He shakes. The sound is muffled by his palm and grasping fingers. Inside the vessel they chime together, but outside ears receive only the wide peaks and troughs of the particular wavelengths that are able to escape. A millisecond's prestidigitation and they are free - bouncing joyously and noisily across the coffee-table top. His eyes follow them till their dance ends.
'Four and... three... seven,' he announces. The intrinsic magic of the number hides behind his disappointment; he'd hoped for more.
With her cupped right hand she shepherds them over the hard, elliptical surface till they fall off the edge and into the plastic cup he has just tossed to her. Raising it to her lips she blows on them for luck, oscillating her eyebrows like Groucho used to, eyes smiling mischievously. A series of quick up and down movements of the arm and away the spotted cubes race again. Now both their eyes are locked on them. Six... the other one still tumbles, finally coming to rest, precariously hanging over the edge.
'Oooh, that was lucky... if it goes on the floor it doesn't count, yer know?’
'What, it doesn't count at all? Yer can't shake it again?'
'No. Not in this game... anyway, I need you to save that wrist action for later,' and he sniggers. 'You win anyway. What will it be for starters?'
Her eyes had floated to the ceiling at his dirty comment, but his question pulls them back down to his face and they focus their hazel rays on him. She looks him over, in mock leering. He sits cross-legged on the floor; outwardly as serene as a yogi, hands on knees, waiting patiently as she chooses her booty in this battle of probability.
'Sock!'
He slowly, resignedly, sticks out one leg; she grabs the black woolly tip and pulls. It stretches, resists, then slowly starts to move, sliding down his shin and ankle, accelerating over arch and finally toes, to freedom. She holds up the trophy at arm's length, in faux disgust, then casts it carelessly over her shoulder.
'Your throw,' she says, passing him the cup with its recaptured occupants.
Shake, rattle, roll.
'Double-five! Beat that! Ha! ...It’s a magic number!' His fist is raised in triumph.
'Magic number...?'
'Oh... yeah, I forgot to say, there are 'magic numbers' in this game, and that's one of them - that throw gives you the right to kiss the other person anywhere you like - it's the only time in the game we can touch.'
'What?' She feigns outrage to start with, but then she realises he means it. 'We can't touch till the end, unless one of us shakes a ten? I've waited an age to get you here to myself and we have to play this... this game?'
Thanks for your lovely comment. The story did take me ages and just kept growing.
Hope you enjoy my other tales if you manage to find the time. Thanks again X
You may be a lover but you are a writer too. I love the characters you have created
and can't wait to read something else by you. Thank you for taking so much care
over your piece. Few do. Dulci
For my own part, it took me so long to read your story because I'm so darn lazy
with online reading. Once your reputation grows people will be lining up to read
your stories. Poor Emily! Though I'm am certainly glad that for the story's sake
that the twist came up. You took an all too common senario for online romance
and built a fine story around it. And the part with the sizzors was hot! This
story is the perfect length.
Thanks for such a great comment. It's only my first post and I haven't had the
time to read and comment on other people's work here, which can help get yourself
noticed. Don't think I've upset anyone... Thanks again.
.. that this story does not have more comments and/or votes - did you do something
to upset almost everyone before you posted it? ;) I liked it a lot, it's well
written, has an interesting background, there are several nice twists, involves
games, (which I love), and it really reminded me of someone I once knew and makes
many connections from my past. Well done :)
Thanks for a lovely comment. I've submitted three here - only one accepted so
far... and it's taken weeks! The worth has been worth it. I post as Imalovernotawriter
at another site... a quick google should turn that up if you'd like to read more
without the wait. Sorry about your new single status - I'm sure it won't last
for long x Thanks again
that was completely and utterly amazing. at first i was nervous, because when
stories get that long they usually get redundant, and i can't get past page 9
or so. there was no redundancy in yours at all. i usually try to come up with
at least semi intelligent comments. but i can't on yours. it's over my realm
of critique. i'll come back later and write a comment after my brain has calmed
down that will hopefully be more intelligent than this one. i'm sorry that i
can't manage it right now. but really, that was unbelievable. i've never gotten
this worked up from a story before, only a book. it actually made me cry. of
course i got dumped today so crying comes easily. but still. that really was
so completely amazing. i am about to go to your profile and read others, because
if they're as good as this one, they deserve to be put in a book. i hope that
this one gets story of the year. it deserves it.