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  A Fantasy (1/8)  

99 votes
Author: Alexandra_M  Published: 6/28/2007  story views: 13806
 


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Louise’s heels click across the cobblestones in the courtyard. She stops for a moment to enjoy the view that usually manages to entrance her. The moonlight glitters on the silvery water as it cascades from the beautiful Venus’ marble hand into the bowl of the fountain below. On any other occasion she would linger and enjoy the sensuous touch of the cool water running over her wrist, enjoy the wonder of the moonlight sanctuary, but tonight, she was unsettled. She woke up this morning with the feeling that something was going to happen. Something utterly life changing, something she had not planned for. Louise hates not being in control, but as the youngest daughter in a long line of women with the gift, she has learned from a very early age to pay heed to her intuition.

 As she had awakened, her skin had been tingling, the nerve ends announcing their presence in no uncertain terms. Throughout the day, this feeling had intensified, until she was ready to scream, crawl out of her skin, anything if this would just stop. Actually it would have been strange if she were not caught up in this feeling of intense anticipation. Tonight she finally meets Craig face to face, and while she was trembling inside with excitement, she was also dreading the moment.

 She had met him in a chat-room, built a friendship that had seen her through some difficult situations and was ready to meet him and take it to the next level. The flirting and virtual sex, although incredible, was no longer enough. It left her feeling well satisfied but empty. She needs to see him, to get to know the language of his eyes, his body, his soul. She has to touch his essence. It felt strange though, meeting someone, when you’ve already been so intimate with that person, knowing his deepest thoughts as he knew hers and still be strangers. She hopes that they will fall into the easy camaraderie; they shared online, in real life as well.

 Coming to a stand in front of the bar’s heavy wooden door, Louise draws a deep breath and enters, searching the room until she finds him in the crowd. His blond hair was easy enough to spot and he looked just like the photo she has saved from one of their many conversations. Her eyes meet his, he must have been watching the entrance, and stepping down the stairs, she smiles.

 Craig stares, transfixed, as she moves toward him. Incapable of moving, he felt as if a hand has crushed his chest. “My God, she is beautiful,” he thinks, his light blue eyes glittering with excitement. The webcam has not done her justice. The air that comes alive with her warmth was not transmitted through the technology that has brought them together. He wants to sweep her away, there and then, jealous of sharing her with anyone, he wants to keep her somewhere safe, his own private source of light. “Whoa, where had that come from?” A little voice screamed in his head. “Hold your horses, she might not want anything but friendship.”

  Louise steps up to Craig and taking his hand in hers, her fingers caressing his, palm rubbing against palm, she leans into his body and kisses him softly on his lips. “Hallo lover. How are you?”

The ice broken, Craig, bends her arm, his hand still entwined with hers, around to her back and pulls her flush against him. Bringing her right up against his body, her breasts crushed against

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cook2069
Posted: 2010/2/26 0:17  Updated: 2010/2/26 0:17
Virgin
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 where is the end plzzzzzzzzzzz
just too good where is the end i need more plz
Pensuwana
Posted: 2009/4/22 9:58  Updated: 2009/4/22 9:58
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 oh my yes
very well written, thanks love, enjoyed it, so very much
CreamSugarxoxo
Posted: 2008/7/26 16:14  Updated: 2008/7/26 16:14
Virgin
Joined: 2008/7/17
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 Spicey
Sexy. I thought it was pretty hot. ;] fabulous job xoxox
handle1715
Posted: 2008/6/21 5:47  Updated: 2008/6/21 16:13
Virgin
Joined: 2008/4/29
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 Great Going
incredible story intermingled with beautiful words and the most amazing aspect of this fantasy is that you never broke the tempo, the more i am getting close and knowing you more and more i am admiring you well done alex keep it up.
jtweety
Posted: 2008/4/19 1:38  Updated: 2008/4/19 1:38
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/9/27
From: Morgan Hill, CA
Posts: 193
 That can't possibly be the end ..
.. the night is young and they've only just begun, the first release is the hottest but my mind is whirling with images and my body is begging for more. I love it. Your words reach out and grab the reader, seduce them, tease them, torment them, pleasure them and always always leave them wanting more. Thank you.
Demich
Posted: 2008/3/2 20:43  Updated: 2008/3/2 20:43
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 A Fantasy
Great story.Ienjoyed it very much.
Astrial Whispers
Posted: 2007/12/30 18:06  Updated: 2007/12/30 18:06
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/5/18
From: International Library of Lusty Stories
Posts: 108
 YEAUS!!
THATS what I am looking for in a relationship!!
belle_angelique
Posted: 2007/10/27 19:21  Updated: 2007/10/27 19:21
Virgin
Joined: 2007/10/27
From: New Jersey
Posts: 5
 oh my...
well done, i actually have an online lover and well, this story makes me want to meet him this moment... i actually think i'm going to call him and read this to him... wonderful!
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/10/17 6:54  Updated: 2007/10/17 6:54
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: Damn Good
Thank you Nigel, I have just posted a new one, so keep an eye out!
Nigel
Posted: 2007/10/4 2:44  Updated: 2007/10/4 2:44
Virgin
Joined: 2007/10/3
From: South Africa
Posts: 3
 Damn Good
THat was an awesome story, real art. It really took my mind to another place. I guess that the story is a fantasy of yours, I hope it comes true for you if it hasnt already. lol, cant wait for more...
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/7/23 13:02  Updated: 2007/7/23 13:02
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
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 Re: A Fantasy
Vince; Thank you so much for that comment. You know no matter where our paths leads us, you will always have a place in my heart. Love Alexa
vinciblesatyr
Posted: 2007/7/16 18:54  Updated: 2007/7/16 18:54
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/12/2
From: Maryland
Posts: 71
 A Fantasy
Alexa, I have read this over and over again and cannot get over the heat you generate between these two lovers. Oh, I wish I were Craig and you owned that little house in the garden. You have captured the true essence of desire and the true expression of that desire in two perfect lovers. Thank you for sharing what I have thought but cannot express so well all my life! Vince
Lee
Posted: 2007/7/8 16:49  Updated: 2007/7/8 16:49
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/10/25
From: Chicago
Posts: 95
 Online Lovers
Alexa sweetheart! I can honestly say that I have never - EVER read a story as well written as this! It has passion plus, great vocabulary, and romance! I am now wondering how many Lit Classes you have taken in collage??? You made the hair on the back of my neck stand up on end! When you write your next story, be sure to let me know when you get it posted! I will want to read it too! Great job sweetheart! Lee
Mambo_king
Posted: 2007/7/8 10:30  Updated: 2007/7/8 10:30
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/6/4
From: Somewhere in the ether
Posts: 50
 HOT very HOT
Very good story Alexandra. Always loved the fantasy that you described, maybe some day. In the meantime I have your story.
Wabbit
Posted: 2007/7/4 21:06  Updated: 2007/7/4 21:06
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/23
From: In the shadows
Posts: 1098
 Lovely Lovely Girl.....
What a wonderfully hot story! You truely are a great writer! Hot and sweltering Babes! Thanks so much! Kisses
poleman
Posted: 2007/7/2 9:11  Updated: 2007/7/2 9:11
Virgin
Joined: 2006/7/18
From: Sitting down
Posts: 20
 awesome...
Sounds so real and inviting. Some one making you melt with desire and lust.
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 18:22  Updated: 2007/6/30 18:22
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: Bravo
Ah thank you MM, you always encourage my efforts, Love Alexa
monkeyman123
Posted: 2007/6/30 18:12  Updated: 2007/6/30 18:12
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/1
From: uk
Posts: 203
 Bravo
Alexa, that was a wonderful story babe cant wait for the next one. MM
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 11:39  Updated: 2007/6/30 11:39
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: Need to listen to this one out loud!
Porch I haven't recorded a story yet, I'll try to write one like a play and record it. Love Alexa
PorchLightOn
Posted: 2007/6/30 10:58  Updated: 2007/6/30 10:58
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/4/11
From: Between seasons
Posts: 61
 Need to listen to this one out loud!
Excellent story Alexa, loved reading it, loved it more the second time. Had to close my office door while I went over it verrrry slowly. ;-) Any chance you'd record yourself reading it out loud?
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 7:27  Updated: 2007/6/30 7:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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From: East of the Moon
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 Re: very good
Ty Shazzy, your good wishes are appreciated Alexa
shazzy
Posted: 2007/6/30 7:14  Updated: 2007/6/30 7:14
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 very good
truly scrumtious alexa,i look forward o your next,well done hun,xx
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 4:01  Updated: 2007/6/30 4:01
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: phew!
Thank you Wander, from the bottom of my heart, you know how much writing this has meant to me! Love Alexa
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 3:57  Updated: 2007/6/30 3:57
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: Very sensual
Ah thank you Mac for the constructive criticism. I have trouble expressing the male point of view, true. I would love your input on the next one. Love Alexa
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 3:55  Updated: 2007/6/30 3:55
Lusty Librarian's Pet
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 Re: A masterpiece...
Thanks Sitterlass, I tried to capture the emotion. Alexa
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 3:53  Updated: 2007/6/30 3:53
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: ok so I was wrong
See I told you, I've got a few good moments Alexa
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 3:50  Updated: 2007/6/30 3:50
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
Posts: 1372
 Re: omg
Thank You Dragongirl. I will try my best to continue Alexa
Alexandra_M
Posted: 2007/6/30 3:48  Updated: 2007/6/30 3:48
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/16
From: East of the Moon
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 Re: wow
Thank you Gemma, I appreciate the support Love Alexa
wanderedhere
Posted: 2007/6/29 7:50  Updated: 2007/6/29 7:50
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From: I'm not sure, what day is it?
Posts: 375
 phew!
A well-written story that had me going from the start. Very descriptive and oh-so hot. Well done!
MacBoon
Posted: 2007/6/28 23:26  Updated: 2007/6/28 23:27
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/9
From: Midwest, USA
Posts: 211
 Very sensual
Hardly a false note. What is best is feeling what Louise feels, what louise wants and does... lovely, excruciatingly delicious ending. Alexa, you capture the essence of the making love -- it is the building excitement and pleasing the partner that swells to the big O, not just repetitive thrusting... sweet! The male in your story, however, is a puzzle. He starts as premptory, "open for me Baby" in a parking lot. But then becomes curiously mute and quasi-passive in the end. Louise has to guess why he doesn't thrust inside her. Of course she gueses correctly but I wished the male was more active... it is his presence that makes Louise pleasure herself with his entry only occuring at the last minute after assisting louise with her clitoral ministrations. Louise is exquisite but Craig could use some development, indeed a lesson or two.
sitterlass
Posted: 2007/6/28 20:21  Updated: 2007/6/28 20:21
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/3/31
From: New Hampshire
Posts: 108
 A masterpiece...
of description, emotion, pulling me to the heat of the story and not letting go til the end....Lass
master_swordsman
Posted: 2007/6/28 17:42  Updated: 2007/6/28 17:42
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/3/15
From: Maryland
Posts: 95
 ok so I was wrong
hot damn alexa great story you are a definate talented writer I hope to see plenty more from you..now if you excuse me...ummm....my business just called...yes thats it my business
dragongirl0076
Posted: 2007/6/28 17:09  Updated: 2007/6/28 17:09
Bookworm
Joined: 2007/5/27
From: in the middle of my worst nightmare
Posts: 135
 omg
that was a great story. you truly hit the mark when you wrote this one.
Gemstone
Posted: 2007/6/28 14:18  Updated: 2007/6/28 14:18
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 wow
Alexa, I loved it you are truly talented. Well done. Gem xx