m dying?’
 

‘No. Well, yes… No. I can’t believe it’s you. You look so much older… with your clothes on,’ and I pulled a fake embarrassed sort of face and she smiled again. I quickly queued for fresh coffees then sat down opposite her at the small, round, fake-pine table. We looked appraisingly at each other.

 

‘Cheeky! So much older? I’m nineteen… well, in two weeks.’ Then she bit her lip, looked down into the steaming cup and froze. She looked in pain. I rested my hand on her bare arm, hopefully transmitting both my concern and my patience in this one touch. We were silent for two or three minutes, then she pinched the bridge of her perfect nose and spoke as if she’d just remembered something. ‘Regina!’ She looked up quickly, her smile rebuilt, hand held out over the tabletop.

 

‘Sorry? Oh… sorry. I’m Adam.’ I shook her hand. It was very much alive. I surprised myself by raising it to my lips and kissing its smooth, vibrant skin.

 

‘You are a gentleman, Adam.’ And she gently pulled my hand to her mouth too and pecked the back of it with her very soft, succulent lips, her eyes laughing all the while. ‘Thanks for taking the time back

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amalovanotarita
Posted: 2008/9/8 12:14  Updated: 2008/9/8 12:14
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 Re: wow.
Hi Sorry you've been having a bad time. I'm so glad you have been able to draw some cheer from my story. Hope things soon start to look a lot brighter. Take care Ama
firey_lover
Posted: 2008/9/7 1:37  Updated: 2008/9/7 1:37
Bookworm
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From: California
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 wow.
i don't have anything i can say that everyone else hasn't said already. I read your story three times before I finally got my fill of it and began writing this comment. Completely and totally amazing. I can't even believe it. It made me cry. It's been a very emotional time for me as it is, and that just completely got to me. Utterly amazing, and what an unexpected twist. Although I have to say...I'm a little sad now, because i'm still alone and I didn't even get that much of a chance to say goodbye. Only thoughts. Thank you very very much for such a beautiful, sexy, emotional, and just amazing story. I believe that you have a good chance at story of the year, and I hope you get it. I've never read a story quite like yours. And I think you deserve all the praise you can get.
EEZMA
Posted: 2008/9/6 3:36  Updated: 2008/9/6 3:36
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 beautiful
this story was beautiful. so sad...
sweetsub
Posted: 2008/9/5 8:46  Updated: 2008/9/5 8:46
Virgin
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 Gorgeous
Absolutely Gorgeous, darlin'. I want more from you!
oxfordrhythm
Posted: 2008/9/3 14:01  Updated: 2008/9/3 14:01
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 wow
what a moving story, and beautifully written! look forward to reading more of you. :-)
amalovanotarita
Posted: 2008/9/2 4:53  Updated: 2008/9/2 4:53
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 Re: Beautiful....
Thanks for taking the time to read and for the very kind words x
Miles_Long
Posted: 2008/8/29 16:18  Updated: 2008/8/29 16:18
Bookworm
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From: The back seat
Posts: 71
 Fantastic story
I really enjoyed reading this one. Very well written. I could almost see these people, just as if I were watching a movie.
Fanny Hill
Posted: 2008/8/27 15:17  Updated: 2008/8/27 15:18
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 You did it again
with another outstanding story. Wham-bam-thankyou-ma'am can be fun at times but mostly one does like a little more substance and you definitely provide that. You have a gift and I hope to see more of it. FH
Tentativeness
Posted: 2008/8/27 1:05  Updated: 2008/8/28 7:39
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From: In your hottest dreams(:
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 Well, well, well...
it looks like someone's on a roll! I adore your style of writing and your somewhat unconventional plots. It's been a while since I've hated someone as much as I hated the protagonist, but you redeemed him in the end, so(: It's a real talent that you have in the way you twist your endings. It made me feel like I was watching one of those intense thrillers(yes, I'm wondering why, too). But you've got the elusive 'Blazing' rating from me, so you're definitely someone I'd look out for! Lillian.
Talie
Posted: 2008/8/26 19:55  Updated: 2008/8/26 19:55
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 Rollercoaster
This took me through a roller coaster of emotions. Made me love and hate the characters then love them all again by the end...
LusciousLois
Posted: 2008/8/26 19:39  Updated: 2008/8/26 19:39
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 Amazing
I was so drawn into the characters and their emotions. I couldn't stop myself from reading, definitely "Story of the Week" =)
gentletides
Posted: 2008/8/26 17:07  Updated: 2008/8/26 17:07
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 wow
i loved this story, i was a bit unsure reading the first few pages, thought it was just going to be some random one night stand but it was so much more, i could never have guessed that twist. You are very talented and totally deserve story of the week. I've never been so moved by an erotic story before. Well done xxx
Anonymous
Posted: 2008/8/25 19:45  Updated: 2008/8/25 19:45
 Very Beautiful
A very beautiful touching story. So well deserving of Story of the Week. Congratualtion. When I first saw 19 pages I was a little hesitant to begin reading but once I started I could not stop until the last word was read (and last tear shed). Thank you for a wonderful well written contribution. I hope others will give this a read. Great job!!! -DL
stillpure
Posted: 2008/8/25 13:42  Updated: 2008/8/25 13:42
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From: NY
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 Awww
That was sad, different, and sweet. Almost bittersweet.
peachiebaby
Posted: 2008/8/25 10:23  Updated: 2008/8/25 10:23
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 Beautiful....
That was a very beautifull and moving story, I couldn't take my eyes off the pages! Very sweet and oh so heartbreaking. I loved the ending, it was so unexpected and made everything fall into place. Ty for sharing. Peachie