.wow..reading that I had to slip my hand down my panties for just a second!;)

.wow..reading that I had to slip my hand down my panties for just a second!;)

Every young man should have a friend's mum like Caroline. :)

Jonathan, This is extremely well written & I loved how you made the characters interact so well with each other.. You have a god given talent & would love to see more stories like this...

Jonathan this is well up to your usual standard. Your build ups are the most erotic thing on the whole site. Fantasy is amazing but you make your stories so real! x

definately got my juices flowing. Can't wait for more from you :-)

It was bitter sweet, it truly was. Wonderful work, I do believe I should go change my panties now.. Keep on writing.

And I give this an A+. I read this story as my very first ever, back when I was still a guest. JP, you must never stop writing. You are definatly one of the best. Teach out!

that was amazing! please write more!

Beautiful description of Caroline. I loved all the details.

Love love LOVE this story! And no need to "Americanize" it, I understood everything just fine.

you jonathan are simply addictive! it is now the early hours of tuesday morning, and instead of sleeping, I find myself reading story upon story of your blazing hot works! xmixedbeautyx

Congratulations! Although this is almost the first story I have read on this site I cannot believe there to be a better one. No grammatical errors, no silly glitzes - just so well-written

I can clearly see why this is the story of the year, more JP please, your the best writter I have read in these walls

That was a terrific story. I just love the progression without rushing to the lusty part! Please, sir, may we have some more? We're hungry

wow! that was really amazing .... it stirred things inside me so it mustve been really good as im a hard woman to please ;) hope to read some more xxxx

oh god, this was so amazing jp. no wonder you got story of the year! so beautifully written and just simply incredible. extremely well done. :)

Wonderfully-paced narrative, rich in detail and first-person character development. Beautiful erotica. (If only I could have been fortunate enough to have come of age in such a fantastic way!)

I have not read a whole lot on here, but this certainly does it for me....I love the scenario of course, and the prolonging of the moment(s) and then the way everything is put together....fantastic and worthy of every accolade.

I realize that you don't need any more comments on this story but as I sit here I feel compelled to say something, as I rarely do. I loved the fact you drew this story out, a type of verbal foreplay if you will. It's so much easier to get immersed within the scene if the ending doesn't "come" (excuse the pun ;)) to quickly. Lovely work and I'm glad you were recognized for it.

I loved this story...I love reading all of your stories and hope that you write lots more!

other than WOW! Amazing story, JP! You should write a sequal. I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to know exactly what else happens between Caroline and Joey...

Great story! Brought memories and feelings experienced as a "growing boy" myself...had a few friend's mothers that caused many a lustful fantasy...

What a beautiful story. You are a brilliant, intelligent writer. I look forward to your next novelette. Fondly, Cavi

Very beautifully written. Amazing story, it had me "gripped" all the way through. Super!

Good story. kept me anticipating about the next development and prolonging the "proceess" heightening the excitement with every paragraph. Keeping the hardness growing as I read through to the climax. Rightly voted as the Story of the Year

fantastic read babe made me hot and horny nice and long too. love it xx

congrats on story of the year with this JP!!! You did a really great job on it! very well written

congrats on story of the year with this JP!!! You did a really great job on it! very well written

I can see why this won story of the year. Beautiful, tension filled, erotic build up and the tender, loving release for both parties. Great stuff. Regards, DD.

A great story. I reckon that you lived part of it.

Could certainly relate to this... growing up I had a thing for someone older and out of bounds, reading caroline certainly brought back some fond memories!! Nice one JP!

it was long but worth the read. really enjoyed it. looking forward to reading more rom u

You story is amazing I could not stop reading it. You made my blood rise and I am glad you keep the way you remember it because them it is truer to you and as a writer that is the only thing you can do it to write your stories as true to you as you can possibly can. I only wish my sex life could be as intresting as yours. Nora

That is one ex-cell-ent story !!, I have a spare room if you want to move in, lol ; ) I totally agree with you on the Arse issue, a wise decision! GO THE BRITONS !

This is a beautiful story. It kept me hot all the way through. You can't seem to do wrong by me jp.

a brilliant read, very well written how would i have loved to be that boy years ago with his friends mum. the excitement of the build up to the love makeing was fantastic and i couldnt wait to read on and cum to the climax very well done

...methinks that you're the one responsible for all the pussy puddles around here! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Luv n stuff, Susie...:*

JP this is immensely well-written, had me on the edge for ages before you got to the really naughty stuff and you even got a sneaky author's note on the Ass vs Arse thing ;-) Excellent! That Guy

This story is hot. Thanks for writing it. You should be a romance novel writer. I'd buy a few copies!

Restraining Joe in the bondage of his relationship with Peter throughout mo st of the story is a superb building of tension - "like a wind up toy" foll owed by a most enjoyable release...My compliments.

Simply fantastic, the progression of character is great, the tender lust th e best. Very well done.

What a discriptive story teller, thank you for sharing this wonderful tale, shower section made my toes curl!

Well, this is one of the longest stories I've read since I've joined and by far the best! very well written, a beautiful turn of phrase and sexy... Thank You x

Wow Jonathan, I'm amazed and hot over this story. Where do I find Caroline? :) Thanks for sharing! Jim

got me very excited to say the least

This is one hot story! Great progression, great ending... I love it!

Your story was excellent. It grabbed me and held me there to the end. I f elt I was the young man. I especially enjoyed the way it ended. It also l eft it opened for future encounters with her.

This is incredible. I'd even go as far to say that every work of yours that I've read is amazing. How do you do it?

Fantastic as always Jonathan. Enjoyed very much.

its an amazing story. look forward to more stories such as this one. truly enjoyable

JP, great work. The flow of storyline is magnetic. One of the best I have r ead so far.

JP, great work. The flow of storyline is magnetic. One of the best I have r ead so far.

What a story - so sensuously built up, kept me enthralled, and left me imag ining about my younger days and one older lady i used to fantasize about - all of us do! A great story teller, and a told in a lovely way building up to a beautiful end. Keep it up, and now I'm going to have to search for all your stories, and t his, on my third day on this site.

I only wish I could write as fluently. It kept me reading easily right to t he end. I admire your obvious talent for the genre.

The reason I registered on here was so I could tell you what a wondrous and enchanting story this is. There were so many moments in it that will stay with me for a long time. The story was beautifully told and the eroticism was spectacular without being jarring! Thank you so much for the effort it took to write this masterpiece for all of us!

This was an absolutely amazing story! All of the little quirks you mentione d made perfect sense to me as I spent some time in England when I was young er. Thank you so much for such an enticing tale!

Jonathan this being one of the first story to dazzle and tempt us with, sho wed your potential at how much u wanted the reader to actually enjoy and kn ow the characters. I appreciate the details that u add to entice not just t his one but all that you've written. So my comment is this and this only ne ver stop. Thanks again for the wet spot. :)

I read trhat days ago and I'm still dreaming about it, I had an aunt I had a terrible crush on, but I nevrer got that far, only day dreaming like I've been doing over your story every since reading it, my god yoyu are a wonde rfully talanted writer

If that was your debut, you really have set the bar very high for your next story! Great stuff, keep them coming,please......

A HUGE congrats and a pat on the back for the story of the year. Hope you h ave another this one coming!

That was beautiful JP, thank you for sharing, it felt like it came from you r heart.

i was quite surprised, it made me quite wet indeed. I look forward to reading any upcomming stories from you.

J-P, As ever, you are the pentultimate story teller. You make your characters b ecome forms we can see and even hear. A truly arousing story of young love and lovemaking. Thank you for a well told tale! Vinc.

This may just be the best story LL has on the site, or ever will have. Unl ike many of our authors, you took the time to build the fire before you set the match to it. And then it just blew up in flames. One small cavil: I'm pretty sure you meant not "Arian" (an early Christian heresy) but rather "Aryan" (Teutonic). But I do agree with you about "ass " being sexier than "arse", and in my experience many present-day Brits, es pecially females, are moving in that linguistic direction. Great work, and thanks!

wow a really good story. i loved the way the sexual tension was built up a nd the way you told a story - it wasn't just "Wham, Bam Thankyou Mam" like some cheezy porno (although i'm not dissin those types of stories they're s till hot). Anyway as i said v. nice. It got me going and i swing the other way. U mad e me want Candice just like all the straight guys and as much as all the st aight girls wanted Joe. I love the whole sexy "older woman" thing. P.s i must disagree with your "ass" "arse" reference though. I prefer arse - maybe its cause i'm auzzie. i tend to relate "ass" with "jack-ass".

I really loved this story. It is definitely one of the hottest stories I've read. Imagining Caroline masturbating with Joe's hard dick left me dripping wet. And as for the British-English, I think it’s great. If anything it adds to the authenticity of the story. Keep them cumming!!!

J.P. From just chatting with you in the LL, I would have never thought that you were capable of writting such a great story of love and lust! You have tho and I think that your ability to use "American" english was what has shown me your ability to go an extra step and make it an enjoyable story for so many! Tho it brings back memorys, my first time was nowhere as much fun as what I have just read! Please write more for us here in the LL Lee

got there in the end, very nice, wish I'd met you when i was a teenager

This is my first day on this forum - I too am English and know what you mean about arse & ass. It is a beautifully written story Jonathan. I really enjoyed reading it x x x x x

That was so beautiful. So full of love and passion. Being English, I know exactly where you are coming from. I love Caroline.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this story. More than worth the wait!

to repeat someone else's words--- masterfully written. Sex aside-- the description of feelings wound me up tight and I was too slowly coming down. Excellently descriptive.

mm jonn,so teasingly erotic,i have read a good number of yours ,dunno how i missed this .xxxx.shaz

JP, fantastic job, what a great read. You set the stage so well, very easy to visualize. You are most deserving of story of the year laurels and my congratulations to you.

AMAZING...thats all i can say!!!

JP... you did it yet again!! I just read the story and I'm absolutely amazed at how talented you are. I love the long stories and especially this one. So you keep it up darlin! ;)

this was an incredible story and i loved the way it was written. as said before i agree that you should publicly publish ur stories. i think you have a great talent and cant wait to read more of you amazing stories.

This was by far the best story i have read on LL. It should definitely be story of the year...and you, JP, should get your works published somewhere. That is some talent you've got there!

And the Winner(in my book) is: June: Caroline, by Jonathan Philips. Wonderful story JP!! Brilliant and HOT! Damn I had to get a new pair halfway through.

Great story. The descriptions were so well written that I felt as though I knew Caroline. Thank you for writing such a hot story!

Jonathan this is so totally horny, I just love your stories. shalamar xxxxxxxxx

Jonathan, I have just read this story, planning to do so over a few days....but I couldn't stop reading...holding my breath for most of each page! The feelings of tension and anticipation turned me on so much. The way you set the scene, describing everthing with such detail, made it so easy to picture. You are an amazing author. Kisses Pussy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

OMG!!!!!

JP....... What i really loved about this story, in addition to what everyone else has said, is how you drew Caroline. Her delight in sharing what joyful sex can be, especially without complications. -- Wish I had that opportunity too with someone as lovely as Joe. -- Also, you write beautifully: the descriptions of place and people and the ongoing sexual tension were extremely well balanced. -- Great job! -- Lush

When I read this masterfully written story, my heart ached in a powerful and BEAUTIFUL way: It made me know again that when true love is there, lust can be out of this world. I know we mostly focus on the lusty side of things here but we don't forget the lovin' either. The love that existed between Caroline and Joe from the start touched me very deeply. The way she carefully, and refreshingly shows him how much she loves him for keeps, and the other way around, showed the love was really true. The best erotic love story I have ever read. Yes, to be loved and brought to manhood by a "Caroline" is every man's dream, and we all wish it could have been that way for us as for Joe!! If we had a 10 rating I would give this story that. Please write more J!!

You are a hell of a writer and I know you are a hell of a lover too. Keep it up! Writting too.

I loved your story, it grabbed me almost instantly but then like a great lover you slowed the pace, gradually building sexual tension, keeping me in anticipation. I willing admit that more than once I was temped to seek release but instead I chose to let you lead the way, set the tempo: and you did not disappoint me. The simultaneous climaxes, both of your story and mine were lovely. I am looking forward to reading more of your exquisite work.

OUTSTANDING! How did I miss this?

That was awesome!! And you got the name right...after all it's mine!! waiting on ur next one!!

That story was soo hot, it made me so wet I couldn't resist... You should write more ;)

hmm where have you been all this time???Loved the story I like them long!

I'm just an echo by now, but still: great story!

There must be some very very lucky ladies in your life JP!!! Exceptionally talented. x

fucking awesome dude, keep it goin :)

JP, you do it so well babe, XXXX Mermaid.

that story was too hot for words keep it up

Your writing style is wonderful! I couldn't wait to click on the next number to continue on with the story. Nicely written! I look forward to searching for more of your stories.

Wow, amazing story again. Well-done and unique at the same time. Can't wait for more of your stories!! -xoxo- Katte

mate what a story, i have lived in britain for a long period of my life, and luv the way you wrote this story........ though it is a lot more than a stoty keep it up son i only wish it could happen to me and my friends mum

that was a great story JP!! i loved it! can't wait to read more from you!! hugs-n-kisses

i want more of that story!!!!!!

Many thanks Jonathan for sharing such a wonderful story, this must be the best of it's type that I have read for a long time. At this stage I don't know if I should be jealous of Caroline, or even Joseph. Jemma

she would get it

Fantastic Story!

That story is great. It is what every young male hopes will happen to him.

that was amazing...keep it up i cant wait for the next story

You should be writing romance novels.

i never thought i would finish it LOL but it is an amazing story, very sexy and very well written. good job baby xxx

A little bit of everything in there....I cant wait for more...Ummm you did get the name incorrect (mine of course).....LOL Well I gave you a 9 only because if you would of had a little more "slap and tickles" in it ....It would of been perfect!...GREAT and amazing job! Keep it up , hun!