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| faithfulsinger |
Posted: 2009/8/18 22:31 Updated: 2009/8/18 22:31 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/4/30 From: Posts: 1 |
 Gratitude Thank you all for your compliments :-)
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| Tinkerbell |
Posted: 2009/6/27 16:45 Updated: 2009/6/27 16:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/7/26 From: At a Risqué Place Posts: 1702 |
Thoroughly enjoyable read I loved this - reading both perspectives was refreshing and didn't disturb the
flow of the story at all - passionate, emotive, descriptive, a story well written.
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| BIGFluffy09 |
Posted: 2009/6/27 1:43 Updated: 2009/6/27 1:43 |
Up and Comer  Joined: 2007/8/21 From: Posts: 55 |
amazing beautiful the passion the emotion all of it was there in full color. kudos to
the extreme.
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| Judyaussiegirl |
Posted: 2009/6/27 1:41 Updated: 2009/6/27 1:41 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2008/12/3 From: Victoria, Australia Posts: 81 |
love the passion loved the way you switched etween the characters, presenting both points of view
... Now if you could guarentee every night of being married was like that, then
maybe I could be persuaded ;-)
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/26 20:13 Updated: 2009/6/26 20:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7238 |
Beautifully written-- You handled the transition between the two voices perfectly. Your story was well
imagined and nicely paced. Your descriptions of the action were riveting and
sizzling. Excellent piece of writing. I hope to see more! -----8
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