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| Bigbarrie |
Posted: 2010/1/9 19:55 Updated: 2010/1/9 19:55 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Sydney Australia Posts: 4 |
 Very Arousing and enjoyable I really enjoyed your story - It was easy to imagine the happenings as you described
so visibly. I have only participated in a threesome but would love to be one
of several guys enjoying my partner being pleasured. Please submit more stories
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| DBraxt |
Posted: 2009/7/24 21:46 Updated: 2009/7/24 21:46 |
Virgin   Joined: 2009/7/24 From: Posts: 13 |
 moaan great story just made a mess with this one keep them comming
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| Lady O |
Posted: 2008/12/16 21:43 Updated: 2008/12/16 21:43 |
Flirt   Joined: 2008/9/8 From: California Posts: 30 |
 Woah Lol, I could take em. Damn that was lovely to read, made me so wet my panties
are soaked. I cannot wait to read more of you writing. Lady O
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| greywolf66 |
Posted: 2008/11/17 14:20 Updated: 2008/11/17 14:20 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/10/22 From: Posts: 6 |
 Some Comments Lisa, Actually the more over the top the better in these stories. This one was
pretty much where it needed to be for a first time gang bang. Not too many times
in each "hole" that might be pushed to be a bit much. Most importantly you seem
to be aware of the physical limitations of multiple penetrations. I've read some
of these where it sounded like guys were doing the woman anally and in her cunt
but both were on top. Now I don't think that would be impossible but it would
be tough for most normal people. Anyway good work.
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| soft wet vixen |
Posted: 2008/10/26 1:50 Updated: 2008/10/26 1:50 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/10/25 From: Posts: 6 |
 Favorite so far I keep coming (and cumming) back to this story. Do something like this in real
life? No. But this is so vivid, it's close enough. Nice work, hope to read more
of your stuff.
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| jtweety |
Posted: 2008/4/19 3:01 Updated: 2008/4/19 3:01 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/9/27 From: Morgan Hill, CA Posts: 193 |
 O M G This took me a little over an hour to read thru ... not because I'm a slow reader
but because I had to keep stopping to maturbate and cum. Cum I did many times
... I even got brave and used 2 toys at once for double penetration ... so much
fun. Thanks for making the passion and hot lust jump right off the page. Extreme
fantasy in the making, my dreams will be extra hot tonight. Loved it, absolutely
loved it, thanks again!!
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| rosekies |
Posted: 2008/2/27 1:45 Updated: 2008/2/27 1:45 |
Virgin   Joined: 2008/2/24 From: Posts: 9 |
 i am so wet This story made me very wet! Keep up the good work!
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| 1randombeauty |
Posted: 2007/11/20 20:15 Updated: 2007/11/20 21:24 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/6/19 From: Posts: 490 |
 Imagining I was imagining my wife being Alice and it got me so incredibly hot. I am going
to share this story with her for sure. Thank you very much - what a great read!
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| shad0ww0lf25 |
Posted: 2007/11/3 23:52 Updated: 2007/11/3 23:52 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2007/5/24 From: Nederland, Texas Posts: 47 |
 Nice! It was a very well written story, I very much enjoyed it. And instead of turning
away b/c it was so long it made me read on which I usully don't do. Keep up the
good writing :)
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| 65daysofsex |
Posted: 2007/9/30 19:35 Updated: 2007/9/30 19:35 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/5 From: England Posts: 19 |
 Great Story! Absolutly fabulous story! Well done =) I've gotta say though; i couldnt ever
do something like that for my girl. I get too jealous; it'd kill me haha! Good
fun to imagine it though ;) Well written, and good build up. The 65
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| wet4ever |
Posted: 2007/9/21 15:48 Updated: 2007/9/21 15:48 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/8/28 From: Posts: 11 |
 OMG i just had 3 orgasms. 2 in a row which was a first for me. awesome job
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| want2bebad |
Posted: 2007/8/8 16:07 Updated: 2007/8/8 16:07 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/8/7 From: Posts: 23 |
 mmmmmmmmmmm........ Where can I sign up for that club??? That was a great story - I'm horny as hell
now!
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| bushhappy |
Posted: 2007/7/21 19:17 Updated: 2007/7/21 19:17 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/7/21 From: Posts: 1 |
 nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! realy enjoyed the story cant wait to show it to thegirlfriend well done!!
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| sex_on_legs |
Posted: 2007/6/30 1:21 Updated: 2007/6/30 1:21 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/6/26 From: Posts: 7 |
 Great Story that was a fuck amazing story im dripping wet now! it has long been my fantasy
to have a gang bang! i want it even more now!
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| noimaginationsoborrowsurs |
Posted: 2007/6/18 22:19 Updated: 2007/6/18 22:19 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/6/17 From: North Carolina Posts: 84 |
 that got me SO wet! I'm going to pull my husband away from WoW to fuck the hell out of me now...and
if he refuses...well, that's what massaging shower heads are for!
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| Montana Norman |
Posted: 2007/6/14 22:29 Updated: 2007/6/14 22:29 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/6/11 From: Dallas Texas Posts: 862 |
 Very HOT and Steamy This is Mrs. Norman and I love the whole premise, but I don't think Alice would
remember whose cock was where for so long. I've done three at once and got confused.
LOL....Great imagination, that sounds like a great group and maybe someday your
fantasy will come true!!!!
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| Priv8 Dancer |
Posted: 2007/5/26 21:35 Updated: 2007/5/26 21:35 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/12 From: Va/NC USA Posts: 3 |
 I read the ending using my vibrator!! Great story! It made me so hot I had to cum too.
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2007/5/15 9:17 Updated: 2007/5/15 9:17 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :) Posts: 5310 |
 SUPER WENCH "STRIKES AGAIN !" Great Story Hun! Set this up for my wife. But, let me watch! The only thing better
than this story, is that great pic in your avitar !! :)(: Licks 2 U ! Jim
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| Luv2 |
Posted: 2007/5/15 9:13 Updated: 2007/5/15 9:13 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/7 From: "HE'S BACK !!!" :) Posts: 5310 |
 Re: Needs more connection I think you need to change your name to>>> " A-troll !" Then go back under your
rock.
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| Priv8 Dancer |
Posted: 2007/5/12 23:13 Updated: 2007/5/12 23:13 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/5/12 From: Va/NC USA Posts: 3 |
 I'm so wet now!!! I wish I could get my husband to set up something like this for me. Very hot!!!!
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| geobob |
Posted: 2007/4/19 13:03 Updated: 2007/4/19 13:03 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2007/4/16 From: San Marcos, Tx Posts: 253 |
 A Gang of Friends way to go. wench, a great hot story
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| atoll7 |
Posted: 2007/4/17 13:03 Updated: 2007/4/17 13:03 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/14 From: USA Posts: 20 |
 Needs more connection To me, this was a rather mechanically written short story, with very little
believability. Why would a bunch of men agree to the group sex scheme jus
t as a favor to someone? It's not quite clear to me why you wrote it in su
ch a dispassionate way.
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| lutheraltego64 |
Posted: 2007/3/27 20:42 Updated: 2007/3/27 20:42 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/3/7 From: Northeastern Ohio Posts: 3 |
 hottest story I have read yet! You have a keen sense of detail and use of descriptive words and phrases to
get your point across. I can only hope to achieve the positive input you h
ave generated for yourself.
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| aussiewickedlibrarian |
Posted: 2007/2/17 23:17 Updated: 2007/2/17 23:20 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/2/17 From: Sydney Posts: 11 |
 Mmmmmmmm very hot What a great story.... a bit rougher would have been nice, but the idea of
a "safe" gang bang was fantastic..... only problem..... you didnt tell u
s the website to contact the group to arrange one for me.
Others commented they were going away to play? Im staying right here to
play and reading it again..... keep up the good writing .................
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smiles
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| coycarp |
Posted: 2007/2/17 13:43 Updated: 2007/2/17 13:43 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2007/2/12 From: Drifting Posts: 125 |
 ummm :) Nice work. Keep writing. x
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| woozer69 |
Posted: 2007/1/22 6:04 Updated: 2007/1/22 6:04 |
Flirt   Joined: 2007/1/7 From: UK Posts: 25 |
 Hot ! My god this story was amazing - had me squirming whilst reading and now I have to go play........... More please xxx
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| myslutwifeshawna |
Posted: 2007/1/21 21:32 Updated: 2007/1/21 21:46 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/17 From: USA Posts: 3 |
 Daaaaaaaamn! We like the way you think!! All the forplay and pampering before the rough sex has Shawna wanting an explanation as to why HER gangbangs have never included such treatment. Very hot, great detail and imagination. It could only be hotter if it were true. *Thomas* (& Shawna)
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| Ineedu |
Posted: 2007/1/11 8:19 Updated: 2007/1/11 8:19 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/11 From: Maine Posts: 1 |
 oh my This is a great story I love it it is my fantasy to be Alice.You did a great job!!!
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| njgirl0863@yahoo.com |
Posted: 2007/1/6 20:49 Updated: 2007/1/6 20:49 |
Virgin   Joined: 2007/1/6 From: Somewhere in New Jersey Posts: 1 |
 Re: Hot Hot Hot every woman's fantasy, I know it is one of mine and your story made my pussy squirt. I would really love to experience this for real. I am unattached but a bit nervous and afraid. Any suggestions anyone? Anyone know of anything in the nj area?
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| Stitchless |
Posted: 2007/1/6 16:21 Updated: 2007/1/6 16:21 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/10/15 From: Where told to be Posts: 74 |
 Hot Hot Hot I felt like I was there. Wonderfully descriptive. I could see every detail.
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| Mz_Seductress |
Posted: 2006/12/30 3:01 Updated: 2006/12/30 3:01 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/8/15 From: Posts: 42 |
 Great Work This is one of my fantasies to be gang-banged an upon reading this I got some more ideas. I just hope my experience would be as pleasurable as this one. I cannot wait to set up my session with my frens.
Keep up the good works.
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| lordandlady |
Posted: 2006/12/24 22:39 Updated: 2006/12/24 22:39 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/12/19 From: UK Posts: 690 |
 *purrrs* wow just wow, that was simply amazing, now i'm even more hot and bothered then i was earlier, i think maybe that might have to be taken care of now, can't wait to read another one
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| buckminster |
Posted: 2006/12/17 10:53 Updated: 2006/12/17 10:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/12/17 From: SoCal Posts: 6 |
 Re: Feedback & Critism You're an excellent wordsmith and the story is well crafted. My only criticism is there was too much time spent on the set up. I found myself skipping ahead. Now maybe this a guy vs gurl issue -- you know how us guys are --
buck
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| lonleymum |
Posted: 2006/12/15 3:20 Updated: 2006/12/15 3:20 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/7/7 From: Manitoba, Canada Posts: 81 |
 got me really hot by the first page i was already touching my pussy, in the middle of the story i was sitting on a mounted 9 inch dildo which was very thick and by the end of the story there was another dildo up my ass!.............................i love this story and i wish i was alice!
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| lilrobinrobin |
Posted: 2006/12/14 17:23 Updated: 2006/12/14 17:23 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/12/14 From: Houston Posts: 7 |
 A gang of friends Wow, I have always had this fantasy and have never found enough guts to follow through but the idea that there is a group of people that would be will to do this with me would be soooooo great! Thanks for the reading fun and more!
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| catbirdkh |
Posted: 2006/12/11 14:57 Updated: 2006/12/11 14:57 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/12/11 From: Posts: 17 |
 Re: Ride of a Lifetime!! whew----That was a sopisticated ''gang bang''.
No holds / cocks / pussey barred. Nicely done
with no roughness, but pleasureful. Than you---
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| soupman131 |
Posted: 2006/12/5 1:46 Updated: 2006/12/5 1:46 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/9/5 From: Indiana Posts: 1 |
 Ride of a Lifetime!! I enjoyed this story!! I felt like I was a bug on the wall, taking it all in and enjoying the fun and games!!
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| devle |
Posted: 2006/11/19 16:16 Updated: 2006/11/19 16:16 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/11/2 From: las vegas nevada Posts: 2 |
 WOW absolutly amazing
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| perfectgentleman |
Posted: 2006/11/4 22:33 Updated: 2006/11/4 22:33 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/11/3 From: California Posts: 74 |
 What a story! This got me harder than anything else i've read here.
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| trishtits55 |
Posted: 2006/10/22 4:54 Updated: 2006/10/22 4:54 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/4/14 From: Posts: 7 |
 wow i am amazed by ur greatness
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| vinniec |
Posted: 2006/10/15 20:07 Updated: 2006/10/15 20:07 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/10/14 From: Downingtown, PA Posts: 5 |
 A Gang of Friends WOWWWWW! Very believable; something to be seen if only it were a video.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/9/27 6:55 Updated: 2006/9/27 6:55 |
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 Brilliant This is fantastic, amazing detail, while allowing the full picture clear view, i myself hve always want to do this, you've managed to open up a hole in the secrets of a womans' desire. As i said fantastic, work, i'd love to see more..
Siren xxx
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| ladysgirl |
Posted: 2006/9/26 13:27 Updated: 2006/9/26 13:27 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/9/26 From: Georgia Posts: 3 |
 that was... totally amazing. gonna have to stop for the day before i squirt everywhere!!
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| sabin |
Posted: 2006/9/3 20:47 Updated: 2006/9/3 20:47 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/21 From: kent ohio Posts: 2 |
 great cumming wow , that was hot, made my cock so hard by the end i was shooting a hot load all over my lap, and kept stroking for more. cant wait for your next one.
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| sweet dreamer |
Posted: 2006/9/2 7:46 Updated: 2006/9/2 7:46 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/8/3 From: england Posts: 34 |
 Sweet Dreamer oh my god. Loved it. You have a great style for writting and what a night she had. Like alot of wives my hubby woluld never agree to letting me do something like that but i have always fancied the idea of to guys, so five is like all my christmas'es coming at once. Great job!
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| Dittohead |
Posted: 2006/7/30 2:00 Updated: 2006/7/30 2:00 |
Up and Comer   Joined: 2006/7/20 From: Posts: 48 |
 Wow Just wow
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| Busty9413 |
Posted: 2006/7/16 1:19 Updated: 2006/7/16 1:19 |
Flirt   Joined: 2006/7/14 From: Posts: 30 |
 Loved it! I loved it! Would love for my husband to set something like that up for me! My pussy is dripping wet and I can't help but finger fuck myself while reading your story. Great work, very descriptive. Kept me reading to find out what was gonna happen next.
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| tessalynne |
Posted: 2006/7/15 21:02 Updated: 2006/7/15 21:02 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/15 From: midwest Posts: 2 |
 uuuuuummmmmmmmm i am jealous. not only of your ability to tell a story, but of not being the woman in it. now i am all hot and bothered and will have to take care of it myself.
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| cabinboy |
Posted: 2006/7/15 9:24 Updated: 2006/7/15 9:24 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/1/21 From: Great Britain Posts: 4521 |
 Nice work Toby i loved this, real nice job. Sounds like a cunning plan to me.
Edmond!
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| IWish |
Posted: 2006/7/7 7:02 Updated: 2006/7/7 7:02 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/7/7 From: Missouri Posts: 1 |
 GREAT STORY! This was an awsome story! If only my old man was into this like I am!!
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| Erinna1112 |
Posted: 2006/7/6 12:37 Updated: 2006/7/6 12:37 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/27 From: Midwest Posts: 1 |
 Re: Feedback & Critism LOL...it's not more than one person can handle...I've done it. You're right that the woman in question can't move...she simply lies there and lets herself be used....but gods, it's fun :)
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| pbkeeper |
Posted: 2006/7/2 8:41 Updated: 2006/7/2 8:41 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/6/18 From: England Posts: 267 |
 Did you read my mind?? You have such a great descriptive way of writing...lots of detail.. I loved that. It was like my one of own fantasies described as I would like it for me!
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| Sexxy Gurl |
Posted: 2006/6/25 15:22 Updated: 2006/6/25 15:22 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/6/25 From: Phoenix, AZ Posts: 7 |
 Yessssssssssss! great story by a great writer. this is one of my fave fantasies. i wish i could tell my hubby. i want this to happen for real.
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| LittleToy |
Posted: 2006/6/22 13:12 Updated: 2006/6/22 13:12 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/4/4 From: The Kingdom of Far Far Away Posts: 452 |
 oh!!!!! i more than love this one. good work
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| Skipper1974 |
Posted: 2006/6/16 20:33 Updated: 2006/6/16 20:33 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/2/12 From: San Diego, CA Posts: 167 |
 ohh Makes me want to experience this with you! Soo vivid! So real...I thought it could have been more rougher, more animal....but overall, Awesome!
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| az |
Posted: 2006/6/1 13:34 Updated: 2006/6/1 13:35 |
Lusty Librarian's Pet   Joined: 2006/5/30 From: California Posts: 233 |
 Gang of Friends hhhmmmmm....
gave me great visuals to use in the future! for fantasizing of course!
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| squeefluff |
Posted: 2006/5/25 15:53 Updated: 2006/5/25 15:53 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/3/6 From: England Posts: 6 |
 yum really really really liked this one
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/5/25 9:34 Updated: 2006/5/25 9:34 |
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 oh my god im cumming oh my god im so horny im home alone writhing on a pillow and my own hand reading this story thinking of my boyfriend and wishing i could have a gang bang fest like alice my fingers are deep inside myself and im imagining 2 men fucking me in both holes like greg and hank and philip this was an amazing experience that has made me cum, ohmygod
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/5/24 13:13 Updated: 2006/5/24 13:13 |
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 I am so horny now.. Reading that story has made me so fucking horny. I've taken off my shirt, my D cup tits are swollen, my nips are hard as steel, and my cunt is throbbing and dripping .... oh fuck.. I need to go.. or should I say I need to cum.... ;-)
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/5/13 6:52 Updated: 2006/5/13 6:52 |
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 big stiff cock fuck me that's one steamy story, if only i knew a woman that would take five cocks.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/5/10 16:07 Updated: 2006/5/10 16:07 |
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 Great Story I have always dreamed of a gang bang but my husband isn't into it. Maybe he could read this and get the idea that he doesn't have to be there and maybe get a group of his party buddies together to help me with my fantasy. I am so excited with this story that I can't wait until my husband reads it and hopefully thinks about it.
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| lexie |
Posted: 2006/5/6 19:51 Updated: 2006/5/6 19:51 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/6 From: Posts: 1 |
 Every woman's dream A great read. Any woman would love her husband to organise a night like that. I know I would. Can't wait for another from you
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| Almarien |
Posted: 2006/5/5 6:59 Updated: 2006/5/5 6:59 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/5 From: Posts: 5 |
 amazing would love that to happen to me
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| NC_Angel |
Posted: 2006/5/3 20:37 Updated: 2006/5/3 20:37 |
Virgin   Joined: 2006/5/3 From: Posts: 1 |
 WOW You are right - it is probably more than one person can handle - but - WOW - what a story.
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/4/24 11:15 Updated: 2006/4/24 11:15 |
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 A gang of friends Agood well written story, Iliked the way each man played his sexual role, my only criticism was the lack of reaction as the girl was confronted with a variety of experiences
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| Anonymous |
Posted: 2006/4/24 9:38 Updated: 2006/4/24 9:38 |
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 lusty library great story i wish my wife could let herself go, and try this i know she would love it !!!!!!
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| CBW |
Posted: 2006/4/24 7:55 Updated: 2006/4/24 7:55 |
Flirt   Joined: 2005/12/14 From: Northumberland Posts: 21 |
 Wow Wench, you have a gift for a story. I really liked this one, perhaps more than 'Valentines' Day'. Great build up, leading us gently through.
I have one comment to make though, as a gang bang - you could have perhaps made it a little rougher!
However I wasn't complaining by the end!
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| Wench Lisa |
Posted: 2006/4/19 16:17 Updated: 2006/4/19 16:18 |
Bookworm   Joined: 2006/2/12 From: Pacific Northwest, USA Posts: 123 |
 Feedback & Critism Please feel free to comment on my writing, I am interested in learning and getting better. I do realize this story is a little over the top and more than a real person could actually accomplish, but it was darn fun to imagine!!
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