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| ImaBadMan2985 |
Posted: 2008/12/16 18:52 Updated: 2008/12/16 18:52 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/10/14 From: Posts: 2 |
 Stellar Work That was truly impressive writing. The build up of tension was surreal, and you
knew just how to keep the reader wanting just a little bit more. Excellent Job.
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| Dulcima |
Posted: 2008/9/18 16:51 Updated: 2008/9/18 16:51 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2008/9/12 From: On my way to Paradise Posts: 55 |
 Wonderful Very clever. Very good. Dulci
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| jpierre13 |
Posted: 2008/8/31 16:06 Updated: 2008/8/31 16:06 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/8/31 From: bathroom Posts: 1 |
 Re: I need a massage! We'll massage you if you massage us!
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| pen2extacy |
Posted: 2008/7/20 4:09 Updated: 2008/7/20 4:09 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/7/4 From: California Posts: 31 |
 Unexpectedly Incredible. I didn't know what to expect clicking on the masturbation section, but reading
your story, was incredible! Amazing job. I look forward to reading more from
you!
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| Demich |
Posted: 2008/6/7 17:45 Updated: 2008/6/7 17:45 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/1/13 From: Posts: 212 |
 Amanda's confession- The massage Superb story,very well written. I loved the plot and the unexpected ending. Definetly
hot.
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| Demich |
Posted: 2008/6/7 17:44 Updated: 2008/6/7 17:44 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2008/1/13 From: Posts: 212 |
 Amanda's confession- The massage Superb story,very well written. I loved the plot and the unexpected ending. Definetly
hot.
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| Darkknight77 |
Posted: 2008/4/10 1:46 Updated: 2008/4/10 1:46 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/4/9 From: New Zealand Posts: 5 |
 ...Damn... You could post that same story each week and with out fail i'd read it again
and again with no complaints
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| serendipity |
Posted: 2007/10/13 17:43 Updated: 2007/10/13 17:43 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/10/5 From: UK Posts: 87 |
 MMmmmmm... After reading that i'm feeling rather tense myself. A good massage is most definately
in order!! Oustanding, as are all your stories!
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| thinksexy |
Posted: 2007/9/22 22:41 Updated: 2007/9/22 22:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/12/17 From: Posts: 2862 |
 Bad Mandy... Great story!
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| marie_julie_2002 |
Posted: 2007/6/12 10:47 Updated: 2007/6/12 10:47 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/6/6 From: Posts: 10 |
 Excellent Story! This is one of the finest I read so far! Added to favorites!
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2007/6/7 10:01 Updated: 2007/6/7 10:01 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: California USA Posts: 3138 |
 Wow !!! JP, That was fantastic! Your writing amazes me. Keep it up friend! Jim
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| dragongirl0076 |
Posted: 2007/5/30 19:35 Updated: 2007/5/30 19:35 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/5/27 From: Arizona Posts: 133 |
 nice That was an amazing story. Any time I see you name on a story I have to read
and be ready to be blown away. I wish I could write like you please keep writing
because I look forward to your stories. Nora
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| runeblade |
Posted: 2007/4/20 1:29 Updated: 2007/4/20 1:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/2/9 From: Canada Posts: 451 |
 slut! Ya cheap slut you! Good one (I liked this)
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| noyoufirst |
Posted: 2007/4/9 14:43 Updated: 2007/4/9 14:43 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/2/7 From: Posts: 152 |
 Hot! I loved the story. especially all the detail. Makes me want to switch caree
rs. haha
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| lovelylatina4455 |
Posted: 2007/4/2 16:02 Updated: 2007/4/2 16:02 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/12/26 From: Posts: 69 |
 nice job interesting story, very detailed which made it fantastic. i must admit, aft
er a certain point i expected the ending to turn out the way it did
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| nicespread |
Posted: 2007/3/9 21:03 Updated: 2007/3/9 21:03 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/8 From: Posts: 11 |
 Baby I'm yours! I wanted it to end differently. I knew he was sighted all along, but still
delighted in it. I will keep this as my favorites and re-read it again. And
now I have to go cancel massage appointment and look for a MAN to do it ne
xt. Anyone in my neck of the woods available?! LOL Keep writing I will k
eep reading...don't worry about how long it is! What's time when you cum do
wn to it?!
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| latinmama |
Posted: 2007/2/19 2:21 Updated: 2007/2/19 2:21 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/2/7 From: new york city Posts: 89 |
 wow i love these suprise endings. i read the accidental audition and it seems b
oth characters where beat at their own game.
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| nicole2525252 |
Posted: 2007/1/24 14:55 Updated: 2007/1/24 14:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/17 From: Posts: 17 |
 Thanx again More than just an "Happy Ending"
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| shadowrealmgirl |
Posted: 2007/1/16 18:34 Updated: 2007/1/16 18:34 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/16 From: North Carolina Posts: 18 |
 damn! i am just sitting here throbbing right now. that was excellent!
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| deekerazee |
Posted: 2007/1/4 14:36 Updated: 2007/1/4 14:36 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/1 From: Posts: 2 |
 A big Fan Awesome!! I've read 4 stories from you and damn! you're soo good at this! Such a big fan of yours already!! More..more..more..please!
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| sexyman123 |
Posted: 2006/11/21 16:13 Updated: 2006/11/21 16:13 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/11/21 From: Posts: 12 |
 ABSOULUTELY BEST STORT I HAVE EVER READ!!!! this is absolutely the best sroty i have ever read here. you are so good at giving so much detail . this story made me cum....2ce good thing i had a sock very very good keep it up. i liked the bit of a surprise at the end
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| Miro |
Posted: 2006/10/16 8:57 Updated: 2006/10/16 8:58 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/3/23 From: The Netherworld Posts: 585 |
 Bloody marvellous! Braille notwithstanding you are truely a master of the art of building a story. This was fantastic. Well written, funny, exceptionally detailed and of course the thoughts of Amanda herself. Brilliant! Hope to see more of this in the future!
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| LittleToy |
Posted: 2006/10/10 16:25 Updated: 2006/10/10 16:25 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/4/4 From: The Kingdom of Far Far Away Posts: 452 |
 lol Damnit JP, u really got me laughing at the end; didn't expect that. Great story
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| Storytellerxa |
Posted: 2006/10/2 16:49 Updated: 2006/10/2 16:49 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/26 From: Posts: 6 |
 SWEET! OMG THAT WAS AWSOME!
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| gardner1 |
Posted: 2006/10/1 10:29 Updated: 2006/10/1 10:29 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/10/1 From: indiana Posts: 2 |
 hottttttttt EXCELLANT
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| az |
Posted: 2006/9/5 13:48 Updated: 2006/9/5 13:48 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/5/30 From: California Posts: 233 |
 I'm laughing out loud! OMG!
That was an AWESOME ending! I was chuckling a very sexy chuckle to myself over this one. VERY good story, JP! You never fail to write anything but a GREAT story every time!
I love it.
AZ
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| Shalamar |
Posted: 2006/8/20 7:10 Updated: 2006/8/20 7:10 |
Flirt   Joined: 2005/11/20 From: auckland, New Zealand Posts: 22 |
 I love your stories That story totally ROCKED!!!! I got so horny reading it. Best thing is I have a massage booked for next week, I doubt it will be anywhere near as horny as that one though :-(
JP I could read you're stories over and over again
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| oxfordrhythm |
Posted: 2006/8/15 16:39 Updated: 2006/8/15 16:39 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/7/24 From: somwhere between church and state... Posts: 1862 |
 soooo slipery! Wow, That really got me hot, JP. Awesome story with a wonderful twist at the end.
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| Greedyandneedy |
Posted: 2006/8/5 17:58 Updated: 2006/8/5 17:58 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/10/29 From: UK, South East Posts: 499 |
 Nice wow.. I have to admit, when I see a 10 page story i'm often reluctant to get into it but this one was well worth the effort.
Great work.
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| preciousharlet |
Posted: 2006/7/31 23:59 Updated: 2006/7/31 23:59 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/10 From: antioch , tennessee Posts: 600 |
 love loved it NICE work
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| bloodaddict7 |
Posted: 2006/7/24 4:53 Updated: 2006/7/24 4:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/4/17 From: California Posts: 8 |
 WoW! This is the only way to describe this story and what it did to me... I couldn't help but pleasure myself...
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| kinkybint |
Posted: 2006/7/22 14:55 Updated: 2006/7/22 14:55 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/3/2 From: london Posts: 477 |
 x Great, amandas getting naughtier like your imagination JP x
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| italiankitty |
Posted: 2006/7/18 15:24 Updated: 2006/7/18 15:24 |
Chat Moderator   Joined: 2006/3/1 From: IL Posts: 765 |
 Mmmmmm This was such a fantastic story! It felt like I was really there...such great detail!! Keep it up, hun!!
xoxoxox,
kitty
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| lilieslaughing |
Posted: 2006/7/16 2:28 Updated: 2006/7/16 2:28 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/16 From: Oklahoma Posts: 3 |
 Awesome I LOVED this story!
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| Lillian2Yung |
Posted: 2006/7/12 12:59 Updated: 2006/7/12 12:59 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/2/5 From: The Low lands Posts: 655 |
 A JP FANTASTIC!!! Oh that was just bloody fantasic I can't tell you how much I enjoyed that! I should try that some time. Maybe the girls will be willing to play next time I'm going to go to work at the gym. I actually laughed out loud for a while at the end. Wonderful! Can't wait to see more of Amanda and I have to say I love the way you build the tension. Fantastic babe!!
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| cemmaes |
Posted: 2006/7/11 22:16 Updated: 2006/7/11 22:16 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/11/6 From: Red Sex Nation Posts: 693 |
 Execellent story! Awesome, Jonathan! Hot story pal!
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| Sarahhh |
Posted: 2006/7/11 15:21 Updated: 2006/7/11 15:21 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/12/3 From: Steelers country Posts: 296 |
 I need a massage! A good massage really gets me going. So does reading about one or hearing (ask Lilly) about one. Cute twist at the end, Jonathan. You made me smile at that. My other smile already smiled. Great story!
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| Persephone |
Posted: 2006/7/11 14:26 Updated: 2006/7/11 14:26 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2005/10/30 From: Posts: 842 |
 WOW!! amazing as always hun. you really do love detail dnt ya! lol loved it! :D
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