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| Silverthane |
Posted: 2009/7/5 6:18 Updated: 2009/7/5 6:18 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/5/12 From: South UK Posts: 2 |
 Great story Great story, have to say i like them a little longer, tends to give better atmosphere.
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| Dr.T |
Posted: 2008/8/6 12:46 Updated: 2008/8/6 12:46 |
Virgin   Joined: 2005/9/25 From: Moses Lake, WA, USA Posts: 1 |
 Good but needs improvement between pages From page-to-page the story does not continue well. Perhaps you need to go back
and make the appropriate improvements?
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| Mistress_Lisa |
Posted: 2008/7/31 1:37 Updated: 2008/7/31 1:37 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/7/31 From: Posts: 1 |
 Wow Loved this story! Very hot and loved the romantic flair to it.
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| pfcmad2003 |
Posted: 2008/7/21 12:48 Updated: 2008/7/21 12:48 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/7/12 From: detroit MI, USA Posts: 3 |
 Re: what do you think wow that was hotttttttttttt, you have the best story here, good job, and you
are the the most sexyest writer i have ever read about
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| archduke |
Posted: 2008/6/20 0:18 Updated: 2008/6/20 0:18 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/6/19 From: Posts: 2 |
 average but just not happening too long...lacking description of pleasures..... not focussed on main points
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| cowboy_8669 |
Posted: 2008/4/10 9:47 Updated: 2008/4/10 9:47 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/17 From: Kansas Posts: 9 |
 nicely done I enjoyed the ride of the whole story, I liked how it wasn't rushed
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2007/10/8 7:06 Updated: 2007/10/8 7:06 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3214 |
 his is great writing all the elements of a good story, very well written
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| Nich White |
Posted: 2007/9/18 10:00 Updated: 2007/9/18 10:00 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/1/11 From: UK Posts: 87 |
 hot stuff great story, comined some good plot with some hot writing, does it continue?
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| Coyote |
Posted: 2007/9/2 19:44 Updated: 2007/9/2 19:44 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/4/30 From: Windsor, Ont, Canada Posts: 49 |
 sensational first story it keeps you on the edge of your seat. Keep up the great work....definately waiting
for more from you.
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| sjovert |
Posted: 2007/8/14 17:59 Updated: 2007/8/14 17:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/8/14 From: Posts: 2 |
 A New Neighbor WOW....What an awesome story, made me wet as hell, just like you must have been.
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| DeadlyBeauty |
Posted: 2007/8/10 23:17 Updated: 2007/8/10 23:17 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/8/7 From: Posts: 22 |
 Wonderful You did a great job, that was one steamy story!!!!
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| NaughtyRedhead |
Posted: 2007/8/8 17:16 Updated: 2007/8/8 17:16 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/7/13 From: Southern U.S. Posts: 59 |
 VERY HOT Why am I so drawn to the infidelity stories?? There is something about the forbidden
lust that just seduces me... I really enjoyed the slightly romantic bit in this
one!! Keep up the great work
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| hopelessromantic128 |
Posted: 2007/7/17 1:15 Updated: 2007/7/17 1:15 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/11/15 From: Posts: 59 |
 bravo! Really great! I loved how it was slightly romantic too!
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| Tinapolar00 |
Posted: 2007/7/2 12:57 Updated: 2007/7/2 12:57 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/7/2 From: Posts: 8 |
 :) TubeHunter downloads videos from YouTube / PornoTube / xTube / YouPorn / RedTube
/ yuvutu - www.neoretix.com
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| speeddemon309 |
Posted: 2007/4/8 13:09 Updated: 2007/4/8 13:09 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/12/14 From: Posts: 1 |
 really nice nice story .. very nice narrative ... would love to read more of ur stuff .
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Cheers
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| Selah |
Posted: 2007/3/27 21:59 Updated: 2007/3/27 21:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/11 From: Posts: 6 |
 Beginners luck? If that's your first try I want to see some when you've written more cause
that was fuckin awesome!
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| krzsqrll |
Posted: 2007/3/20 17:56 Updated: 2007/3/20 17:56 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/12 From: Posts: 1 |
 AWESOME STORY This is one of the best yet! It made me wanting more..........
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| Sexy Sarah |
Posted: 2007/3/2 0:59 Updated: 2007/3/2 0:59 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/12/8 From: Posts: 30 |
 WOW Great details, made me very excited!
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| mrlustfulfun1 |
Posted: 2007/1/28 3:20 Updated: 2007/1/28 3:20 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/1/15 From: Georgia Posts: 54 |
 nice you did very well. It made me horny. Would like to see the story go
farther.
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| alterego |
Posted: 2007/1/24 13:42 Updated: 2007/1/24 13:42 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/20 From: I have been banned from chat while talking to someone in private Posts: 1804 |
 Hot Story/Well Written I just got around to realizing that you had written a story. It was very w
ell written and arousing.
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| dragon pirate |
Posted: 2007/1/6 7:55 Updated: 2007/1/6 7:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/8/4 From: Central Missouri Posts: 14 |
 thanks simply romantic, I'm glad I was able to bring some "pleasure" to you.
cabinboy, coming from a pet that means alot. Thanks
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2007/1/4 17:03 Updated: 2007/1/4 17:03 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Most enjoyable Good stuff, got substance to it.
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| simplyromantic |
Posted: 2007/1/4 16:43 Updated: 2007/1/4 16:43 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/12/27 From: Posts: 75 |
 OHHHH MY!!!!! That was a great story! I totally enjoyed it, got me very excited...:)
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| dragon pirate |
Posted: 2007/1/4 15:25 Updated: 2007/1/4 15:25 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/8/4 From: Central Missouri Posts: 14 |
 what do you think Let me know what you think, this is my first time at trying fiction. I know it's long but other than that?
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