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| Gruffalo |
Posted: 2011/5/11 16:24 Updated: 2011/5/11 16:24 |
Virgin   Joined: 2010/10/26 From: Posts: 4 |
 Didn't work for me You really are a gifted writer, Angie. I thoroughly enjoyed some of your other
stories and were turned on by them. Not by this one. Why not? It's surprising,
articulate, well crafted and, according to all those other commentators, wickedly
sexy. But after I had recovered from the clever idea at the start, I found myself
thinking yada yada yada. I wish I could provide a convincing reason, but I can't.
I only have an inadequate one. I don't find cruelty exciting. Please keep writing.
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| Gruffalo |
Posted: 2011/5/11 17:22 Updated: 2011/5/11 17:22 |
Virgin Joined: 2010/10/26 From: Posts: 4 |
Didn't work for me You really are a gifted writer, Angie. I thoroughly enjoyed some of your other
stories and were turned on by them. Not by this one. Why not? It's surprising,
articulate, well crafted and, according to all those other commentators, wickedly
sexy. But after I had recovered from the clever idea at the start, I found myself
thinking yada yada yada. I wish I could provide a convincing reason, but I can't.
I only have an inadequate one. I don't find cruelty exciting. Please keep writing.
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| asqer |
Posted: 2011/2/8 3:17 Updated: 2011/2/8 3:17 |
Virgin  Joined: 2010/12/26 From: In bed Posts: 9 |
Fantabulous! Loved it!
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| DirtySailor |
Posted: 2010/6/14 2:08 Updated: 2010/6/14 2:08 |
Up and Comer  Joined: 2009/7/15 From: Posts: 42 |
Definitely... An amazing twist on normal stories! Novel and SO great! Wonderful job!!
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| sweet_P |
Posted: 2009/8/10 9:07 Updated: 2009/8/10 9:07 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2009/5/18 From: Posts: 443 |
worthy of an oscar This was the first story I have read of yours. You are very talented! I enjoyed
all the descriptions and how you took your time pacing through the story. I am
not a revenge person so I confess I was a bit sad for them both...but the idea
was truly creative and overall this was very enjoyable to read. Thank you for
sharing.
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2009/6/4 16:47 Updated: 2009/6/4 16:47 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1149 |
worthy of a pulitzer! angie .. ............ another 3 star ( vote ), rock cock story. ... great imagination,
great imagery, great sexual / emotional build up. you should write romance novels
... maybe you do!?
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| x.sexg0ddess.x |
Posted: 2009/3/30 10:26 Updated: 2009/3/30 10:26 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/3/30 From: Posts: 1 |
wow this was amazing!! keep up the great job!!
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| Pensuwana |
Posted: 2009/3/27 7:11 Updated: 2009/3/27 7:11 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/1/19 From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium Posts: 3225 |
as with every one I'd be foolish to find fault with what you write, really enjoyed this, thanks
love
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| pinksapphire |
Posted: 2009/3/21 16:46 Updated: 2009/3/21 16:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/1/4 From: Posts: 2099 |
as always... angie an extremely well written piece. what an incredible imagination you have..perhaps
its time for a career change!
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| Lady O |
Posted: 2009/3/17 19:47 Updated: 2009/3/17 19:47 |
Flirt  Joined: 2008/9/8 From: California Posts: 34 |
I must say incredibly hot. You do have a way with words.
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| Colette Wilder |
Posted: 2009/3/15 17:04 Updated: 2009/3/15 17:04 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/10/3 From: Arizona Posts: 10 |
Wicked! Angie~ So totally sexy! What a wicked little wench Helen is, to dream up such
revenge. Personally, I prefer full-disclosure, mutually consensual infidelity...it
keeps everybody happy. But if he cheats, then all bets are off! Fabulous story
and very well written. Colette~
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| peachiebaby |
Posted: 2009/3/11 10:01 Updated: 2009/3/11 10:01 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2008/4/26 From: In your dreams love, in your dreams Posts: 323 |
Holy wow! Angie, that was awesome. Reminde me never to piss you off girl! Great job, kept
my attention and I loved the way the hubbie felt. Surves him right, he cheated
first and now he knows how she feels! Wonderful job Kisses Peachie
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| lovelylatina4455 |
Posted: 2009/3/10 13:39 Updated: 2009/3/10 13:39 |
Up and Comer  Joined: 2006/12/26 From: Posts: 70 |
hmmm I agree with what someone said. I read this becuase it was on the home page and
you do have a way with words. It was the idea of the spouses cheating that didnt...well
i didnt like it. but the actual scene between the two was good and well written
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| westernguy |
Posted: 2009/3/9 16:02 Updated: 2009/3/9 16:02 |
Virgin Joined: 2006/12/24 From: Posts: 1 |
Worthy OF AN Oscar INdeed your story was great,and exciting. Hope you write more. Jim
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| Juicey62 |
Posted: 2009/2/15 6:10 Updated: 2009/2/15 6:10 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/5/19 From: Posts: 218 |
Worthy of an Oscar Sometimes revenge really is sweet! Thanks for sharing Angie. Maybe i'll store
a thought for later?
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| onlytalking |
Posted: 2009/2/14 22:24 Updated: 2009/2/14 22:24 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/1/14 From: East TN USA Posts: 1 |
Very hot and sexy story =) Very hot and sexy story, it certainly aroused my curosity =) to what wives do
when their husbands are out of town on business and I wish I could see or read
about those DVD's as well =)
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| hmmmmm |
Posted: 2009/2/13 5:36 Updated: 2009/2/13 5:36 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/4/27 From: Posts: 10 |
tat was torturously sexy!! nice nice work!! damn i feel sorry for the hubbie!!but the sex was great totally
enjoyed it!! you got an oscar from me!!
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| DragonFire |
Posted: 2009/2/11 10:18 Updated: 2009/2/11 10:18 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Sadly, Ohio Posts: 238 |
Hmmmm..... disturbing and lovely all at the same time.
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| firey_lover |
Posted: 2009/2/11 3:54 Updated: 2009/2/11 3:54 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/10/24 From: California Posts: 75 |
Uh Wow. I'm not really sure what to say. The sex part of it was amazing. It made
me incredibly horny. I love the power in it, how you had the power shifting back
and forth. The plot of two people cheating on her *wrinkles nose* it just comes
a little too close to home for me to enjoy it. But wow. Very very sexy.
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| Eric |
Posted: 2009/2/10 12:25 Updated: 2009/2/10 12:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/7/24 From: cyberspace Posts: 2219 |
Powerful Angie, as many times as I read your stories, they always "hit!" I have run out
of words to sing your praises. Again, you amaze me as virtually no one else does.
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2009/2/10 10:48 Updated: 2009/2/10 10:48 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/4/7 From: Fading into the western sunset... Posts: 5739 |
Very Nasty !! "3 Points" Angie... You naughty, nasty thing! I loved this story! I thought my wife was
nasty, when her mood hits? But... you make her look like an angel! When I finished
this tale, I had to sweet talk her into a morning 'Facial', thank you for that!
PS> I let her read it too. So I could use it in the verbal foreplay! "That's
it honey, suck that big black cock! Leon likes it! Make him cum in your juicy
white mouth!" Thanks Angie!
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| sailor |
Posted: 2009/2/10 8:04 Updated: 2009/2/10 8:04 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2005/12/11 From: East coast USA Posts: 518 |
God.... ...you have such a wicked mind! Good story.
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| rondeevu |
Posted: 2009/2/10 7:17 Updated: 2009/2/10 7:17 |
Bookworm  Joined: 2006/2/25 From: Somewhere you can't find me Posts: 80 |
This was Excellent Very well written, good imagery, very hot. Thoroughly enjoyable and erotic.
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| irisheyesgirl |
Posted: 2009/2/10 0:23 Updated: 2009/2/10 0:23 |
Flirt Joined: 2007/8/30 From: Posts: 36 |
bravo! hot, interesting, creative and unique. Great job angie!!! im quite work up after
that read
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2009/2/9 14:41 Updated: 2009/2/9 14:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 649 |
A truly delightful ride! A great act of revenge even if it would likely set Jamie free for free.
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| red rose |
Posted: 2009/2/9 14:35 Updated: 2009/2/9 14:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/6/27 From: www.just-kinky.com Posts: 1668 |
Another Cracker... You have such a dirty, devilish mind Miss Walker :P An Angel with a dirty face
comes to mind lol...Wicked story, loved it & Congrats on Story of the Week. I
feel like some black pudding now :P xxx
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| angelique |
Posted: 2009/2/9 14:12 Updated: 2009/2/9 14:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/2/10 From: in my bliss Posts: 163 |
The screenplay of my fantasies... Angie, you have a remarkable flare for capturing unique situations, spinning
them sexy, and leaving me breathless! Wish i had your way with words...or your
love life! Please keep sharing XOXO ~Angie
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| wyliecoyote |
Posted: 2009/2/9 11:03 Updated: 2009/2/9 11:03 |
Moderator   Joined: 2008/2/22 From: On the road to nowhere Posts: 1286 |
I would like to offer my thanks to.... Angiewalkerblue!!! Simply superb!
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| BreakOnThrough |
Posted: 2009/2/9 6:28 Updated: 2009/2/9 6:28 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/2/9 From: Scotland Posts: 1 |
Angie..... you're a genius...... Hello, Angie i have been discreetly reading your stories for a while now &......you
truly have an amazing way with words, all of your stories are unbelievably well
written, i love your mind!!!!
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