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| sweetdesires22 |
Posted: 2009/11/10 2:05 Updated: 2009/11/10 2:05 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/9/8 From: California Posts: 2 |
 Incredible That was so hot, it had me pulsing all over. Such an amazing dialogue-the sparks
between the two were tantalizing. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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| Wabbit |
Posted: 2009/9/16 16:03 Updated: 2009/9/16 16:03 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/1/23 From: In the shadows Posts: 1098 |
Fantastic... Great story..How I just now sat down to read it is beyond me. Well written and
just fabulous. Old cars do it for me too..as do men that work on them. Something
about it...mmmm. Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale.
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| wanderer49 |
Posted: 2009/9/6 7:39 Updated: 2009/9/6 7:39 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/6/15 From: Posts: 16 |
Sensational Great story well told. 3 votes from me.
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| followdarabbit |
Posted: 2009/8/4 19:39 Updated: 2009/8/4 19:39 |
Virgin  Joined: 2007/6/22 From: N.Y. Posts: 15 |
nice that was hot
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| JJ Forever |
Posted: 2009/7/15 18:42 Updated: 2009/7/15 18:42 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/7/12 From: Oregon Posts: 11 |
Incredible!!! What an amazing story, and your first as well!! Congrats on Story Of The Year
too! Your story was so vivid and detailed, and your words were powerful. Your
characters were lifelike, and seemed to react realisticly to their sexual situations.
I can't find a single thing I could critisize on. Well written just doesn't cut
it. Bravo.
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| happyface |
Posted: 2009/6/21 23:22 Updated: 2009/6/21 23:22 |
Virgin  Joined: 2009/6/19 From: california Posts: 3 |
oh my fuck Amazing!
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| XxmaggotchickxX |
Posted: 2009/4/6 16:13 Updated: 2009/4/6 16:13 |
Flirt   Joined: 2009/3/14 From: My little black and green room Posts: 23 |
wow That was amazing meeting someone like that and then having a amazing night. Please
make another and I didn't really find anything wrong with the story.
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| Ginger54 |
Posted: 2009/3/17 6:15 Updated: 2009/3/17 6:15 |
Flirt  Joined: 2006/11/17 From: Colorado, U.S. Posts: 22 |
very well written I just wanted to say that your story was one of the best I have read on LL. It
was sensual without being crude, and I agree ten-fold that you should consider
writing a seuqal. Congrats on your first story, and congrants on winning the
story of the year!
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| Juniper Wren |
Posted: 2009/2/19 1:40 Updated: 2009/2/19 1:40 |
Virgin Joined: 2009/1/20 From: Posts: 1 |
Best Story Ever. This is the best story I've ever read on here. You've got enough build-up to
put the reader in the story, but it isn't long-winded. It's so erotic. I have
read it with results many times in the last couple months. Continues to be my
favorite. I hope you keep writing; I think your writing is publish-worthy.
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| shazzy |
Posted: 2009/1/29 15:08 Updated: 2009/1/29 15:08 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/6/7 From: Posts: 3445 |
Truly exceptional, congrats and very well done to one of the best stories around by
far
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| javasnob |
Posted: 2009/1/27 15:30 Updated: 2009/1/27 15:30 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2009/1/24 From: wherever you want me to be Posts: 1226 |
Olds Dream Truly hot! More, please!
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| Meia |
Posted: 2009/1/19 1:08 Updated: 2009/1/19 1:08 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/2/12 From: Posts: 11 |
Woah!! Your FIRST story?! It was BRILLIANT!!
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| SecretLick |
Posted: 2009/1/17 20:43 Updated: 2009/1/17 20:43 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/13 From: Midwest Posts: 1463 |
Congrats That was like a real life story that people only dream about. It was so well
written and you used such powerful words to describe what was happening.. Congrats
again .. xoxo Jen
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| Iwantitall |
Posted: 2009/1/14 0:31 Updated: 2009/1/14 0:31 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/12/9 From: Midwest Posts: 18 |
Delicious Raw...hot...lusty. I loved it. As stated....you are a natural. Ready for more.
Thanks for sharing and congrats on story of the year!!
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2009/1/11 15:13 Updated: 2009/1/11 15:13 |
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Speechless... Holy shit that was hot. No wonder it was story of the year. Amazing read. Wow...
Can't think of anything that would have made it more of a scorcher. I'm in awe.
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| brownsugar72 |
Posted: 2009/1/8 0:55 Updated: 2009/1/8 0:55 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/2/23 From: New York City Posts: 293 |
Hurts So Good Wow, must have more. Please write a sequel. This hot couple has to get together
again. Great first story!
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| DirtyLittleGirl |
Posted: 2009/1/2 23:30 Updated: 2009/1/2 23:32 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/10/30 From: Tied up to a bedpost Posts: 4 |
:-) ...great story!
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| red rose |
Posted: 2009/1/1 10:15 Updated: 2009/1/1 10:15 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/6/27 From: Posts: 1670 |
Congratulations on Story of the Month... The way you described the setting, the weather, the car everything was both refreshing
& unique to any story I have read so far on the LL...You obviously have a talent
for writing, as this is your first story, simply, but beautifully told...and
yes it did work, even tho she had only just met the guy, some people do take
the moment if it feels right. Congratulations on story of the Year, I hope this
inspires you to write more for all of us to read. x
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2008/12/31 10:58 Updated: 2008/12/31 10:58 |
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Congratulations Congratulations on Story of the Year. First time is definitely a charm. No critique
is needed. This is a very well written story, great plot and character development.
Some may question why she got in his car so quickly, but given the circumstances
I think it was appropriate, and worked well within the story. Great job!
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| redredrose |
Posted: 2008/12/30 14:01 Updated: 2008/12/30 14:01 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/3/7 From: Vienna, Austria... where they sell Erotica from street stalls! Posts: 44 |
Wow! Story of the Year on your FIRST story! Congratulations! It's an excellent story;
well written, sexy to the point of pain, full of great imagery and you can spell
;) Can't wait for the next one. RRR @-,-
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2008/12/30 11:49 Updated: 2008/12/30 11:49 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
Well done Congrats on getting story of the year
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| Jonathan_Philips |
Posted: 2008/12/18 10:48 Updated: 2008/12/18 10:48 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/2/3 From: London UK Posts: 3010 |
Wonderful! Simply wonderful. Possibly the best written story I have read here. I will contact
you privately about it in the not too distant future. You should feel very proud
of yourself.
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| pickle_tickler |
Posted: 2008/10/25 16:39 Updated: 2008/10/25 16:39 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/5/4 From: Posts: 3 |
woah wow loved it!! amazing story!!
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| jiaka1981 |
Posted: 2008/10/24 0:21 Updated: 2008/10/24 0:21 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/7/6 From: AZ Posts: 17 |
first time's a charm no critique needed. great plot, likable characters, you set the scene well. Some
may question how quicky she got in his car, but i've done that, my experience
wasnt as satisfing, i just got a number. great job keep em comming!
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| Yuck Fu |
Posted: 2008/10/22 19:56 Updated: 2008/10/22 19:56 |
Up and Comer  Joined: 2008/6/23 From: Everywhere and Nowhere Posts: 53 |
Sticky Board I just about cummed all over my key board. Nice work
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| angelic_l3itch |
Posted: 2008/10/10 12:08 Updated: 2008/10/10 12:08 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2005/10/5 From: North Carolina Posts: 134 |
Absolutely Amazing I know I dont come to LL often but when I do I simply love being blown away by
some of the best..Keep up the good work and damn theres goes my concentration
LOL!!
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| geobob |
Posted: 2008/10/5 12:39 Updated: 2008/10/5 12:39 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet Joined: 2007/4/16 From: San Marcos, Tx Posts: 253 |
geobob Lust,hot, beautifully descriptive. You are a natural.
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| unexpected |
Posted: 2008/10/4 5:18 Updated: 2008/10/4 5:18 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/1/29 From: Posts: 2 |
wow! amazing for your first piece! cant wait to hear about more from this couple.
so sexy and exciting!
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| buffy |
Posted: 2008/10/3 0:25 Updated: 2008/10/3 0:25 |
Virgin Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Posts: 5 |
Hot! Hot! Hot! I loved it! So sensual and so sexual! More, please??!!! Buffy
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2008/10/2 9:50 Updated: 2008/10/2 9:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2007/4/7 From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :) Posts: 5310 |
WOW .... Just WOW ! S... That was your FIRST story and you score the 'Story Of The Week?' Look out
LL, we have a sexual hottie among us!! Luv2 gets out a few 'Handi-wipes' and
a hand towel. I'll be in a dream world all day!! Thank's for rendering me useless
for my work day! :) Write On my sweet! '3' from Luv2
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| Pearl1113 |
Posted: 2008/9/28 13:00 Updated: 2008/9/28 13:00 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/9/3 From: Posts: 363 |
awesome very good for a first story...! way to go...! & i agree there should be a sequel...
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| yoursforever |
Posted: 2008/9/24 13:02 Updated: 2008/9/24 13:02 |
Virgin Joined: 2008/7/23 From: Posts: 3 |
hot! that was an excellent first story.....waiting for the sequel too......
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| tail gunner |
Posted: 2008/9/23 16:50 Updated: 2008/9/23 16:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/6/28 From: the great American southland Posts: 1139 |
first efforts ... a story of the week on the very first effort ... way to go, girl !
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| Rotsen |
Posted: 2008/9/23 12:50 Updated: 2008/9/23 12:50 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/7/29 From: Eastern PA Posts: 618 |
Impressive Sensual Accumen Simply one of the most enjoyable stories I have read here on LL so far. Your
descriptions of the depot, the surrounding location and the weather are unique,
effective and entertaining. The sex too, while more conventionally presented,
is a cut above and nicely effective. Bravo.
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| edlyneham |
Posted: 2008/9/23 3:48 Updated: 2008/9/23 3:48 |
Bookworm Joined: 2006/1/12 From: Perth, Scotland Posts: 105 |
Excellent... tale and very well written with outstanding use of detail and colloquialism.
This story really LIVES. Thanks, Ed
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| Tentativeness |
Posted: 2008/9/23 3:46 Updated: 2008/9/23 3:46 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/5/20 From: In your hottest dreams(: Posts: 237 |
I find... ...that I agree with Tom. Your story was totally down to earth, and I questioned
that fact, too. On the whole, however, I find that it derserves a 'blazing!'
score. Good job(: <3 Lillian.
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| tom thumper |
Posted: 2008/9/22 15:54 Updated: 2008/9/22 15:54 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2006/12/20 From: left coast of Canada Posts: 258 |
An Amazing First! Wow this is an extremely hard story to criticize for improvement cause everything
about it works so well. I really love your dialogue which sounds spot on. And
you nail all the sensuous detail which makes for a rocking erotic story. Maybe
I would quibble about why Anitchka would just hop in the car with a complete
stranger. And that just struck me as odd cause the rest of the story felt so
darn real. Can't wait for more.
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| stillpure |
Posted: 2008/9/22 11:23 Updated: 2008/9/22 11:23 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/1/12 From: NY Posts: 5918 |
Wow Nice work. Quite realistic. A sequal sounds great for it.
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| 2yummy4u |
Posted: 2008/9/22 6:45 Updated: 2008/9/22 6:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet  Joined: 2008/8/16 From: Within reach Posts: 258 |
Great Story Very good story can't wait to read the next.
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| Amaryllis |
Posted: 2008/9/22 6:20 Updated: 2008/9/22 6:21 |
Virgin  Joined: 2008/9/5 From: Here, There and Everywhere Posts: 9 |
That was so good .... .... I need to lie down!
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| gal.savvy |
Posted: 2008/9/22 6:06 Updated: 2008/9/22 6:06 |
Flirt Joined: 2008/9/9 From: Posts: 23 |
WOW!!!! dat was awesome....i hope there is a sequel...where they wud meet
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