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She was folding the laundry. It was a hot Friday afternoon. A very special day... As she came to a particular article of clothing, she smiled faintly, holding it close to her chest, and closed her eyes at the memory... Her husband's blue pressed shirt... He had worn it that day of their first time... She remembered trying to convince herself that she would never be lucky enough to be with him, and yet here she was today, married to the man she had tried to convince herself she'd never get to be with... Every day she had thought about him... had even dreamed of him in the shirt she was holding close to her beating heart. Even as she simply thought about that day, she felt her pussy flush with moisture... Everything after that had been so great. Their relationship had been forbidden, but they didn't care. They broke the rules, and even got married... The scene of their first time played over and over in her head... It had been a hot day, and the tension had risen as they had stared at each other from across that room. She hadn't worn panties that day because it was just so humid. She remembered exactly what he had said to her... exactly how he came... exactly how they came to be...
At the sound of the front door opening and closing, she dropped the shirt and ran out of the bedroom to greet her husband with a long, excited kiss. "Well, hello to you too, baby!" he said grinning. He wasn't sure what she was so happy about, but was glad that she was so ecstatic to see him. He missed his hot little wife and thought about her all day at work. It had been another hot June day. It was the anniversary of their first time. Ah, he remembered the day. It had been another blazing June day as well... Maybe that was why she was in such a good mood. He mischievously reached down to feel her panties, and was right. She had been thinking about that day. Smirking, he whispered, "What's got you so excited?" He took her hand and she followed him into the bedroom.
"Do you remember our first time, baby?" she asked smiling. There was a gleam in her eyes which he didn't miss. Yes, they would definitely be enjoying each other soon... He watched her ass jiggle as she ran to the white laundry basket sitting by his dresser. She picked up his light blue work shirt and held it up. "You wore this shirt," she said winking. He dropped his keys on the desk before walking over to his wife, already getting aroused at the memory she was bringing up. "Yes, yes I did..." As he reached his wife, he removed her shirt as he said, "You had fun taking it off, didn't you?"
"Oh, yes, baby," she giggled, beginning to take off the shirt he was wearing now. As she did, he looked into her eyes, ran his hand through her long black hair, and pulled her to his mouth, hungrily kissing her sweet lips. She pushed the shirt off his sexy body and began running her hands all over his chest. Suddenly he grabbed her hands and pulled away, holding them up.
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| Dukky |
Posted: 2010/1/31 0:04 Updated: 2010/1/31 0:04 |
Chat Moderator   Joined: 2006/6/7 From: The pond in the park Posts: 1571 |
 Good effort I think this story was pretty decent, and had great potential. I have not read
the first installment, though I guessed at how they came to be together. I did
not feel much of a connection between the two characters, I would have liked
to see a little more development in that area. And maybe a lot less of the "..."
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| thelustylibrarian |
Posted: 2010/1/29 12:24 Updated: 2010/1/29 12:24 |
Webmistress   Joined: 2005/8/18 From: In the stacks Posts: 1176 |
 Re: ... Do you want me to make them part of a series or a book, stillpure? PM me if you
do (as I'm not sure if I'll remember to check the comments here again).
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| Allways_workin |
Posted: 2010/1/28 11:23 Updated: 2010/1/28 11:23 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/17 From: All over the United States Posts: 1395 |
 Great story I read Tutor so I made the connection...well written and Hot as usual Stillpure...keep
writting
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2010/1/27 21:41 Updated: 2010/1/27 21:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/18 From: USA Posts: 421 |
 nice! I liked the story and am glad I read the comments so I can go and read the tutor
story. I do like to read your stories, Pure.
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| Pinkrose |
Posted: 2010/1/27 2:12 Updated: 2010/1/27 2:12 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2008/8/31 From: Western Washington Posts: 42 |
 I got the connection I was just lucky enough to read "Tutoring" right before "Yes, I married him",
so I got the connection of the two characters. The last lines confirmed it. Thought
a brief note at the beginning that this is the second part to "Tutoring" probably
would have made it clearer to most readers.
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| stillpure |
Posted: 2010/1/26 18:55 Updated: 2010/1/26 18:55 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/1/12 From: NY Posts: 5962 |
 ... Apparently I was not as clear as I wanted to be. These two characters are from
"Tutoring." Everyone wanted to know what happened to them, so...
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| GreyHunter |
Posted: 2010/1/26 18:46 Updated: 2010/1/26 18:46 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/8/4 From: Posts: 1 |
 Re: missing pieces I think your looking for stillpure's story "tutoring"
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2010/1/26 18:42 Updated: 2010/1/26 18:42 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7291 |
 Daydreaming-- Lots of lusty hot sex served up in perfect fashion. But since these two are married,
I might have also wanted to see a bit more of the gentle loving connection between
them. A bit of tenderness splashed between raging hot sex is always fun. I felt
I needed to know a bit more about your loving characters than you told us. Like
Tendertouch said, will there be more to this story in a second chapter? ----------*8P
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| tendertouch |
Posted: 2010/1/26 12:48 Updated: 2010/1/26 12:49 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/9/24 From: Historical home in the middle of college row. Posts: 391 |
 missing pieces I really enjoyed the story. Sex was good, dialect very good, story line enchanting,
yet I misssed the story of their first time, where? why was it taboo? Why shouldn't
they have been together. You brought up questions but didn't answer them. I think
you need a chapter two. I want to know. I'm romantic like that.
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