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Straight: Orgies and Gangbangs:
  Amber Gets a Treat (1/4)  

212 votes
Author: gnarlygirl  Published: 10/4/2006  story views: 105259
 


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Halloween was finally here. Amber was so excited. Chris said he was going to take her to a very special Halloween party. He told her to wear a sexy costume. So she found an I Dream of Jennie custom on EBay. She couldn’t wait to see his eye’s pop out. Her midriff was exposed, and she had worn a sparkly belly button ring that looked like sparks of fire as it glinted in the light. The sheer legs hid nothing, and she had worn a small pink thong under. She admired herself in the mirror while waiting for Chris to show. Her blond hair was on a knot on her head, and she had chosen not to wear the veils over her face. Her full lips and curvy body made her look sexalicious if she did say so herself. When the doorbell rang, she wasn’t prepared for the beefcake on the other side. Chris was dressed as an exotic dancer. His body glistened with some body oil, and his groin was barely covered with a pair of boxers that said hunk on the back. She was glad it was warm out tonight; otherwise they’d both freeze to death.

“Are you sure you want to go to this party? We could just stay here, and you could put on a show for me,” Amber purred.

“Come on Amber you promised, and I promise you’ll like this party,” he replied.

Sighing, she allowed him to lead her to his car sure every eye in the building was on them as they left. Seeing nosy Mrs. Keetcher peering out her door, Amber purposely rubbed up against Chris, laughing as the door was quickly slammed closed.

“Where are we going Chris?” Amber asked.

“You promised you wouldn’t ask. It’s a surprise.”

She didn’t say another word for the whole trip. Her eyes did light up in surprise as they turned off at the Steele Mansion. The place was huge. She’d never been, but had heard about the wild parties thrown there by invitation only. She’d known Chris was working for one of the companies run by Steele, but he’d never been invited before. Her heart raced as she remembered some of the more racy tales she had heard about this place. Of course it was all rumors right? She tried to convince herself of that as they drove up a long driveway that was lined with huge golden cages. In each cage was a lovely lady wearing nothing but body paint to resemble some jungle animal. There were jaguars, lions, tigers, monkeys, snakes, lizards, and she even saw one that looked like a parrot complete with feathers. Those were just the ladies she got a glimpse of as they drove past. As soon as they parked, a parking attendant helped her out, and as soon as Chris was out the car whisked out of sight up the long driveway to be parked behind a dozen others further down the driveway.

“Chris what are we doing here?” Amber hissed. “We don’t belong in this crowd.”

“Mr. Steele saw your picture on my desk one day when he was visiting our office. He personally invited us. You think I dared say no?” Chris responded.

That made sense so Amber squared her shoulders determined to make the best of it. They went in to an opulent front room. A huge crystal chandelier hung down from the ceiling. As they progressed further in, they followed the crowd to a huge ballroom with a live band playing upbeat music. More ladies with nothing but body paint floated among the guests with lavish trays of

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Total Votes: 212
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morgan1
Posted: 2009/10/21 15:13  Updated: 2009/10/21 15:13
Virgin
Joined: 2006/12/22
From: here
Posts: 8
 orgies and gang bang bangs..amber gets a treat
well written and so very hot. One of my dreams i have yet to live...very sexy.
Kimber Leigh
Posted: 2009/10/17 20:23  Updated: 2009/10/17 20:23
Virgin
Joined: 2009/10/10
From: Canada
Posts: 4
 wow!
When I started reading this story, I was not expecting to end with two woman. Normally that damps my interest but this story was hot! I agree with the others. I'd love to see more stories about Nick's special VIP dungeon.
Kimber Leigh
Posted: 2009/10/17 20:22  Updated: 2009/10/17 20:22
Virgin
Joined: 2009/10/10
From: Canada
Posts: 4
 wow!
When I started reading this story, I was not expecting to end with two woman. Normally that damps my interest but this story was hot! I agree with the others. I'd love to see more stories about Nick's special VIP dungeon.
Pensuwana
Posted: 2009/3/22 9:05  Updated: 2009/3/22 9:05
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/1/19
From: In a lustful state of erotic delirium
Posts: 3214
 good writing
very good, enjoyed this soooo much
Owned_slave
Posted: 2008/9/14 15:27  Updated: 2008/9/14 15:27
Virgin
Joined: 2008/9/1
From:
Posts: 11
 good but
it needed some more. but a very hot start
Coyote
Posted: 2008/5/15 12:17  Updated: 2008/5/15 12:17
Up and Comer
Joined: 2006/4/30
From: Windsor, Ont, Canada
Posts: 49
 Blazing
Thats the best rating I could give it unfortunately the scale goes no higher. Please dont leave us hanging, your descriptiveness is amazing. I could see everything as it happened. Waiting for parts 2,3 and 4.......this story could turn into a book if done right
KdotS65
Posted: 2008/3/8 2:51  Updated: 2008/3/8 2:51
Virgin
Joined: 2007/12/9
From:
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 More
amazing, but more please!
1randombeauty
Posted: 2008/2/29 13:55  Updated: 2008/2/29 13:55
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/6/19
From:
Posts: 490
 very hot, but...
that was awesome but dropped too fast. very great - looking forward to part 2.
ghostwords
Posted: 2007/10/14 12:07  Updated: 2007/10/14 12:07
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/8/8
From:
Posts: 234
 Ends too abruptly
She'd barely started cumming than she was going. Let's follow them home - and also find out what her husband gets up to back at the party.
Kismet
Posted: 2007/10/1 22:39  Updated: 2007/10/1 22:39
Virgin
Joined: 2007/6/28
From: United States
Posts: 2
 Wow!
very nice, I love it.
Starlight
Posted: 2007/9/7 4:22  Updated: 2007/9/7 4:22
Virgin
Joined: 2007/9/5
From:
Posts: 7
 Marvellous
The thing with a lot of these stories is after a while they tend to be cliche, following an obvious route with only a few small variables. This was something different, and certainly enjoyable! Thank you, and I really hope there's going to be a part two :)
NaughtyRedhead
Posted: 2007/7/16 14:28  Updated: 2007/7/16 14:28
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/7/13
From: Southern U.S.
Posts: 59
 OOOH
Wow the writing was so descriptive I could picture this whole scenario in my head...very hot. Eagerly waiting for part 2!!!!
ukfschap
Posted: 2007/7/8 20:26  Updated: 2007/7/8 20:26
Virgin
Joined: 2005/10/27
From:
Posts: 1
 great... for starters..
you could write so much more after a great start like this.
Luv2
Posted: 2007/4/15 11:24  Updated: 2007/4/15 11:24
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/7
From: Luv2... Loves hugging his Jeannie!
Posts: 5308
 Re: "I Dream of Jeannie"
Miro, “If you think this is good than just you wait Mr Grey,” the thought project ion entered my head. Betsy smiled and positioned herself between my legs and licked the head of my apparently massive cock. Shouldn't it be > Then ??? and... How can a cock be apparently massive? T hat cock is either massive like mine? or it's not? :) Just trying to point out a few errors, as you are quick to do. :) And.... Sorry, I didn't care for your story. It took too much time to think . Jim (No. Calif)
Luv2
Posted: 2007/4/15 10:59  Updated: 2007/4/15 10:59
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2007/4/7
From: Luv2... Loves hugging his Jeannie!
Posts: 5308
 GnarlyGirl..... YES !!
Damn.... I thought I was kinky? :( Next time, chain Chris up and let 8 or 10 lusty ladies suck him all over, u ntil he passes out? "It's Showtime!" YEE HAW Thanks for the boner :) Jim (No.Calif)
Eric
Posted: 2006/12/26 23:19  Updated: 2006/12/26 23:19
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/7/24
From: cyberspace
Posts: 2219
 Wow
This really was interesting and it would be great to do a follow up.
tom82
Posted: 2006/12/17 11:55  Updated: 2006/12/17 11:55
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/6/22
From: London, UK
Posts: 370
 nice
lets follwe them home, please!! im begging you....... great sexy story hun
cabinboy
Posted: 2006/11/22 2:01  Updated: 2006/11/22 2:01
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/1/21
From: Great Britain
Posts: 4521
 hot and nice
well written,
gnarlygirl
Posted: 2006/10/16 16:22  Updated: 2006/10/16 16:22
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/9/22
From: Florida
Posts: 96
 Re: Not a good erotic writer...
Well maybe I will continue with him later on. I was thinking on writing a part two with the two ladies, and just hasn't got around to it yet. Huggssssss and Kisses.
gnarlygirl
Posted: 2006/10/16 16:21  Updated: 2006/10/16 16:21
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/9/22
From: Florida
Posts: 96
 Re: "I Dream of Jeannie"
Thanks I missed that. I relay heavily on spellchecker. I have dyslexia and when I'm writing I don't think about grammer, just trying to get the action in my head down. I do go back afterwards and try to read carefully. I guess that's where it's always good to have another party read before submitting they might catch something you missed. Huggsssssss to you.
Miro
Posted: 2006/10/16 8:51  Updated: 2006/10/16 8:51
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/3/23
From: The Netherworld
Posts: 585
 "I Dream of Jeannie"
Nice story and I know if it was me I would like some feedback I could use so here goes ... a couple of things that you might wanna change due to grammar...What's a dinging door? Hinging door perhaps? Nodded no? How on earth do you do that? Shake your head no, nod your head yes. Other than that it was quite well written, sexy and a bit disturbing (which was the point of course;D) so you should definitely continue as Romano Giovanni suggested. Keep it up!
Romano Giovanni
Posted: 2006/10/15 23:22  Updated: 2006/10/15 23:22
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/13
From: I travel a lot.
Posts: 17
 Re: Not a good erotic writer...
I am not that good of an erotic writer. It's just not my genre. I've dabbled, but it jsut starts to feel silly as I read what I'm writing. It's strange because I can read the same thing from someone else and be turned on by it, but if I wrote it, it just seems silly to me!
gnarlygirl
Posted: 2006/10/15 21:39  Updated: 2006/10/15 21:39
Bookworm
Joined: 2006/9/22
From: Florida
Posts: 96
 Re: You need to make this into a serial!
Huggsssssssss you can write me a nick steele story to add to my collection and show me how it's done.
Romano Giovanni
Posted: 2006/10/15 20:32  Updated: 2006/10/15 20:32
Virgin
Joined: 2006/10/13
From: I travel a lot.
Posts: 17
 You need to make this into a serial!
From the beginning with the I Dream Of Genie costume to the amazing scene down the private driveway, and the sexually charged orgy in the basement complete with dungeon chains and black satin sheets, this story had me at the edge of my seat reading, searching, begging for more! If I wasn't on the visible side of the library I think I'd have cum twice by the time that one was over! On top of the quality of the material, you have easily set yourself up for further adventures of Nick Steele and his interesting array of employees and associates. I really do hope that you make this into a serial! On a critical note, I have noticed that your stories tend to have the same or very similar simile and metaphore in them ie: tongues dueling, to cite just one example. I know that happens because it happnes to me, but it brings a sort of repitition that I personally try to avoid...though often with limited success. It still works though, because each story stands on its own and isn't really affected by the others unless they are all read soon after each other. I liked it a LOT! Several stars for you...like 20!
brad
Posted: 2006/10/5 8:03  Updated: 2006/10/5 8:03
Lusty Librarian's Pet
Joined: 2006/4/29
From:
Posts: 193
 nice
more more more but very nice