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| Allways_workin |
Posted: 2010/4/9 4:14 Updated: 2010/4/9 4:14 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/17 From: All over the United States Posts: 1395 |
 There has to be a second story Love the sex in public, the fear of getting caught, very erotic...It would be
great to see a second story from this
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| Tinkerbell |
Posted: 2009/6/27 16:34 Updated: 2009/6/27 16:34 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/7/26 From: Here Posts: 1704 |
 enjoyable I felt the passion with your couple I hope they get together another time - well
written.
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| dirtypaul |
Posted: 2009/6/27 0:42 Updated: 2009/6/27 0:42 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/7/16 From: Posts: 566 |
 Oh dear... what have you done? Sweet... sexy... filthy... full of promise. Just like you. I loved every word
and I'm typing this one-handed so as to not gunk up the keyboard. Love you x
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| 8PUSSIES |
Posted: 2009/6/26 19:55 Updated: 2009/6/26 19:55 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/1/22 From: frolicking naked in the forest . . . Posts: 7291 |
 I loved this!-- Incredibly well expressed. A wonderful fantasy of a story, that held me spellbound
with every word. Almost two separate stories in one, seamlessly blended together.
Keep writing--you do it well. I can't wait to read more from you. Thanks! ------8
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/6/26 16:48 Updated: 2009/6/26 16:48 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1147 |
 dialogue .. sccret ... ............... a good story line. now ... you have to get some interaction
in here. some sense that the characters are "doing it" ... not writing about
it. ... ... keep it up! ... trying is half the battle.
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